FF: Jeevan Saathi #2: Pg 24 (End) - Page 16

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Posted: 17 years ago
excellent plot simply love it!
continue soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
Nice update to the beautiful story. Hopefully Kanya and Shanaya find their mom and they are all happy together. Eagerly awaiting your next update.
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Posted: 17 years ago
love the update!
plz continue :)
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Posted: 17 years ago
Part 25

Aayan looks

He doesnt see anything!

He turns

And then looks back again

And sees Pammi

Aayan: Omg!!!!

Ranbir is like what?

Aayan: Look

And Ranbir sees it!!!!!!

Everyone sees it!!!

And they are like how can this be?

Both gals are saying that she's alive!

And nothing has happened to her!!!!!!!

Kanya tells Ranbir to go and get her!!!!!!!

Ranbir: But Kanya…..

Kanya: Go or else I will go myself!!!!!

Ranbir: No! That is one thing I wont allow u to do!!!!!!

Kanya: then…

Ranbir: look me and Aayan will go in 2 days!!! And bring her back!!!

She says okay!!!!!

2 days later

Both guys are about to leave!!!!

Ranbir tells Kanya to rest

And not to stress about anything!!!!!!!!

She says okay!!!!!

He kisses her!!!!!

And hugs her!!!!!!!!!!

She hugged him for a good chunk!!!!

But then she let go!!

Both guys headed off

And left!!!

Its about a 5 hour drive!!!!!!!!!

They arrive in the city where they were suppose to go!!!!

And they go into a hotel

And check in!!!!!!!!

they freshen up

And they eat something!

They go to the place where they saw her on TV

They don't go in deep cuz they just got there

But they try a little bit!!!

Afterwards

Both go into their owns room!!!!

Ranbir's phone rings

And its from Kanya!

Ranbir: Hello?

Kanya: Ranbir??

Ranbir: Kanya what are you doing up? U should be sleeping!

Kanya: I cant sleep!!

Ranbir: its important for you to rest!!!!!

Kanya: Don't worry about me!!!…. So did u find her?

Ranbir: Not yet!!! But we will look tomorrow!!!

They both talk to each other

Ranbir tells her its getting late!!

And she should rest!!

He doesn't mind talking

But shes pregnant!!!

Kanya doesn't want to hang up

But then she does!!!!

Ranbir: I love you!

Kanya; I love u too!!!!

And both of them do!!!

Next day

Both of them go

And look

They ask people

If they have seen Pammi or not

And they show pix!

Everyone says no

But they keep trying!!!!!!

They show more and more people!!!

And then some old lady says that she has seen her before!

Ranbir: Do you know where?

Lady: I think she lives in that area!!!

Both look

And they thank her and go there!!

There are lots of houses!!!

They look around…

And they spot her!

Ranbir and Aayan see her!!!

They go by her house

Knock on the door….

Pammi comes

And opens it!!!!

And she is shocked to see them both!!!!!!

She cant believe it!!!!!

Pammi: U two?? Here???

Ranbir: Shouldn't we ask you that??

Pammi looks down!

S: What are you two doing here?

Aayan: We came here to get you!

S is shocked!!!!!

Ranbir: U thought you can stay here forever… and let everyone else think that you are dead!!!!!!……..

Aayan; Why are you ruining ur daughters happiness??

She looks at them!!!

Ranbir: Do u realize what they were going through when they found out u were dead????? They couldn't handle it!!!

S is shocked to hear that!

Ranbir; And u came our wedding too didn't you????!!….

Aayan: If you think that they are mad at you….. they aren't!!!!… So why don't u come w/ us!

S: No I am happy here!!! I already gave so much pain to Kanya…. I cant face her!!

Ranbir: But she doesn't care about that!! She wants you there!!!!!

Ranbir: And we will not leave…. Til u come w/ us back home!!!!!

S is stuck!!!

She has no choice but to go w/. them!!!!!!!!

All three of them head back home!!!!

It's a long drive!!!!!

5 hours!!!!!

They arrive home!!!!

Ranbir and Aayan come home!!!

Kanya sees them both!!!

Shanaya stands up!!!

Kanya; U guyz are back??? U didn't call??? What happened???

Both of them move

And Kanya sees Pammi!!!

S is looking down!!

Kanya is smiling

She is shocked!

And is crying!!!!!!!

She comes to her!!!!

Kanya: Momma???

Momma is crying!!

She has her eyes closed!!!!!!

And then

She looks at Kanya!

Kanya is happy at seeing her!!!!!

Pammi sees Kanya!!!

Kanya cries

And hugs her!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Shanaya is happy!

She comes to her

And hugs her as well!!!

Pammi asks forgiveness!

Kanya is like no!!!!

Don't say that!

Everything turns out for the good!!!!

The guyz go in the room

And freshen up

After the long ride!!

Both gals show Pammi to her room!!!

Kanya goes to Ranbir…!!

Ranbir hugs her from behind!!!

Kanya melts in his arms!!!

Kanya: thanks!!!!

Ranbir: Anytime!!!!!!

He kisses her!!!!!!

Ranbir: 48 hours w/o u!!!!!!

Kanya: easy right??

Ranbir: Very hard!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kanya: well for me it was easy!!

Ranbir: oh really?

Kanya: Yes!!

Ranbir: Well than.. I should go more!

Kanya: Then go!

Ranbir: Okay!

He leaves!

Kanya is like he will come back!!!!!

Ranbir goes out

He smiles

He was going to come back into the room

But he gets a phone call from work….

And he leaves!!!!

Kanya is thinking where is he???

She goes outside

But doesn't see him!!

She is calling him!!!!!

Pammi: Whats wrong??

Kanya: I cant find Ranbir!!!!!

Pammi; He's probably around! Don't worry!!!!

She goes into the room

And calls his cell

But his cell is in his cabin

But he's not!!!

She gets worried!!

She keeps calling him

But he's not even by his phone!!

She gets all worried!!

She's thinking I was joking!!!!!!

After 1 hour

He comes home!!!!!

Pammi: Ranbir where were you?

Ranbir: I got a call from the office so I had to go!!!! Why?

Pammi: Kanya was looking all over for you! She was worried!!!!

Ranbir: I will go to her!!!!

Kanya is lying on the bed!

She is lost in her thoughts!!!!!

Ranbir smiles

He comes in

And sits besides her!!

Kanya looks

And hugs him!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

She cries!!!

Ranbir tells her not to cry!!!

Kanya: Where were you?? I was worried!! I was just joking w/ u!!!

Ranbir: I was too!! But got a call from office so I went there!

Kanya: couldn't u have told me?

Ranbir: Okay I am sorry!!!!!!!… Now no more tension!!!! You need to relax!!!!!

She keeps hugging him!!!!

He brings her out!!!!

Both are holding hands!!

She sits on the couch!!!!!!!

Ranbir gets a phone call

And he gets up

And goes out to take the call!!!!

Kanya gets up!!

And when she stands up

She holds her stomach!!!!!

And she screams!!!!!!!

She calls Ranbir

But he's outside

W/ the door closed!!!!!……

Kanya; RANBIR???????????

She yells

And she falls on the floor!!!

Ranbir looks that way

And he sees her

He is shocked

And drops his phone on the floor!!

Kanya falls!!

Ranbir is shocked!!!

He runs to her!!

She is admitted in the hospital!!!!!

He has to wait outside!!!!

Everyone is outside!!!

Ranbir is saying

Please let nothing happen to her!!!!!

Kanya is screaming like anything else!!!!!

And she's sweating!!!

Doc is telling her to breathe!!!!!

Ranbir keeps pacing back and fourth

Pammi is like don't worry!!

Everything will be okay!!!!

After 2 hours

The doc comes out!!!!!

Ranbir: How is she?

Doc: Congratulations!!! You are a father!!

Ranbir's face lights up!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ranbir: Really?

Doc; Yes!!

RANBIR: Can I see her?

Doc: Yes!! But only one at a time!!!!!!

Ranbir goes in the room

Kanya is resting!!

Ranbir comes to her!!

Kisses her on the forehead!!!!

She slowly opens her eyes!!!!

She smiles at him!!

He holds her hand!!!!!

Nurse brings their new born son!!!!

He's sooo tiny and cute!!!!!!!!

Kanya holds him!!!!

Ranbir is like wow!!!

Beautiful baby!!!

Ranbir holds him!!!

And he's just looking at him!!

Afterwards

He puts the baby down in a cradle!!

Everyone comes in

And sees her!!!

They are all happy!

Everyone holds the baby one by one!!!!!

Ranbir is sitting next to her holding her hand!!!!

They all leave

And let her rest!!!!!

Ranbir stays w/ her!!!

Both are looking at each other

W/ love!!!!!

She is smiling

So is he!!!

Ranbir: thank you Kanya!!!

She blushes!!!!

Both look at their new child!!!!!!!!!!!

Both are smiling!

Ends on their smiling faces!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!





THE END!!

(That was the very last part!!!.... Thanks to all the readers for the comments!! Meant a lot to me)

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Posted: 17 years ago
hey great ending
good thing that everything is well
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Posted: 17 years ago
nice ending, Another nice ff ends again.😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
Excellent work yaar. Loved the ending
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Posted: 17 years ago
brilliant ending loved the ff the whole way through..
especiallt the plots they were awesome hatts off to ya!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
gr8 ending
y did you finish it??
i relli liked it
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Posted: 17 years ago
great ending!
cant wait for ur next FF!!

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