~neiliya drabble series: you were never the plan~ (the video problem)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART ONE - the video problem

(based on March 6th episode)

*aalu fights with neil for interrupting her plan*

*after some unsettling moments of being in his arms and wriggling against him, she slaps him, yells at him, etc*

*finally she gets away...fumes about her ruined holi...thinks about her dream boy, and how she can edit the video to show him that they are meant to be...*

*goes to pick up her camera...wants to check the video...*

*BUT SADLY*

*the battery was dead...the memory card was overloaded...technical problems happened and there IS NO RECORDING, only a useless camera*

*aalu throws camera against the wall and cries*

*aalu tries not to remember someone's strong arms around her, trying to dream instead of her hands wandering someone else's soft face*

*aalu is a mixed up mess and thinks if only she had someone she could go to for advice...like a friend, or a sister, or a bhabhi...*

*aalu is sad*

TO BE CONTINUED

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renukha871 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Uff, Mina! You hit me right at the feels😭. Loved it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: renukha871

Uff, Mina! You hit me right at the feels😭. Loved it.




renuuu!!! <333

it will get better for aalu...but there will be more angst and drama for a bit i think!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hawww what the end???

This is torturous!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: SaaraDON

Hawww what the end???

This is torturous!



😕???

i thought it was just a halki se drabble?? almost nothing happens...this is just the beginning XD

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Posted: 10 years ago
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sometimes I feel that the CVs are playing around this couple but a lot of odds are against them ..I for myself love to think there is a possibility of them happening and how lucky we are to have you giving us this possibility ..loved this small first drabble ( delicious starter ) and waiting for more
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -mina-



😕???

i thought it was just a halki se drabble?? almost nothing happens...this is just the beginning XD



I meant 😆

Torturous not in that way...😛...as in waiting for this story to progress?? because Mina has many other commitments?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing Mina only you can put it so nicely. Neiliyah rocking couple.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Mina how could u write such a small drabble and that too about Neiliya.
Edit it na make it to be continued
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice drabble mina
Neiliya jodi sounds good...

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