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ABIGHYA OS :

Part 1 Page 1
Part 2 Page 2
Part 3 Page 3
Part 4 Page 4
Part 5 page 7
Part 6 page 8
Last part Page 9



Part 1
She was standing near the window staring at the rain oblivious about her surroundings.. Where her life had led her to she thought herself..

Married for her mother's happiness..

Took the blame to save her sister...

Pretend happily married for his daadi...

Took his accusation ,

Beared the insults of his sister,

taunts of his girlfriend...

All this for what...

Just to get accused for infidelity... That too with the man who rejected her for her baby sister... She laughed mirthlessly to herself...

When did making everyone around her happy became crime...

Why should she get all the punishments for no fault of hers...

When ll she be happy in her life with someone who accept her just for her not because she is dumped on him...

When ll she get her fair share of happiness in her life...

When ll her life become less complicated...

When ll her pretense end...

When ll she get someone who cherish her,love her,protect her for what she is...

Her questions were never ending just like her tears which now mixed with rain...

She came out of her world when someone cleared their throat , without turning back she knows
who is standing behind her...

She turned and left for the dressing room without looking at him...

Abhi left a sigh looking at the closed door...

Its been a week since she cleared his accusation of her infidelity and cleared the air ...

But its also been a week since she spoke with him ,looked at him .

He don't get to hear her voice neither her bajjans in the morning, her hand made coffee, he don't even get to look at her she never stay in the same room as him...

He wanted these to happen...He wanted her to stay away from him. But now its happening he feel like someone is banging on his heart with a hammer...

He knows that he is wrong for accusing her but he didnt know how to react after seeing the mms... He reacted first and thought about it next as always...

He didn't think she can do these behind his back... But that time his mind did not think about anything...

He asked for forgiveness and he is granted one... only if you call it as forgiveness...

Flashback:

A : I am sorry chashmish .. I didn't know it was all planned.. I am really sorry...
Pragya didn't move nor raise her eyes towards him...

P : ok ... and she left towards bathroom.

Then nothing was okay... NOTHING...

She stopped talking with him.Stopped touching his things. If daadi was not there she preferred to stay in the lawn than in the house... She comes to the room only for sleeping that too in the balcony... If its raining then in the sofa never in the bed...

Flashback ends.

She came from the dressing room and went straight to the sofa to sleep,she pulled the comforter till her head and turned to the opposite side and slept...

Abhi sat in the bed looking at her and praying to the god he never beleived in for new dawn and a mirale...Only if he knows...




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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing os loved it. Great that Pragya started ignoring him much needed for him to realize her worth. Hope similar thing happens in show also.
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really good OS I really hope she does that it will be good, he will know how much she is hurt because he didn't trust her
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Lovely OS.. Very beautifully written.. :)
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Beautiful!!!! Loved it! Wish Pragya would act that way!!!!

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wow awesome start!! really love the way you have described pragya's pain and disappointment. interesting that abhi is feeling bad too. hope this isn't just a one shot, would love to see what happens next!
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lovely story!! hope Pragya stands up for herself in show also!!
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Great os. Pragya avioding is great. He need to learn a lesson.
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Awesome!!! Great work!!!👍🏼
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Thank you all for the response...



Part 2

The next day Abhi got up to an empty room...

Its was past 8'o clock... His eyes scanned the room for his chashmish even his mind knows that he ll not find her,his heart wanted to ve a glimpse of her..
He doesn't know when it became a habit for him to see her face first thing in the morning..

He pretended that he doesn't like to see her in the morning even taunt her for showing her face... But now he is yearning to get a glimpse of her.. Why he doesn't know...

He shouted for Robin to get his coffee,thinking she may come with a coffee to show his daadi... But to his disappointment Robin came with a coffee and kept it in the table and went off..

Abhi got ready for the day and went down to ve his breakfast... Daadi was sitting with other daadis...Everyone already had breakfast so he sat alone looking around for her... Even after finishing the breakfast he couldn't find her... Some creepy feeling crept in his heart...

He thought of going to the office to keep his mind off from the mess he himself created.. So he said his good bye to daadi stating that he ll not come for lunch still looking around for her...

Daadi : haan okay abhi... While coming pick up Pragya and come..
What Daadi said caught his attention...

Abhi : What ?? Kahaan se daadi...

Daadi : Arrey Abhi.did you forget Pragya has re joined in the college she was working before marriage...

He was shocked that she didn't bother to tell him that..

Abhi did not know anything about it but still he doesn't want to create a doubt on daadi's mind he said "woh... She told me yesterday but i thought its from next week and smiled sheepishly...

Daadi : tu bhi na abhi... tumhaara dhyaan kahaan hein...

Abhi : Tk daadi... I ll pick her up in the evening...

Abhi thought its a nice excuse to talk with her...

In the evening Abhi came even before the time and was waiting in his car...

He sent an SMS stating the same to Pragya...

Whole day in the office he was thinking about his life after marriage...

Married her because aliya thought chashmish is in love with Purab...

And it turn out to be false..

Thought she is behind the money...

It is also not true... In these months he knew her that much...

Then the mms with suresh...

Out of all the people he must ve known that she is not that type of girl...

But his logical mind got shut down after seeing the MMS.

He doesn't know why he felt that much angry after seeing her in the arms of that double battery..

He went to the double battery's place to beat him..

Is he jealous of that Double battery..

Jealousy ll come only if he cares about the person...

But he was never jealous towards others Tannu associated with.. Tannu always hugs and kiss the cheeks of other men as greeting...

Then why was he angry towards double battery...

Did he care about Chashmish...

Nah... May be because of daadi ,yes .. right...

If daadi sees then she ll be angry.. that's y i was angry... He concluded..

She is bearing everything he and his sister throws at her.. Why? because her mother is ill...

What if her mother is not ill,will she bear it...

She would ve gone to her mother's place...

Abhi doesn't know why his heart is paining with the thought of her going away from him...

He doesn't want to think more in to it..
Because the answers scared him...

He got ready to pick her up from the college and ask for forgiveness once again...

When you doesn't care about her then why is her forgiveness is important his heart questioned him...

But he pushed the voice down.. And left for the college and now waiting way before the time...

He saw the students coming out from the campus... He was looking keenly for chashmish...

After few minutes she came out and straight away went and stood near the bus stop...

Abhi was looking at her and without realising what he is doing, he got down from his car and moved towards the bus stop...

But before he could reach the bus stop his fans came and surrounded him and started asking for autographs and selfies...

He did everything with a smile but with his eyes towards his chashmish but find her not looking at his direction even after this commotion...

He moved towards the bus stop to find her gone... He looked around for her but didn't find her anywhere...

He moved towards his car and left for his
home...

When he was near his house he saw her getting down from the bus and moving towards his house...

He went inside the house and waited till she come and got down from the car.. Even then she didnt turn towards him..

They both enter the house as if they are coming together..Which gained few raised eyebrows and few snorts..

But he didn't care from the looks of it even she didn't care not anymore...

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