Abhi-Pragya One Shot: Abhishek

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Ashlaika

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Thanks for the translation Tia! :)

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greenbutterfly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

awesome please make a part 2😊

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nitarata

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Thanks guys. I am happy this FF is read even after so many days.

Part 2! Hmm.. it was one shot. I will try to write Abhi's point of view if I can...

I feel I understand his POV better than Pragya but so hard to put it down...

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Parm

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

What a wonderful story writer you are Tia! I am so looking forward to reading the rest of the stories you've written. I've got a huge smile on my face right now reading this OS. Loved yesterday's too to pieces!👍🏼

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nitarata

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Parm.
What a wonderful story writer you are Tia! I am so looking forward to reading the rest of the stories you've written. I've got a huge smile on my face right now reading this OS. Loved yesterday's too to pieces!👍🏼

Can you tell me which one did you like better? Pragya's thoughts or Abhi's?

Thank you very much for reading and commenting!😊

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Anbhigya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Awsum...:):) i loved it... N if i would have not suffering from post restriction crisis i would have commented on every OS of yours because they are amazing... N i can connect with them easily.. Keep writing..:)

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nitarata

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Anbhigya
Awsum...:):) i loved it... N if i would have not suffering from post restriction crisis i would have commented on every OS of yours because they are amazing... N i can connect with them easily.. Keep writing..:)

Aww! Thank you so much! Hope your restriction goes away soon!

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@putturani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#58

Hey Tia, no idea whether I have commented on this before or not but I saw this from your link in the AT and loved it! Such a delightful OS. Loved Pragya's train of thought - both her peace and uneasiness in her maternal home, the little ways she misses Abhi.

I can see the evolution of your writing style from here to Rockstar. In both fics you give us so many beautiful little moments that show the developing bond between the couple.

And then trust Abhi to pull a Tulsidas! (without the subsequent renunciation and turn to spirituality ofc). I do hope you will continue this, and have them discuss why he felt the need to show up in the middle of the night. 😆

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nitarata

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: putturani
Hey Tia, no idea whether I have commented on this before or not but I saw this from your link in the AT and loved it! Such a delightful OS. Loved Pragya's train of thought - both her peace and uneasiness in her maternal home, the little ways she misses Abhi.
I can see the evolution of your writing style from here to Rockstar. In both fics you give us so many beautiful little moments that show the developing bond between the couple.

And then trust Abhi to pull a Tulsidas! (without the subsequent renunciation and turn to spirituality ofc). I do hope you will continue this, and have them discuss why he felt the need to show up in the middle of the night. 😆

Thank you Rani. I don't think you had commented on this. But yeah, I definitely got into to write from Pragya's POV as first person from this fic. I found it more convenient..but now I am suffering since I have to bring out Abhi only through her for Rockstar. This was just a one shot.. but there, I have to explore him altogether through Pragya and also need to give the bigger picture too with her thoughts only. It's getting a bit challenging.

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Ayesha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#60

Jwow it really nice.
Abhigya missing so funny.
I think u have to cont like this os and ss
Tia i am honestly saying u re amazing.
My friend so good
Continue writing some new os and ts yaar