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aashritha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Awesome mina waiting for the next update

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sudanindia2014

@sudanindia2014

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: kubare
Mina Mina Mina...
Love Love Love Love It!!!!👏

Whats the first thing I see when I come here...your new SS...on the Trio...Love the Trio and anything that makes Abhi burn with jealousy I am all for it...😆 "Burn Baby Burn" that song always plays in my mind for him when I see him jealous 😆

The teaser is wow wow wow..and its the next part not fair...

Ok stopping my ramblings...

Coming to what I loved...Pragya Aliyah bonding...one can only hope to see this in the show...as it doesn't seem possible with the lousy CV's we have with no imagination or creativity..but wait...they love stealing from you...so maybe...😉😆

Aliyah getting her ready...giving her her mothers Heirlooms to wear...just beautiful...

AND

Raghav...sigh..."What a Man..What a Man..What a Mighty Good Man"...this says it all...hes a Dream...

So get posting the Second part soon dear...By soon one means in a day or two...not months..😆

Hi Krishna .. I wanted to comment about this point too. I liked it so much, but sort of sidetracked by Abhi and his coming painful experience ... well you said it .I noticed that we have the same thoughts sometimes but you always express them better ... thanks for putting my thoughts into words 😃
and thanks mina for giving us what we hope for but always denied by the CVs..😃

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nitarata

@nitarata

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Since I had more or less read until here before- I can't wait for what happens next!!

But what I loved the most about this was Aaliyah and Pragya's bonding. How lovely it would be to see the three ladies of Abhi's life happy and understanding together (I am thinking Daadi and Aaliyah are okay too here).

I loved that dress you made her wear!!

I don't know anything about the character Raghav but I want to see Raghav Abhi dynamics more in the coming update.

Tannu! Please tell me she is insignificant...

I hope Raghav says something mean to Abhi for flaunting his GF while his biwi is here!

But the point is I can't wait for the next update. So please please post soon, Mina..

Thank you.😊

Edited by -Tia- - 10 years ago

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Anny90

@Anny90

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Congratulations for new story mina.. I always wait for your story..kitne twist or turns leke aate ho..

Aah..here aliyah is in positive shade..

She is all helping to her bhabhiji..

First time there is some one

who is actually trying to help her..

Ah..abhi and tanu.. I don't understand wo apni gf ko leke ghumta hai..par yahan Pragya uske friend ke sath hai to he is feeling j..Huh

Raghav is smart man..he will not take one more minute to guess about relation between abhi and Pragya..

Update soon Mina and ish..

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CrazzyBusy

@CrazzyBusy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Hmmm...oh here I go again short of words 😆
Well if I don't say anything then I can surly say it to myself that I would insulted ur beautiful writing piece yaar.
coming to the "The Black Anarkali" (black my evergreen fav color and anything with black I would love to have/ read it😆)
I just loved how you write yaar.
I wish I could write it like you...
Loved the whole Ragav and Pragya convo
especially Aliya and Pragya scene, A wow wala bonding, and you have shown the lovely bhabhi and nanad wala bonding so well. Bhabhi padishan tu fikar not when nanad ho wo bhi Aliya jaise ho tu phir kaisa fikar. Which I always wanted to see in the show, but I am glad you made that come true for me with this SS.
Tanu😡 GET AWAY from Abhi, he ONLY belongs to Pragya, why do you have to be haddi in kabab. Raghav you pleease do something to make Abhi more jelouse. Itna jalao use ke wo jal kar bhun hi jaye anr jalan ke hasad main sara gussa us Tanu pe nikale. and by the time its time for the pary to warp up, Abhi and Pragya leave for home as AbhiGya.
So, at the last all I will say is HURRY UP AND POST SOON.
I just can't wait to see how the jala huwa Abhi reactions, expression that I will imagine as I read ur update.

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WittyFlair

@WittyFlair

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Interesting start! Especially Aliya's and Pragya's bonding...that's a sight to be seen😆

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FhatTheWuck.

@FhatTheWuck.

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Omg need i say anything

But still please post!!!

ALSO SO GLAD EVERYONE LOVES RAGHYA

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@putturani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Mina ji!!! 🤗 (idk why I'm calling you ji here, just felt like it 😆) Another wonderful fic from you! 👏 I love that Pragya has decided to accept that Abhi is not for her, very mature and what we would expect of her, but we know that equation will change soon 😉 But what I loved most of all was that this fic passes the Bechdel test!! My favourite part was Pragya-Aliyah bonding. It seems impossible with the way they're taking things in the show but you've really shown beautifully how it could happen here. And Pragya comfortable smoozing (is that even a word?) at the Ritz gala was a treat to read. Will definitely push her out of the narrow box Abhi has placed her in! So excited to read more, in the chronicles of RaBhiGya, esp RaBhi interaction! 😃