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Kruths97

@Kruths97

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Beautifully written!👏

The way you built the scene and Abhigya convo was just perfect! x

Loved it🤗

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indi

@indi

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Thanks, Mina!!!! Loved Pragya's boldness ... from turning away from a shirtless Abhi to making suggestions now ... shocking poor Abhi 😆!!! It was awesome!!!! Poor guy even thinking of bolstering his energy 😃!!!!

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JazzyM

@JazzyM

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

MINA! Lovely MINA!

I'm blown over...Straight forward, well crafted work. You have described the raw sexuality in a manner that is so pure that all of us can relate to it and feel awesome in the relationship... The claps are well deserved...👏👏👏

I really loved the following :

And finally, after 31 years on the planet, 16 years of wondering and waiting and wishing, and 17 months of secret frustration and escalating attraction to her ridiculously gorgeous husband...finally, she had done it.

It was like Pragya had achieved the peak of Everest after trekking for 31 years...The feeling of pure bliss and sense of heart warming achievement...👏👏👏. Awesome yar! Thanks for making the weekend sweet...

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Lkb79

@Lkb79

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: renukha871
Reading your story is like viewing in HD (1080p)!!! Ugh!! Perfect!! Your writing style and grammar are always on point. But one and a half year??? Lol!! How can they take so long with all the sexual tension around?? Or am I the only who feels like that?!! Regardless, it was passionate and funny. Definitely, the Abhi and Pragya that I shipped in the earlier scenes!! Loved it!!!❤️

I'm going to just co-sign renukha's response.

What a great scene you described. I love stories that discuss Pragya in a more mature fashion. She may be naive in ways but one would think her extensive reading has broadened her mind. You definitely depicted that. I enjoyed it a lot! Thank you.

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STUTI KANSAL

@arunsunita_gm

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Naughty pragya and confused abhi
heheheheh
awseome os
par abhi ke ears mein pragya ne kya kaha
I want to know

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columbia

@columbia

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Loved this one! Want to read a abhigya SS where post divorce they have a chance meeting out of town and have a hot one night stand! All the pent up emotions leading to a hot night! Pls pls pls write one - I think you are one of those writers who shall do full justice to it

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john-angad

@john-angad

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

as an obsessive reader of mills and boons, i adored and totally got this os!!!

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samig

@samig

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

really like bedroom humour between abhi and pragya. Abhi don't underestimate the knowledge of pragya as she keeps on reading god knows how many books.

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Krishna

@kubare

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Mina..to cute..loved it..,subtle but damn sensual too...great writing dear..loved Pragya..loved her curiosity... her frustration...,described beautifully and tastefully...👏

Oh and Abhi Darling... damn cute...so easily teaseable and his plans of energy drinks pritieb snakes to get ready for all the times to come.😆😆😆