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-Nimmy-

@-Nimmy-

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#111

finally finally finally finally finally finally finally finally finally finally finally finally

ufff... 45 days late

and i don't mean to complain but on which corner of the planet is it still 14 feb😆

but di you did exactly what i told you to

made it worth the wait

eeks nimmy can't find words to appreciate you

ok i will come back once my mind is not flying and settles down to do some human work

Edited by HARNIM - 10 years ago

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Aafrah Khan Ahluwalia

@Aafrah-SA

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#112

RES!

To see a HookUp completion update, just 4 mins after it is put up, but not having the time ti even RES it - it is pure torture!

Work pressure at its peak! May take a few days to read it - I WILL NOT HURRY THROUGH THIS ONE - CANNOT

I need to read every line myltiple times to savour it!

So RES'd until I get the time!!

Life is so not fair!! HMPH.

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Nilmi

@nilmi

Rocker

+ 11

Posted: 10 years ago

#113

Awesome... long long update...too hot...☺️😉

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@putturani

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#114

RES!! Mina, I was about to have a lazy Sunday but when I saw you updated Hookup I HAD to jump out of bed and start reading it!

UN RES! Okay first things first lady, take a frikkin bow! Not just for the fic, which was fantastic but I'll get to that, but for the sheer amount of hard work and persistence it took to get here. If you're anything like me (which I think you are a little) it's so hard to persist with one thing when so many ideas are floating around in your head but here we are! 👏👏

Now on to the fic. I'm intrigued by the direction it's going in. So they're going to be "friends with benefits" now, are they? Let's see how this works out for them. 😆 Every FWB situation I've ever seen has either ended up in love or tears and I think I know how this one might 😉 I'm excited that you said the rest is going to be very banter-filled because I'm excited to see their feelings develop through intelligent banter - so hot!

Morning After:

Loved Pragya's reaction! She's just so happy with what happened, I found that cute. 😃

Hahaha that part about the old wives tale was so weird and funny

I also like that the writing style was half your usual fic style and half your drabble style (for the SMSes)

And these lines were just hilarious:

"10:52 AM My boyfriend was very hot so he was a stud. And he was sweet like a muffin."

"2:23 PM Round two isn't really necessary. I got what I wanted."

"10:36PM ...It's your job to make that happen."

🤣🤣 Loving Sassy!Prags

I really also like how you described Pragya's feelings about shedding (not losing) her virginity. You change from the usual narrative of loss to something more empowering.

I also liked Pragya's prediction of how BB would react - "in no time she would've worked herself into a hysterical fit, convinced that Abhi had somehow taken advantage of her Di again." 🤣 So Bulbul, and so me! Bulbul's got her mother's genes sometimes. And I know I would have reacted like this if I were in her place. 😳

And she also didn't really want to talk about that night. It just...meant too much. Even to Bulbul, she couldn't put everything about her incredible experience into words. - YES! Good. How do you explain that, esp to little sisters?

And ooh ominous looks like Prags is leaving Mumbai soon. But knowing you, you will have him follow her there rather than Pragya stay behind. 😆

I also liked the entire bit when you explore Pragya's trust in Abhi and how she finds it so easy to be with him because he has no stake anymore. On point!

"The combination of passion and tenderness was new for him, and he found it surprisingly to his taste. And to think that he'd found complete satisfaction with Chashmish, who'd had no experience and no skill - he almost couldn't believe it."

😳😃

But stupid Abhi STILL thinks all he can offer is no-strings-attached sex - yeah right! Looking forward to seeing THAT explode in their faces.😆 Already Abhi is feeling wayy too much affection towards her.

The sex was hot, hot hot! Especially when he is fingering her and she is more gratified by his reaction to her than his actual actions. 😳 And when he tries to get her to say exactly what she wants! Haaayyee ☺️ Everything is already screaming that they mean more to each other than they'd each like to admit.

But what I really loved was that passage towards the end when Pragya seriously considers whether she should go ahead with him. You outlined all the considerations she should have (and us readers have too) and then dealt with them so convincingly - "for once things would be equal between them".

Well done Minaji! *bows*

Edited by putturani - 10 years ago

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1012277

Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

#115

res!!

Let me res, or else I would keep on procrastinating to read this.. 😆

Unres!

Mina, only finished reading part 1.. part 2 I'll read it tomorrow..😆

It was so hot!! ☺️ Some lines, were really too too good.. 👍🏼 Very well written.. Awesome!! 😃

And that not-ramdayal!! 😆

Edited by apple123flower - 10 years ago

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Krishna

@kubare

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#116

Mina Mina Mina!!!!!

You updated at last...Yeah...!!!!

And

What an Update ...sigh...

It was Mind blowingly awesome...outstandingly brilliant...and why wouldn't it be coming from you ...it was Perfection at it best...Beyond Excellence...👏

Loved it !!! Loved It!!!! Loved it!!!

You made up for the Long Delay...with such a lovely long update...😆

Loved how sh found comfort in him when he was the cause of all that was uncomfortable before...loved their pillow fight..her thoughts his so them...and still strangers in a way...

Loved them both wanting more ...Pragya's cautiousness his persuasion...on continuing with their Round 2 in Mumbai...

Ok loved loved loved their texting to one another...so today..and loved it...You at last used what you always wanted to see them using modern devices and today's stuff in their life and you done it and it was just so them and cute and Abhigya...

Loved her evading the truth from Bulbul...her evading or trying to ignore him but can't..due to the need...want ...curiosity and connection...

Her wanting to keep that part of herself to herself private...

Loved her feeling like a teenager...

Loved his wanting her and his persuasive tricks...😆

Loved the apartment and for going of the tour...

Loved his wanting to make it more habitable for her ...

Loved it all,...and how he knows how to reel her in and she knows that she needs to put a time limit...evasion of her looking for an other job outside Mumbai...

Her cautiousness after all that she had been trough and seeing the justice in it all too...

Best of all loved how the old and the new are still the same...this time with no outside pressure or ppl

They always had chemistry and some feelings towards each other but none acted upon it for obvious reasons...and now ...nothings stopping them to explore...in the name of Fun...Experiments...Practice...No Strings attached Great S*x...without both even looking into why they want to have it together...😆Did I make any sense ...😆😆

Till the next update dear...😃

Take your time as we do seem to get a treat...

P.S...Loved him going to check for blood on the sheet...😆

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nitarata

@nitarata

Achiever

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#117

Okay Mina,

Now HookUpDate!!! Finally here! Some of it, at least. Why do you talk of months and months to update? : - (. I am too impatient and this story makes me all the more so.

I wished they had all the time in the world that morning after. But really liked Abhi checking her msgs, saving numbers etc. It was never gonna be a mere hookup for him!!

Text exchange was cute. Why is it taking Abhi so long to come up with a new name for her (a bedroom one?).. guessing what he will come up with ultimately.

Abhi's apartment stuff was very nice to read (and needless to say super hot too). I liked how Abhi seemed to be in thoughts of building their nest and even thinking of everything long term.

Pragya's dilemma over whether or not to continue this was understandable.

What surprised me was Pragya's reaction to the whole thing. I understand that she finally wanted to let go of her virginity and ended up with the man she was once attracted to but then the same had hurt her too. I thought she might have major emotional issues after that night. She seemed more calm and composed than I thought. Or is it that she doesn't want to deal with that and just wants to go on with what seems like a dream/escape, which she doesn't think could ever be real?

PS: I love how you write smut scenes! So realistic as well as dreamy.

I can't wait for more. I hope it's not too long really.

Or else, I really have to start with my aandolan!

Thank you Mina.

Edited by -Tia- - 10 years ago

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columbia

@columbia

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#118

K I read it!

Frankly I am a little dissap I won't lie I was hoping for more but it seems like not much happened other than another night and what may now be an official hookup scene

I was hoping we could see abhi slightly falling for her or something

Anyways I guess that's the plan??? But then won't know until you update which am hoping will be this century

And can I just say no one no one has a patch over your writing powress when it comes to the ahem! Scenes

I mean it NO oNe!!

Wonderful writing

But the story needs to move ASAP!