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Tinku2015

@Tinku2015

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#41

V Nice update but its ending in the next...

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shobha21

@shobha21

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Very nice update Alkaji 👏

Waiting for the next update.

Thank you so much.

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Tasha1994

@Tasha1994

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

wonderful update Alka ji

loved it a lot

waiting for the next

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Babita

@babita..

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Read the chapter Alka di. Will give the review tomorrow. 😃

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mudraswathi

@mudraswathi

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Thank you for posting new update Alkaji.

will read asap😊

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Babita

@babita..

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Nice continuation with a scary twist. Liked the chapter Alka di 😃

The dread dream coming into existence and it came true. This was so shattering and he has lost his Nidhi.

Mallika told Ashu how every girl feels of her life and marriage. But Ashu could not understand earlier. He is tormented. Good that Armaan and Mallika could take care of him.

Now Armaan and Mallika's marriage -- wow this is so interesting. And i would like to see Ashu in London and may be he'll get his Nidhi back, by an chance.

Loved your imaginative creation Alka di, will be waiting for the next part.😃 🤗

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parmarA

@parmarA

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: babita68
Nice starting Alka di 👏 I liked in the first scene that Ashu and Nidhi are so close to each other. But Ashu is scared of marriage ?? He loves her, then what and why ??
Good party but he is scared of taking responsibility. This is new. And he even goes to the dancing floor without even looking back. This Ashu is quite confused.
Hope Nidhi has not met with an accident. Hope he finds her. But if not, will Mallika take over Nidhi's place ??
I am scared now.
Please update soon Alka di, i am waiting eagerly. 😃
⭐️ ⭐️

Thank you Babita for your comment.Yes Ahutosh scared for taking resposbilities.I posted second chap.And will post my chap with full climax on Monday.

Thank you once again