The Hookup | in progress | an AbhiGya FF by mina - Page 11

WOHOO!!!! PART 2A Done!!!!

I'm so happy !!!!
I'm not regretting to have wait for a loong time :)
Really you made my day Mina

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First let me talk about abhi shooing away Mr.F...lol I was smiling at his restlessness when pragya was flirting with him..

Reading prabul conversation ..so much like curious abhi..

Abhi in disbelief ..lol like him I took sometime to get into this pragya ..

I liked the way you wrote pragya boldness and abhi being gentle..

There was fun along with hotness...

Totally perfect part 1 !!

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Lol it was a long wait..

I loved the text messages you mentioned along with the time..
I felt the messages were matured..

I like the prabul relationship you depicted..thank god she hid things from bilbul unlike the show 😆

The apartment you described was v much easy to imagine and I loved the way U showed abhigya..

Frankly the sex part was good but I felt the part 1 more awsoem ..( not that I don't like it..I love it but the first one was awsoem)

I would lov to see how U take the story further..

OH EM GEEE!!! YOU DO NOT KNOW HOW HAPPY I WAS WHEN I SAW YOU HAD UPDATED, YOU HAD ME DANCING IN MY KITCHEN!!

I absolutely loved this update! Pragyas debate as to whether to meet him was nice to read and Abhi was again just plain amazing! The conversation was lovely to read, the whole thing had a smile on my face Mina! The second round was hot I have to say! You are doing great with this story and I can't explain how I love this any more to be honest! Thanks once again for updating! Take your time and post when you can! <3

OMG!! Thanks for such a lovely update Mina dear. Pls update soon.

OMG! Mina!

Mina .It worth the wait ..😊

Mina mina thank you you are awesome
WOW amazing and very hot update ... it deserve all this wainting ...yu have done a very good job ...
the first part was fab when you describe pragya dilemma and hesitation you have used so much detail to such an extent we can understand and feel her emotion in this moment
pragya and BB convo ws nice and lovely we see the BB was really concerned for pragya future( stay alone forever) and also I like the relation between pragya and BB they are sister but also friend ...
this abhi I like him he go to the appartement to see if something missing he didn't want something wrong happen when he was with pragya ...this part was perfect what abhi what to have not just round two but he want more fun and have a lot of round after that ...perfect emotion and situation you have describre here Mina

part 2 OMG HOT and really hot with so much detail you have take us to imagine each situation and each touch OMG MINA bravo this is perfect ...abhi want to do everything to satisfy her hunger ,curiosity, and need about s..x and he have won the challenge

part 3 abhi was really curiose to know why pragya want to do hookup because for him she is not the pragya he has know before...I like here because you show us that abhi didn't want just hookup with her but he want to know her live and also when she talk about BB she is no more his fan ...fab Mina
hahaha pragya accept his offert and know she put rule for his hookup with him ...
Mina awesome your story was unique ,perfect ...also thank you for the pm