abhihya two shot......... ITS MY MISTAKE.......pt2 (pg4) 2/7/14 - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you! (LOL!) I don't understand hindi very well, but the little I understood I totally enjoyed!!! Please update; but could you please give us a little more in English!!!!


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Posted: 11 years ago
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update soon. liked it alot
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice story...
A good one 😃
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: shakti_arsha

it was soo good! can't wait for part 2

pls update soon

Thank you so much ...

Will be updating soon

Originally posted by: smala

ed. Please update ASAP .

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Originally posted by: -Inferno-

It was really good.

Do continue soon!

I am sooo happy that you like it

Originally posted by: dekhiki

Wow great story! Very dramatic, I really enjoyed the scene when Purab came in. And Pragya's replies to Tannu at the beginning are just perfect. Looking forward to the rest!!

Yippe.. I love drama tho kya kar sakte hain , stories mein bi drama

I am sooo glad that you like it , thank you so much for the encouragement

Originally posted by: Sandrav

It was gud...pls update the nxt part soon...:)

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Originally posted by: ratitheangel

first of all welcome to KB forum and very nice i like the way u wrote the whole situation its interesting update soon

Thank you...

I am so happy that u find it intresting

The update is on the way...

Originally posted by: gopikaaji

simple and beautiful...update soon...

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Originally posted by: vivkriti

Welcome to the forum. you have written it brilliantly . Loved it. continue soon dear

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Originally posted by: coolgirl3

Very nice..plz update soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Chahanya

A/N: if its not good please let me know

OK I am letting you know that it is very good. I could see everything like it was happening in front of my eyes

Please continue ASAP n Pm me if possible

Wow. ...That so nice... I am so happy that you like it

I will surely try and pm you

Originally posted by: indi

Thank you! (LOL!) I don't understand hindi very well, but the little I understood I totally enjoyed!!! Please update; but could you please give us a little more in English!!!!


I am so sorry you hd difficulty in understanding... I promise you the next part will be easy for you to read

And thank you so much for liking it ... it means a lot to me

Originally posted by: -Sajdey-

update soon. liked it alot

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Originally posted by: Durs

awesome pls continue

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Posted: 11 years ago
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thank you so much...
i am so happy that you loved it
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Originally posted by: samig

nice start update soon

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The update is on the way

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Originally posted by: deffa

Nice story...
A good one
Update soon

Thank you so much dear

I am happy that you liked it

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Posted: 11 years ago
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thank you so much for commenting and encouraging me so much... it meant a lot to me

i have replied to all your comments and i dont think i have left anyone but agar aisa hua hai tho i am sorry for that

PS ; AGAIN I HAVE HOVE DONE ANY PROOF READING THO GRAMATICAL ERRORS BI HONGE AUR SPELLING MISTAKES BI , SO SORRY FOR THAT ALSO

chalo aur nai pakaungi , here goes part 2 , i hope you all like it


A SMALL RECAP


The pooja finished off nicely and all the guests had left

Abhi was searching for his wife

" abhi kya bolega tu ? aaj bi tune uska insult kia " abhi thought and went to his room

Pragya came after 2 hours

" thank god , he slept " pragya thought and opened the cupboard to remove her blanket

" its not your mistake " abhi said

She was shocked and turned to see him all awake


PART 2

" aap ?? sooye nai ??"she asked

" unfortunately no , you were waiting right ?" he asked

" for what ??" pragya asked

" for me to sleep " abhi answered

" nai , aisa kuch bi nai hai " pragya lied

" really ?" abhi asked

" abhi ... mere matlab abhishek ..." Pragya started but stopped as he kep his index finger on her lips

" shhh , call me abhi chasmeesh" he said huskily

She was shocked

" do you really think that what ever has happened is your mistake ??? pragya I know the intensity of crime I have done with you , I know ki I cant be forgiven , but I want to know why are you blaming yourself ? and for what ?" abhi asked

" aap kya keh rehe hain , I don't know , aap gaye nai aaj " pragya questioned him back

" kahaan ?" abhi asked

" aapki girl friend wait kar rahi hogi right ?? you should be there now " pragya answered coolly

" you really want me to go there ?" abhi asked

" see abhi , I mean abhishek , I know that you are aware of the truth , I know you are feeling guilty , but you know what , I don't need your sympathy , infact I don't need anybody's sympathy , I am not a stupid charity that everyone finds it easy to just sympathise with me , do you understand ??? you better understand " pragya said angrily and tried to walk

But he stopped her and pulled her into his arms

" what are you doing ?" she asked angrily

He slowly removed her specs and saw her tears

" who broke your heart darling ?" he asked

" you " she said immediately

" are you happy now ??? just let go of me and go to your tanu , I am sure she will be blaming me for the mess " pragya said and tried to push him

" you love your neighbour right ?" abhi questioned

Pragya was shocked , she looked directly into his eyes

" you know what , you are pathetic " pragya said and continued to push him away

" you really think you don't deserve love ? you really think you are not beautiful enough to be loved by someone ? are you serious ?" abhi asked

" I said nothing of the sort " pragya denied

" your eyes told me " abhi answered coolly

" just leave me , please " pragya requested

" its my mistake and not yours " abhi said softly and wiped her tears

" just stop your sympathy " pragya yelled

" what is your mistake ? tell me ? you married me thinking that purab loves me , you love tanu , you live with her and I ? I am your trophy wife , you never wanted to marry me , exactly what is your mistake ??" she yelled and pushed him away

" you know what I dreamt all my life ??? I had always dreamt that I would love my husband wholeheartedly , I will always stand by him in all his ups and downs , I will be his best friend and so on ... See where I am standing , I am your wife , you love tanu , what is my mistake or in that case what is your mistake , I have been cheated by my fate always , its not your mistake , its mine " she wiped her tears and gave a short laugh

" you think my marriage was broken once right ? its twice ? pehle baar bharaati laut kar chale gaye kyunki dhahej kam pad gaya aur suresh , he never loved me , I am used to it , I am happy that all has been sorted , now purab can go to his love , you go to tanu and I'll be by myself " pragya repeated his words

Abhi smiled at her and walked to her

" pragya..." he started

" please , I beg you , just let it go , I have no expectation from my life , and you cant change anything by feeling guilty , can you ?" she cried

" can you love me ? can you talk to me like you talk to tanu ? can you give me the respect every wife deserves ? no na ? then what is the point in talking this ? you cant give me what I want ? infact I have realised that I am not a person who has the rights to dream , I have realised that my life is this and it will be this no matter what ? so please keep your sympathy to your self , its not your mistake " she said and bent down and took the bedsheet and went to the balcony

Abhi wiped the tears that came out of his eyes " god what sort of human being am I ?" he thought

" pragya, you are tired , you sleep on the bed , I'll sleep on the floor " abhi offered

" no , I am fine " pragya said coldly

She was very tired of pooja , the truth , the conversation with abhi , so she drifted off quickly

Abhi went to her and smiled at the way she slept , she didn't remove her specs

So he quietly removed her specs without disturbing her , and slowly lifted her and took her to his bed and tucked her in the bedsheet , he increased the ac temperature to 22 as she was not used to sleeping is such cold temperature

He smiled at her and said " I am sorry pragya , I don't know what to say ? but I know that what you think about yourself is not true , you are flawless and you should know that , and I will make you realise that you are not worthless , I will make you realise that you are special , suresh was right , I am very lucky to have you , I promise , I wont hurt you again , and from now on I will rectify all the mistakes I have done , you will get what ever you dream and that's my promise " abhi said and stood up and called tanu

" hello tanu , I am done with you , we are no more in this relation and I think we cannot be friends , I am sorry if I have hurted you ever , I hope you understand " abhi disconnected immediately and switched off his phone

He knew it was not done , tanu would show her dramas and aaliya will also support her , but he was prepared for everything

He looked at his sleeping wife

" I have to apologise to purab too " he thought

" I promise you pragya , maine cheezon ko bhigada hai aur main hi sab kuch teek karoonga " abhi sweared and sat on couch looking at pragya

He had to rectify many of his mistakes , but he knew she would support him no matter what

the end


please do comment and give me your feedbacks

it will encourage me to write more

love you all

Edited by magati - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I loved it

I so want Pragya to give it back to him

She needs to vent out

She needs to erupt and let everything inside her out

I know no one other than Abhi will be at the receiving end of it and it will be really good for him to hear everything she has to say

I hope they show this in the show not like one fine day Abhi decides Pragya is not wrong n I want to be with my wife n she will sar jhukao n say jo hukum patijee

Hmm he broke up with Tannu on the phone? I don't like this Man up face her break things off; drama no drama face it after all the drama you have done you should face hers too

TS nahi this needs to continue please do

Oh it was your PM But I checked my post list n just clicked as you were the last one to quote

and there was the part 2

I read b4 PM my comment is first 😊


Edited by Chahanya - 11 years ago

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