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Love this story yanci, seeing an update of it always makes me happy! Thanks for this chapter, looking forward to movement between AbhiGya.
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CHAPTER 14

Bulbul smile and move closer to him, unaware that her drink was on the edge, and about ready to fall. Just when she was about to say something, her drink spilled making her gasp. Purab hurriedly grab a napkin and help her wipe it off, he asks if she was ok, and she said yes. "I need to use the bathroom really quick, I will be right back." She said, before exciting to the bathroom, purab watching her leave, sat down and scold himself "you could have done better purab, what were you thinking. Now she will probably laugh at you" he said

Elsewhere, we see pragya getting out the car, heading towards abhi door, she was nervous about what she was about to do. She looks at Dave and he reassure her, breathing she continued walking until she reached the door, than she ring the bell. Nervous, she remembered how she got to this point

Flashback


Pragya and Dave were sitting at the park enjoying the weather. She stretched and smile, releasing the stress she had earlier. "This is really nice" she said, making him agree "rani comes here all the time when she misses me, she says this place calms her"

"Really"

Dave nods "yeah, when our parent died I use to work all the time, so I never got the chance to play with her, but when I do get the chance I come and swing her" he said in memory lane, pragya thought about it before remembering the time her and bulbul come to the park. Instead of her defending bulbul from the kids, it was bulbul that helped her out. People sometimes wonder if bulbul was the oldest because she was a protective mother hen. While Dave was ranting, he realize that pragya was in a trance, "are you ok?"

"Y-yeah, just thinking" she said, there was a silent pause before Dave remember something "by the way are you going to tell the father that his expecting soon"

"NO!"

"Why not?"

Pragya pause for words before speaking " we are not in good terms right now, if he finds out that the baby is his, he might take him/her from me." She said before laughing halfheartedly "but then again he might not even believe me after the whole scandal incident", hearing this Dave wonder what pragya meant by scandal, but he never questioned about it.

He look at the children playing before saying "honestly I think you should still tell him, he has the right to know. Even if he has nothing to do with you, it's better for him to find out from you than someone else."

Pragya thought about it, he knew Dave had a point, but she just don't want to confront abhi, she rather prefer him not knowing, so he can stay out of her life, but is that what I really want, she thought, I can't let my child suffer because of my selfishness, NO!, I will tell him. "I decided I will tell abhi" she said determined

End of flashback

Meanwhile, tanu and Aaliyah were ready to go out to eat, when they heard the doorbell. Since no one was going to open Aaliyah told tanu to open while she put her shoes on. Tanu with her dress walk towards the door, wondering who it could be. When she opened the door she was faced with the last person she wanted to see, pragya. "Didn't they banned you form coming here" she said

Pragya ignored her and asked if abhi was home, tanu hearing this glares at her "what do you want with abhi"

"it's none of your business, tanu. Now is abhi home" she said

"Anything that deals with abhi, is my business. I don't want any low class trying to steal money from him again" she said, when she said this pragya chuckle a little "aren't you on the same level as me than, since your beneath abhi. Matter fact, you could have been a great model if you had focused more on your career instead of playing dirty tricks on the rich. The difference between me and you is this, I don't need a man to provide for me when I can do it myself, while you your nothing but a snake, depending on people for your own security"

Tanu was out of words to say, but that didn't stop her from getting angry "you bit-"she never got to finish when Aaliyah came with a bucket of water and dump it on her. Surprised by this pragya gasp, Aaliyah smirked "I agree with you pragya, you are below abhi and me. You already cut all ties with us, especially abhi yet you have the nerve to come here and try to insult Dadi favorite daughter in law" she said

"Dadi daughter in law?" she asked confuse

Tanu an Aaliyah both started laughing before teasing her "you didn't know, tanu is living here now. She's mending Dadi broken heart, the one you damaged"

"n-no...i... didn't mean to heart Dadi" she said before telling them she needs to see Dadi.

"Look at this tanu, she's pleading to see Dadi, I thought she was here for abhi" she said

"Didn't I tell you Aaliyah, she wants attention and someone to feel pity on her? So of course Dadi would be the one she target to be on her side" she said

"THAT'S NOT TRUE!" she screamed

"Oh really than tell us what are you doing here"

When pragya didn't respond they both scuff "let's go tanu, we are wasting our time here", as soon as they turn to leave pragya grab Aaliyah hand begging her to let her speak to abhi and Dadi "let go of me"

"Please Aaliyah, let me see them, it will only be quick"

"I said let go" she said

"Please"

When pragya didn't listen Aaliyah nudge her hand away from hers, a little harder "LET GO!" making pragya stumble back, she would have fallen on the floor if it wasn't for Dave who caught her. Looking up she smiles at him and thank him before he helped her and put his jacket around her. Both girls were surprise to see Dave. What more surprising was the fact that he was helping pragya " are you ok" , they heard him say to her before he look at them.

"It was nice to meet both of you, but we are leaving" he said, not even given them another glance. "Who is he" Aaliyah said

"I don't know, he looks like a movie actor"

"What is someone like him doing with pragya, better yet what is his connection with her" tanu said

"This is not good, if he is helping her. Our revenge will be ruined"

"Your right, what should we do?"

"I don't know, let's just hope abhi doesn't know about this"

While this was going on they were unaware of abhi watching them through the window, he was squeezing his can of soda very hard, making it burst. See, abhi had saw the whole verbal fight with his ex and pragya, he couldn't hear what they were saying, but he knew it was serious, when Aaliyah drenched the water on her, he was about to go down there and help her when he realized what he was doing, so he stopped and decide to watch. What he didn't expect was the same man from before touching pragya and helping her. He felt envy because it should have been him, there helping her, but at the same time felt jealousy towards the man.

"Why can't I let go of these feelings" he said leaving the window "do I still like chashme", abhi still in conflict decides to do some pushups while listening to music. While doing this he saw pragya turning the music of and lecturing him about how loud it is and how she can't pray with it being so loud. He stopped what he was doing and look at her, the way she pouts her lip when he wouldn't listen, the way she fixes her glasses when it's falling of her face, and her waving her hand in front of him, saying his name.

"Abhi...Abhi...are you listening to me" she said waving her hand in front of him

"What now chashme" he said a little annoyed

"I said turn the music of, it's too distracting"

" no its not, your just to boring" he said now getting up

"Abhi I'm serious, I don't understand why you like these sorts of music, and you should pray more" she said now following him. Abhi annoyed turn to face her and puts his and on her shoulder "what are you doing here chashme"

Confuse pragya looks at him "I belong here, are you forgetting we are married"

"No we are not, we are divorced don't you remember. Did a rock hit you in the head chashme" he asked making her angry "no, and we are married, like you wanted it", when she said this abhi stopped to look at her "what do you mean fugly"

"Simple, this is your conscious, and it's telling you that you want me to be here. That you like me and my boringness.", when she said this, abhi denies it, but seeing pragya here now and then arguing like old times, made him start thinking. "Your right, fake pragya, I do miss you and even though you cheated on me, I still want you by my side" he said before adding "I can't do this revenge thing anymore, I have to get you back"

To be continued...

Preview

Scene 1

Tanu and Aliya just walk in the restaurant when tanu saw purab, she nudge Aaliyah to tell her "what" she said, and tanu ignores her attitude and show her purab. She smiles and told the waitress that she won't need a table, because they will sit with their friend. The host hesitate at first but agrees. While she was walking towards him the power light turns off. When she reached the table purab grabs her and ask her if she would marry him. Surprise she said yes and he puts the ring on her finger, when the light came back on he was surprise to see Aliyah, and bulbul standing behind him with a hurt expression.

Scene 2

Abhi is seen buying flowers for pragya, he tries to buy some sarees asking himself what chashme would like, but he couldn't find one. So he stick with some jewelries. When he saw pragya outside her school, he calls her name and gave her the gifts, surprising her, but she turned it down and throw the flowers to the floor.

Scene 3

"Congrats pragya your having a boy" he said, pragya hearing this was so happy that she hug Dave without thinking, they staid hugging until bulbul cleared her voice, making them realize what they were doing " I'm sorry" she said

"Ah...yeah... It's not a problem, but anyway the baby is healthy there's nothing wrong with the pregnancy so far" he said trying to clear the awkwardness

"This is great news Didi" bulbul said giggling

Scene 4

While pragya was home reading, she saw abhi with a banner outside in the rain. She puts her glasses on to read it and huff when she saw it said " I'm sorry, and I miss you" , when abhi saw her watching him, he mouth the words, but stopped when she close her window at him. Bulbul and the rest of the workers fell for his charm, they persist pragya to forgive him, but she refuses

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Posted: 10 years ago
wat a great chaptr dear...luvd the scene where Dave helped pragya nd aliyah nd tanu were shocked seeing him...waiting eagerly fr the further scenes
update soon
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that was amazing
can't wait till abhigya get back together
do continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
its been 3 months...what happen next? Are you going to continue? Please do...😔
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Originally posted by: hutanbandar

its been 3 months...what happen next? Are you going to continue? Please do...😔

im sorry I lost interest in the show long ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Dear Yanci,
Oh, no! I'm very very sorry ... so we did not know what will be the end of this amazing story? 😭 😭 😭 Please, if you have time ... maybe you append this story for us, your loyal readers. You write wonderful, and I dare to hope to read your final composition. Please, please, please 😳 🤗
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Originally posted by: olushka2924

Dear Yanci,
Oh, no! I'm very very sorry ... so we did not know what will be the end of this amazing story? 😭 😭 😭 Please, if you have time ... maybe you append this story for us, your loyal readers. You write wonderful, and I dare to hope to read your final composition. Please, please, please 😳 🤗



Thank you for the comment, but I'm afraid that if I do continue after loosing interest in the show, the connection I have with connecting with the characters will not be the same. It will be different compare to when I first started, I lost the feeling, but your right I do need to end it, but unfortunately where the story is at, the ending won't be sooner. But I will think about it😊
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Wow, Yanci! I like it! COOL! Fine news! Thank You very much!!!!!!

Originally posted by: angelk1




Thank you for the comment, but I'm afraid that if I do continue after loosing interest in the show, the connection I have with connecting with the characters will not be the same. It will be different compare to when I first started, I lost the feeling, but your right I do need to end it, but unfortunately where the story is at, the ending won't be sooner. But I will think about it😊

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CHAPTER 15


Dave watch as pragya sit there, he didn't like it. He wanted to see her smile and chatty instead of quiet. Sighing, he starts the engine, driving away from abhi house. He drove until they reached the mall, before telling her to get out. Pragya turn and look with surprise "why?" She says

"I can't see you like this, so get out"

Slowly she reached for the door, once she was out she took the time to look around her, frowning she turn to him "what are we doing here" dave ignored her and drag her inside, he took her to a shop and look around, when he found some saree , he told the workers to take her to the dressing room. "Dave, what is going on" she says almost in the room.

Dave just smile and said nothing. While waiting he's phone rang, he picked it up and answer " bhai, where are you. You were suppose to be home by now" she says

"Don't worry mom, I will be home before 12 " he says in a playful manner, this made her pout. She told her brother not to call her that, and that she's to young to be a mother. Dave laugh and told her if she don't stop worrying to much she will get old supper fast. While they were busy talking dave did not notice pragya shly stepping out the door, to embarrassed to say anything. The worker cleared their voice getting his attention, before he turn to look.

They giggle when they saw his expression. He walk over to pragya and told her she looks amazing, before showing her to the mirror, he touch her shoulder and whisper something like " the women standing there is a god, what I see within her is a brave, beautiful, kind hearted soul, that always fight for what she believes in" " I see a women that's hardheaded, but never gives up" when he finish , she couldn't help but cry, finally letting everything out that she was holding in.

Dave let her cry on him. Some people stop to ask if everything was fine, and dave ressures them that it was. After her little breakdown, she asks him why he was her friend. And he told her it was a secret he will tell her next time. They walk to the cashier to pay when some people came up to them saying things like "your such a good husband" and "and are you newly wed" they both look at one another before denying it. Once they left they started laughing.

Just when they were about to get in dave car, they were cornerd by paparazzi flashing their camera in there face. They started asking pragya question like if that's her new husband, or if she's cheating with abhi. Pragya was becoming overwhelmed, one of them accidently push end her while the crowd of people were squeezing in to ask questions. Dave quickly caught her and took her in the car. Then he drove away, when they reached a light he sadly apologized to her , but she told him it wasn't his fault.

Still he felt bad, when she saw this she asked him where they were going next, and he told her they were going on a friendly date.

Meanwhile, Aaliya and tanu reached the restaurant. They were about to ask for a seat when tanu noticed purab," Aaliya" she says trying to get her friend attention, who was busy on the phone arguing with someone. Aaliya told her to wait cause she's busy, but tanu insist, "this better be important tanu, or else you will not see a good side of me" tanu roll her eyes before telling her since when were there ever a good side.

"You forgetting I could tell abhi everything" she says
" same here, you are no different from me" she replied
Aaliya stared at her for a while before asking her,what she wanted. Tanu ignored her rude tone, and showed her purab, this made her smile, but that was quickly gone, when she saw bulbul. She told the waitress that she doesn't need a table anymore because her boyfriend was over there. The host hesitate at first before agreeing.

While they wait for the waitress to come purab got up to check on something, tanu saw how nervous he was, so she told aaliya that she will be back. She followed purab, but stop when she heart him, talk to someone. He was telling the manager that he wants them to bring flowers before he propose to bulbul, so she would be surprise. This shock tanu, she left the area thinking of a way to stop this from happening, suddenly she got on idea.

Elsewhere, when purub arrives he waited for bulbul to come after leaving to the bathroom. Aaliya seeing purab starts to walk towards him unaware of bulbul coming. Purab seeing bulbul, prepare himself, he grab his ring and got down, as soon as he did the lights turned of. He heard heels walking towards him and smile, thinking its bulbul. " ever since I et you I knew you were the one. The one I want to be with forever , even in the after life. Will you do me the honor as to make me the happiest man alive" he says opening the ring " will you marry me b-" as soon as the light came on he was surprise to see aaliyah

Out of habit he said her name, making her happy. " of course I will marry you purab" she says supper loud, the people around them quickly started clapping, happy for the couple, while purab calls bulbul, telling her to wait. While this was happening they were unaware of people video tapping and posting it on social media after finding out who they were. Tanu smirk in the corner happy that she ruined their plan.

Meanwhile, dave stop and park in front of the theater, pragya asks what were they doing Here, and he told her they were going to watch chaiyna express ( sorry if I spelled it wrong), she watch as he took her inside and paid for the tickets. He bought food and they walk in the room. They sat their watching the movie, when it came to the part where sharukhan was on the train trying to ascape the big guys she started giggling. When dave heard it, he smile , he couldn't help but notice how pretty she looks smiling.

Everything was OK until the part where he had to prove that he loves her showed. She watch as he walk up the stairs with the girl carrying her. While watching it she sadly stares at it thinking about abhi. Dave seeing this told her that a man does not need to prove anything to a girl, words is enough. This brought up a heated argument, pragya told him, words is nothing, if you can't back it up. This made the females in the audience agree, dave says why are we the one tthat have to prove our loyalty and love. What about the girls, the boy obviously likes her, she knows it, but she's playing hard to get. He says standing up, the guys agree making their girlfriend disagree.

"What nonsense,dave, that is not playing hard to get. She's obviously clueless about his feelings. You guys are just to stuborn and embarrassed to admit you like a particular girl. It takes us girls to make you guys admit it." She says standing up

" that's not true" he says smiling in the inside, pragya told him to prove it, the audience were quiet waiting for dave to make a com back, they waited and waited until finally dave walk to her and hug her then he told her he likes her. Everyone aawed, while pragya was surprise once the hug was over he says " I like you a lot, as a friend" this made everyone quiet, before laughing😆 for being fooled by dave.

He lean and whispered " I know that's what you want abhi to say to you. And since he's not here you have to accept what ever I say" he says unaware of pragya blush😳. She asks him what it was , and he told her she will have to play hard to get, to win abhi back. This surprised her and dave just stood there smiling, after all this was part of his plan in the first place.

To be continued...

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