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Posted: 10 years ago
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It's really interesting
Thanks for the update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome update. Abhi broke up with tanu one good thing happened. Aliya is still arrogant, even after pragya told her off. Thank you. Please continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awsome update
go for it pragya..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
Hai ur story is nice. I like the cold attitude of pragya.Pls update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I loved it totally.Pragya's attitude was bang on.hope to see such scenes in show too.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: lourel24

I loved it totally.Pragya's attitude was bang on.hope to see such scenes in show too.

let's hope we get to see her like that in the show
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aww missed reading your update today
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Great update as always. 👍🏼
Let's see what Abhi wiill do now :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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tht was veryyy well written and so damn good lol
keep it up, im glad for once Pragya stood for herself in a jhansi ki rani mode and omg Aaliya poor u, if only u knew the power of curse >.<

Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 5

When Pragya reached college,she could not concentrate on her work.. A shocked teary eyed face of a certain someone flashed continously in her mind...

But Pragya wanted to shut her mind and carry on her work.. She love him.. She is also sure that she ll love him till her death... But trust is the most important thing for love.. She would ve silently took on everything he throw at her if only he trusted her... If only...

On the other side of the city a man sitting in his closed room and thinking about what his wife said in the morning... His silent tears flowing continuously... He doesn't come out when Aaliya knocked his door "to talk" neither Daadi...

He wanted to be alone... May be he is deserved to be alone not just now may be for the rest of his life... He was shocked to hear that his chashmish was full prepared for the divorce even she knows about the conditions to apply for divorce... It pained him to see her standing up for herself in front of the family where he stood watching her silently...When all she did was good for them..
All she thought about was for the well being of the family...

Hereafter he ll be there for her he vowed to himself...

Abhi couldn't beleive his luck for realising his love when she is planning for seperation... But he is Rockstar Abhi he ll try and mend his relationship... He ll even beg for second chance... The Idea of begging doesn't look bad if he get a second chance with his chashmish...

And he thought about what he heard in Tannu's apartment two days before...

Flashback

Abhi was not in a good mood since the MMs fiasco.. Once it was over all his thoughts were surrounded by his chasmish.. He felt like he is disloyal to Tannu.. But his sane part reminded him that Chashmish is his wife and nothing is wrong in thinking about her...

Even his heart agreed to that.. And he felt really happy in thinking about Chashmish... But he forced himself to think about Tannu. But the moments spent with Tannu felt like a long lost memories... It was haze and unclear... Whenever he close his eyes all he could remember was his Chashmish crying and begging to trust her...

He decided to go to Tannu's place.. When he reached there he heard the Phone conversation of Tannu... The phone was kept in a speaker mode and she was busy rambling to someone and applying nail polish...
When he heard the word behenji.. He stopped to listen some more... What he heard next was something he never dreamt of even in his wild dreams...

She rambled about exchanging Purab's letter,calling Pragya's mother,taking the evidence from Chashmish,cheated on Karwa chauth,added spice on Chashmish sargi... And final nail on the coffin sending the MMs to Daadi...

Abhi left the place without a trace... He went to the place where no one recognized him and sat for a long time... He doesn't know when tears started pouring out from his eyes.. He couldn't beleive that his little sister and the one he loved did this to him...

He couldn't beleive Chashmish handled everything behind his back without anyone's support... And without a word...

That day he cried for his chasmish,his wife..

That day he realised he genuinly cared for his pragya,his Chashmish...

Flashback ends.

He avoided Aaliya for the past two days because he was scared that in his anger he could say something that he regret afterwards... He has soo much in his plate to regret for lifetime he doesn't want to add his list...

Abhi realised he needed someone like his Chashmish in his life to hold him on the ground when he was flying high..To make him understand the Right and Wrong..

He wanted his wife in his life...

And he ll make sure she stays...

Abhi saw the time and saw its nearly time to pick his Chashmish... He doesn't know for how long
he is sitting in his room... He got ready and went down...

Aaliya who is talking on the phone with someone saw her bhai and came towards him..

Aaliya not now... Abhi told Aaliya and went out...

When he reached the college everone was started coming out he doesn't know whether chashmish left or still inside the college.. He took out his phone to call her already knowing that it ll be unanswered.. But he is not going to leave a single chance to get her back...

When the first time the call was unanswered... He dialled and looked out... And he saw her coming out and left with bulbul who is waiting in her two wheeler...
Abhi followed them and saw them going to Arora house... He doesn't want to go there immedietly ... He thought of going somewhere and come and pick her up after some time.. In front of her Mom and Daadi she ll not be able to deny coming with him...He reversed his car and didn't notice someone peeking from the Arora house...

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