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Originally posted by: vlhs12993

How did I missed this update😲

Loved it Mina👏👏 Wish cvs read your story and give us something like this!

I like the abhi in your stories more than the show abhi Mina.

can't wait for next update!

and an update for Black anarkali too😳

Originally posted by: --simmi--

Wow Mina! I am jumping in excitement for when I get time to read all these! They sound fab!

And Congo on your meeting with Shabir! <3

Originally posted by: _Ms.Funnybee_

Awesome update loved it so much.

Continue soon please.

Originally posted by: -Nive-

Chapter 4 thoughts

I must confess that I have read this few months ago but I forgot I read this and read it again until I realized I have already read it.

Heehee! Thank you for re-reading and sharing your thoughts, makes me soo soo happy Nivu!

He took a deep breath and then smiled politely. "Aur aap kaun hain?" (And who are you?)

Abhi was polite even when he was confused. I love this. Not that show Abhi wouldn't be polite but this Abhi is calm even when he doesn't know things.

LOL. I'm not sure Abhi on the show would be polite 😆 But, thank you for describing how he is calm when he doesn't know things. This is a good way to put it and will be important going forward in this story...I think!

Pragya wondered if he might ask for Aaliya or Tanu next

For a second, I also wondered why he didn't ask about Tanu. But I am following this weird habit of reading it from reverse, so I really don't know what happened before or whether Abhi has broken up with Tanu. From your summary of story till now, I think nothing like that happened. But then I had read chapter 5 already, so I realized it's because of memory loss and I am glad you made him forget Tanu but remember everyone else in his family.

No Nivu, he didn't forget about Tanu...

Before he could finish his sentence, Abhi registered the flash of the man raising a cricket bat he had been hiding behind his back.

I thought he might be someone sent by the villains until few paragraphs later where I found me scolding myself for expecting soap twists in your fiction 😆 and MM security is weak here too.

LOLOLOLOL "scolding myself for expecting soap twists in your fiction"! Too cute!! The random violent attack is my attempt at a soap twist, along with the memory loss. I argued with myself for many months before deciding to go with this track...good to know it's not "too" soapy compared to if the villains had been involved 😆

Hopefully Robin would be there to make him an energy shake.

This made me feel uber sad for Abhi with this sentence. No Daadi, No Aaliya and No Chashmish. Rockstar's life would be boring without them.

Awww!!

Was she planning to initiate a divorce? Maybe she was plotting how to get the best settlement out of the whole mess? Or perhaps she was still busy looking after her mother, and hadn't made any decisions yet?

The second question - 😲
He is not fully out of the thought that she is a gold digger. He knows she doesn't love Purab but still has some doubts that she might be after money? The word 'plotting' made me think like this.

He never really got to know her...this was quite early in their "relationship" after all. Sadly on the show itself we saw plenty of instances where he knows she doesn't love Purab, knows she's a simple girl, but still talks about her being after money.


Daadi had reached Ludhiana

How I wish Daadi was like this on the show too. A good way to show that she is angry on her grandson. Though its painful, I like this Daadi who doesn't force her thoughts on the kids or forcibly make them do things when they are at fault.

Haha! Yes! An adult Daadi treating her adult grandchildren like adults!! Giving them space to make their own mistakes.

and most of all I liked that you made him not reconcile with Purab but made him ask for Purab when he woke up. 😃

The one, the only Bhai Jaisa Dost. I didn't have much planned for use for him in this story but Nivu somehow you are making me want to bring him back. I will have to think on it!