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Posted: 11 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: parmarA

Puri daal hi kaali hai Mudraji.Some big suspense is waiting for you in my upcoming chapter.Tabhi toh alag chhe.Thank you teacherji



kaali daal .. excited...🤪... aur Mallika ka tadka ho toh... mazaa hi alag hai😆😆



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Posted: 11 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: Tasha1994

wonderful update alka ji
liked the concept a lot
nidhi left...feeling bad for ashu

Thank you Tasha.Don't feel bad for him😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: mudraswathi



kaali daal .. excited...🤪... aur Mallika ka tadka ho toh... mazaa hi alag hai😆😆



Ha woh toh hai.Mallika ka Tadka Ashutosh ka ang dar se fadaka
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
Nice starting Alka di 👏 I liked in the first scene that Ashu and Nidhi are so close to each other. But Ashu is scared of marriage ?? He loves her, then what and why ??
Good party but he is scared of taking responsibility. This is new. And he even goes to the dancing floor without even looking back. This Ashu is quite confused.
Hope Nidhi has not met with an accident. Hope he finds her. But if not, will Mallika take over Nidhi's place ??
I am scared now.
Please update soon Alka di, i am waiting eagerly. 😃
⭐️ ⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
Suspense kab khulega...😆

Khulja suspense..😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
Alka half read will comment soon 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
Willl post my chap today evening or may be in half an hour.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38





Dard sa sine me hai kuchh nashtar jaisa
Dikhta nahi par chubhata bai
Yaadena nahi dhundali si lekin
Fir bhi kuchh khone ka ehsaas


Nidhi was lying in the bed of blood.Ashutosh shocked and lost his sense"Why Nidhi took this decession?"

And he shouted,"No Nidhi honey no.You can't left me alone like this?why you take this step Nidhi?How can i live without you?

Nidhi tried to utter a word but she can't.

Ashutosh took injured Nidhi in his arms and she just gave helpless look to him and slowly said,"I am sorry Ashutosh.I couldn't live without you.But you scared for marriage.And i lost my patience and attempt suicide.But you don't worry nobody...

Ashutosh:No Nidhi.Don't speak Nidhi.I had called Ambulance.

Nidhi:I put suicide note under my pillow.Show it to police

And she took her last breathe.

"Nidhi" Ashutosh shouted loudly.

And he just wake up from his dreams with his cell phone ring.

Woh pasine se bhig gaya.Uski saase tej ho chuki thi.He was so scared by that dream.He was shaking with any unknown fear.

He just decided that this will not be happen to Nidhi.He will go and will talk to DB and Nidhi's dad.But then he realize that call from Armaan.He just said hello and got the worst news of his life

Armaan:Ashutosh.Kahaa hai tu?Jaldi se TV on kar.

Ashutosh:Are Armaan.Itna ghabaraya hua kyon hai?

Armaan:Baat mat kar aur news dekh.Goa se Chennai wala plane crash ho gaya.

Ashutosh:What?are lekin Nidhi,DB aur Mr Verma bhi toh usi flight me the.

Armaan:Jaldi se mere ghar aaja.We will have to go to the accidental spot.

Ashutosh:Main sirf 10 minu me aata hoo.You just get ready.

Ashutosh:Armaan.Nidhi ko toh kuchh nahi hua hoga na?I am scared.Bata na Nidhi theek toh hogi na?

Armaan couldn't control his own tears.He just cut the call and thrashed in tears.

At accident spot.

Ashutosh Armaan and Mallika just shocked to see the sight.

Ashutosh runs towards the crashing area.But Inspector stopped him,"Sir,aap is se aage nahi ja sakte.Wahaa aag lagi hai.Firebridgade bhi pahuch chuki hai.Shayad short cercuit ho sakta hai.

Ashutosh:Kam se kam aap muze bata toh dijiye ki passengers ki halat kaisee hai?

Inspector:sir,sthiti kaffi gambhir hai.Hume ab tak 200se jyada dead bodies mil cchuki hai.Shayad hi koi bach paya hai.

Ashutosh just losing his control.Tabhi Armaan shouted,"Ashutosh Nidhi ke baba."

And he turned towards Armaan's direction.

They all rushed where Army man were talking mr Verma.

He just went there.

MIlitory man:Sorry sir,he is dead.Aap inki rishtedaar hai?

Ashutosh:Ji.

Tabhi DB ko bhi wahaa laya gaya.She was also dead

Military man:Sir,sare passengers ki death ho gai hai aisa lagta hai hume.But still humne hope nahi chhodi hai.Aage wala hissa baki hai abhi.But woh bhi puri tarah se jal chuka hai.Aap us tent me jake pata kijiye.

And he left after giving shock to Ashutosh,Armaan and Mallika.

Ashutosh:Armaan,maine Nidhi ko kho diya.Yeh maine kya kiya Armaan?

And he started crying.

Armaan:Ashu,please apne aap ko sambhalo.Yeh sab takdeer ka khel hai.

Ashutosh:Nahi main hi darta tha na shadi se?maine hi usko mana kiya na?Aur pata hai maine aaj subah sapna bhi dekha.Muze kya pata tha ki mera sapna sach ho jayega aise?I hate myself.

Mallika:Control Ashutosh.Pahele hume DB aur Mr Verma ki custody leni chahiye.Unki antim kriya karne ki taiyaari bhi hume hi karni hai.

Armaan:Ha Ashu.Tab tak hum yahaa Nidhi ki talash jari rakhenge.

Ashutosh:Nahi Armaan.Main apne aap ki kabhi maaf nahi kar paoonga.

Mallika and Armaan trying to control Ashutosh.

Ashutosh: I lost my Nidhi Armaan.

Armaan:Ashutosh sambhalo apne aapko but before he could handle the situation he fell down on on floor bec of unconsiousness.

Armaan was shattered by all this.It seems he was losing the situation.

After Armaan and Mallika's efort Ashutosh becaming stabl.

Unke saath se Ashutohs ne DB aur CV ka antim sanskaar kiya.He was felt down and was blaming himself for this whole situation.

The moments passes and it almost 3 months passed.

One day Armaan came to Ashutosh.

Armaan:Me and Mallika getting marriage on Valentine day Ashutosh.

Ashutosh:I am glad buddy.I am happy for you and Mallika.You know you and Mallika are my best friends.

Mallika too came to meet Ashutosh.

Mallika:You know Ashutosh.Every girl dreams.Hum ladkiya kaanch ki tarah hoti hai.Hume apna aaina bhi chahiye aur fir use tutne ka dar bhi reheta hai hume.Nidhi tumse kitna pyaar karti thi woh tum soch bhi nahi sakte.Lekin tumne uske sare sapne tod diye aur dekho tumhe usne maafi maangne ka mauka bhi nahi diya.

Ashutosh:Sahi ho tum Mallika.But ab main yahaa rehena nahi chahata.Maine London me settle hone ka socha hai.Wahaa maine apply kiya tha aur unhone muze select karke wahaa bulaya hai.I am shifting there.Kyonki yahaa muze Nidhi ki yaden jine nahi degi.Lekin Tumhari shadi attend karke hi jaoonga.I promise.

And they gave smile to each other.

So here is end of my os part 2.Next part will be more interesting and my last chap too.
Edited by parmarA - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
nice chapter...epilogue alli Nidhi magala hesaru Vidi irbeku..ok na?
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
Lovely chap Alka di...Thanks for the update... Waiting to see what will happen in next chap... Update soon...

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