Enough | in progress | AbhiGya FF by mina - Page 15

Originally posted by: hailly

Awesome update Mina.
Loved it, continue soon please.

Originally posted by: littlegurl

Hi Mina

Loved the story

Please update the story soon

Originally posted by: anishapoudel

puneet fiasco was one i can never forgive abhi knowing all how he hit him to hide the stuff minu i hv no words for u u r just just a amazing story writers i love the way u hv written with such a positive note i m really to glad to read next part watiting 😊

Originally posted by: MinMinMehra

Doing the diyu stalk!

Originally posted by: -Nive-

Chapter 3 thoughts - RES

I need my laptop for this 😆

UNRES

This is so far MY FAVOURITE CHAPTER in this FF (well chapter 1 and chapter 2 are still not read but I think this would anyway be my favourite). I love everything about the chapter - much needed Pragz and Sarla Maa confrontation, Bulbul and Sarla Maa talk and Purab-Abhi confrontation yet I couldn't help but share some of my favourite parts!

In all the weeks she had spent trying to hide the truth about her marriage to Abhi, Pragya had forgotten one basic thing.

Her mother had a temper.

To be honest, even I forgot that Sarla Ma had a temper so I kinda had the same thinking that Sarla Ma would collapse or her health would detoriate if she came to know the truth about Pragya's marriage. Got to see her real nature only after MMS.

I couln't quote the entire paragraph here since the comment would get bigger but I loved all the things you mentioned to show that Sarla Maa was a fierce woman who had faced so many struggles with courage before.

To her surprise, she even found herself admitting to her mother that a small part of her had somehow grown fond of Abhi

I am always fond of this kind of situations in story where a person admits to another person about their feelings when they aren't even consciously aware of it. And I am even more happy this time, because she got to share it with a person close to her i.e. her Maa. Also because I never got to see Pragya and her Maa having a heart to heart talk about their thoughts and feelings without any walls in between them.

Neither liked it when Sarla basically said that they were behaving as children, but still both of them knew that in some way she was right.

Yes she was right and I am glad, they also accept it 😆

The day after Bulbul's final rejection, Purab gathered his courage and went to meet with Abhi.

Though I don't like Bulbul rejecting Purab, he deserved it at that time. He hid Aliya from Bulbul and Bulbul from Aliya, it was wrong though he didn't do it purposefully. So he needs to face the consequences.

Purab was dismayed to realize that Akaash had developed an impressive professional manner. It seemed he was doing a great job as Abhi's manager, and it was galling to think he'd been so easy to replace.

These little details (can I call them little details? I doubt it) is what makes your story more professional and realistic. You are making me feel bad for Purab when I am supposed to be angry with him.

"Stop calling me Bhai. You have lost that right, Purab. You hid from me like a coward, and you betrayed my sister. I don't need a brother like you." Abhi put his sunglasses back on and started to walk past Purab.

Mera Purab 😭 Why is he the only one getting punished? What about others who did mistakes - Abhi and Aaliya? He deserves a chance to be heard. I don't want to quote the last two paragraphs because you broke my heart. (Hope you will bring Purab in later chapters )

(This makes me think about the show Aaliya and what kind of treatment she is getting even after everything)

Originally posted by: -JollyJabeen-JB

Hi Mina,

Sorry for the short comment but I read your whole fic today.. and just wow!! It is brilliant..The Puneet fiasco was def a disgusting one and was very disheartening to see no one defend him🤬 Liking how Abhi is noticing Pragya now though, with his memory gone. It's a new slate.. lowkey unclear right now but a new slate!!!

Update soon pls. Really like this !!!

Originally posted by: rutu83

didn't realize this was updated- had forgotten the previous parts

yaar if you're gonna give updates after months thode lambe de do na

liking your abhi- cute and confused. want to see how this is going to continue once they;re home

hope you update soonish??

Originally posted by: vishuv

Amazing story Mina!! Read all the parts in one go... and I would be damned if I fail to appreciate your wonderful skills of writing! I felt bad for Rabul but that didn't stop me from reading...our Abhigya is there na! And moreover you being the author... You would make it convincing!!

Loved the chapters. And I loved how you predicted Abhi's memory loss much before the CVs Lol!! You are just awesome... Your story seems to go in a flow. And I am wishing to read more of it! Please... If possible PM me your further updates... Waiting to read all of them!!!