AbhiGya FF - Ode to Balaji Telefilms Melodrama! Completed Pg 9 (5 Aug)

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@rbb1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

aww this is great I liked how Abhi is taking care of Pragya, it's nice that both dadi's convinced Sarla and Bulbul to lets Pragya stay with Abhi

so Pragya still loves Suresh let's hope she forgets Suresh soon it will be good

I wonder what will happen when she gains her memory

I think Tanu is going to get Abhi to start to think about his relationship with Pragya

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@rbb1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

ok I know I am being greedy but when can we except the next update

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Mina

@-mina-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Ohhh my god "if her life depended on it!" well you know what my life depends on now? More of this fantastic story, and soon! I know you just updated but Omg aafrah my love I cannot wait! And I see that you are sarcastically calling this an ode to EK's brand of torture but I have to tell you, in your hands the melodrama transcend its sordid provenance and becomes something beautiful. I'm truly loving this story, thank you sooo much!!!

One point about this chapter - WHAT is that witch still doing around the house! But Ohh if she gets Abhi thinking about making a move on Pragya I could almost be glad she is there 😆. And uff I hope pragya has the strength to deal with all the earth shattering pain coming her way...you can do that for us right, give us a fierce heroine beyond the Balaji mold?? well I shall trust you and wait with heavy impatience ok!!!

Thanks again aafrah! Big hugs!

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Lasya

@Dexterity

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

My my my...

Offo Aafrah...this was a FANTASTIC piece of writing...

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Aafrah Khan Ahluwalia

@Aafrah-SA

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: -mina-
Ohhh my god "if her life depended on it!" well you know what my life depends on now? More of this fantastic story, and soon! I know you just updated but Omg aafrah my love I cannot wait! And I see that you are sarcastically calling this an ode to EK's brand of torture but I have to tell you, in your hands the melodrama transcend its sordid provenance and becomes something beautiful. I'm truly loving this story, thank you sooo much!!!
One point about this chapter - WHAT is that witch still doing around the house! But Ohh if she gets Abhi thinking about making a move on Pragya I could almost be glad she is there 😆. And uff I hope pragya has the strength to deal with all the earth shattering pain coming her way...you can do that for us right, give us a fierce heroine beyond the Balaji mold?? well I shall trust you and wait with heavy impatience ok!!!

Thanks again aafrah! Big hugs!

Aww Mina such a sweet comment!!! and it is a big compliment to receive when you're told you made EK's gibberish storyline seem interesting! hehe

I will be updating soon!

Big hug to you too!😳

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indi

@indi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

@ aafrah ... Congratulations on reaching your 100th 🤗... by now it's much more 😉!!!!

Thank you, afraah!!! Reached late .. but had the enjoyment of reading all three chapters in one go!!! And what a story ...👍🏼... think you have outdone yourself with this one! It's beautiful ... love it!!! Starting with Abhi's shock, his fears - imagine him praying, his care for the family... for Pragya, his remorse... and he discovering Tanu's true nature ... I'm loving him!!! Oh, how I wish we could see some of these emotions!!!!

I'm waiting for more!!!

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1012277

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Very interesting.. Loving it.. Please continue soon.. 😊

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Ravina

@Ravinanaik

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

wowww...
amezing story..
beautifully wriitten ...
loved it...

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sarra

@sara7iris

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Posted: 10 years ago

#29

first I must tell you Congratulations on reaching your 100th ... wow wow and wow I read the three chapter at the same time it's really wonderful and captivating in each sentence and chapter...there was different emotion from abhi, afraid ,shock , taking care of pragya and the family , finally remorseful...I looked forward to read more ...pls update soon ...thank you for the pm 🤗