abhihya two shot......... ITS MY MISTAKE.......pt2 (pg4) 2/7/14

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hiii friends
i am new to the forum , i have been following kkb since two weeks and now its one of my favourite shows
i love abhigya and rabul...
i hope you all like this work of mine

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Posted: 11 years ago
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so here is the 1st part...

i have not done any proof reading tho gramatical errors and spelling mistakes ho sakte hain uske liye bada wala sorry

any kind of comments are most welcome but please comment karke batao if it is nice or not


ITS MY MISTAKE

" I am so sorry abhi , I know how much you hate her , but you know na , that project was so important to me and see now it's the turning point of my carreer " tanu said

Abhi was confused , tanu had gone for 3 months and he did not miss her that much , he was busy seeing his chasmeesh , the only girl he hated was fascinating him big time

She cared for everyone , his daadi , his family and for him too

How on earth can she care for him ??? he was a total monster to her

" abhi ??? what are you thinking ???" tanu broke his thoughts

" kuch nai tanu , I missed you so much " abhi lied and hugged her

" I thought you are angry at me for leaving you with that witch " tanu laughed and hugged him back

" I love you soo much abhi " tanu said

" kya ho raha hai ye sab ?" a voice interrupted

" tum , door knock karke nai aa sakti ?" tanu asked angrily

" aap door band karke ye sab nai kar sakte?" pragya asked back

" how dare you ??" tanu said angrily

" abhi zara iske tevar tho dekho " tanu said angrily

" inhone mere tavar dekhe hain , ye aapka ghar nai hai , yeh mera ghar hai aur ye room bi merA hai , aur aap mere room mein ye sab kar kar rahi hai " pragya reminded her

" abhi , she is insulting me " tanu complained

" main kisi ki insult nai kar rahi hoon , ye tho acha hua ki main hi aayi , ab aap zara sochiye ki agar daadi ya koi aura ate tho kya kehte , issliye main keh rahi thi ki aap door band kyun nai kar lete " pargya said

" leave her baby " abhi told tanu

" jaate waqt darwaaza band karke jao " abhi told pragya

Pragya was shocked but nodded

" tho ye sach hai " he came in

" I cant believe kit um kisi ke zindagi barbaad karne ke liye iss had tak jaaoge " he said angrily

" purab ? tum ? yahaan ?" pragya asked

" haan , main , aap khud sach nai bata rahi thi tho sach jaan ne ke liye main aa gaya " purab told her

" tho ab kya karega tu , isse apne saath lekar bhagega ?? purab , cant you see ??? she is total shameless , she loved you after knowing that you have money and married me because I have more money than you , aur iske jaise ladki ke liye tum aaliya se rishta tod rahe ho , she is so cheap ki she is ready to be my wife even after knowing ki I live with tanu " abhi told purab angrily

" how dare you bhai ?" purab caught hold of abhi's collar

" purab chodo , purab chodo , please " pragya requested

" tum inhe characterless bol rahe ho ? inhe ? tho ye socho ki tumhari tanu kitni characterless hai , she let you marry someone you don't love " purab said angrily

" shut up purab , go away from here " pragya interrupted the fight

" di , main aapke saath itna galat hone nai doonga , aaj sach bataa kar rahoon ga " purab said sternly

Abhi was shocked " purab ne isse di kyun bola ? god kahin ...? Oh no " abhi thought

" please purab , meri musibaton ko aur mat badaao , just go from here , I'll manage " pragya said

" I wont go di , I wont let him spoil your life " purab shouted

Now his doubts were confirmed " aaliya misunderstood everything and i did a big mistake " abhi thought

" meri zindagi barbaad ho chuki hai purab , aur issme kisi ki Galati nai hai , its my mistake , meri kismet kharab hai , so just leave " pragya begged

She was scared , the truth cannot come out , not now

" di , lekin..." Purab started but stopped after seeing pragya shaking her head in negative

" bhai , ye jo kuch bi ho raha hai isme inki koi Galati nai hai , trust me " purab said

" purab..." Pragya started

" nai di , I am sorry , ye sab meri Galati hai , aur sabse zyada affect aap hui hai , I know ki aap nai chahte ki main sach bataaun , lekin di agar maine sach nai bataaya tho shayad main kabhi bulbul se nazarein nai milaa paaunga " purab told pragya

" sach na , main bata dungi , ab nai , baad mein , please abhi ke liye tum jao yahaan se " pragya told to purab

Purab gave a last look at abhi and left their room

" wo actually , daadi aapko bulaa rahi thi " pragya said and left immediately

" abhi..." tanu started

" not now tanu , hum baad mein baat karenge " abhi said and walked after his wife

The pooja finished off nicely and all the guests had left

Abhi was searching for his wife

" abhi kya bolega tu ? aaj bi tune uska insult kia " abhi thought and went to his room

Pragya came after 2 hours

" thank god , he slept " pragya thought and opened the cupboard to remove her blanket

" its not your mistake " abhi said

She was shocked and turned to see him all awake



To be continued...


if its not good please let me know


...Shakti... thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it was soo good! can't wait for part 2
pls update soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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❤️ ed. Please update ASAP .
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was really good.
Do continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow great story! Very dramatic, I really enjoyed the scene when Purab came in. And Pragya's replies to Tannu at the beginning are just perfect. Looking forward to the rest!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was gud...pls update the nxt part soon...:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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first of all welcome to KB forum and very nice i like the way u wrote the whole situation its interesting update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Welcome to the forum. you have written it brilliantly . Loved it. continue soon dear👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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A/N: if its not good please let me know

OK I am letting you know that it is very good. I could see everything like it was happening in front of my eyes

Please continue ASAP n Pm me if possible

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