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Posted: 11 years ago
Your FF is progressing at supersonic speed Vidishaaji!! Three years leap!! Last chapter mentioned about special "Dahej" that earned Ashu 51% stake in KGH & here Ashu is enjoying that dahej. Good to see him happily married & settled with Radhika and little one. Hope he has put the kibosh on Baharwali flings.

End is so tragic... Lallan's son is no more & his crony Pandeyji too. Was it a planned game by Lallan's rivals? Ashutosh has to take care of his grieving wife & in-laws and LT may make him his political heir. Let's see how Nidhi joins Ashu among all this.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Vidishaa



🤣 bolo to Nikki ko bhi ek role doon..next ss mein?

I can't write at a slow pace..major major drawback...the moment I start a story, I am eager to finish it...if I slow down then I lose interest and leave the story incomplete



so finally managed to fend Nikki.

Ashutosh ka ek to romantic scene likh dete na. Humko bhi thoda gyaan mil jaata.

You know what? My sister tried to make me write these scenes (she sent me videos and blue films) and I just couldn't manage it. My best effort looked like the hero wearing surgical gloves and touching the heroine with a sterilized bargepole. Above all, a mask and ensuring that he had used a mouthwash and further asking her whether she had any oral infection before kissing her. Chhheee...abhi bhi goosebumps aate hain. I don't know log aise scenes kaise likhte hain.

ANyways, AShutosh and Radhika ka romance bahut cute laga. She is Katrina Kaif (singing teri ore) and what about himself? she is going to have nauker ghar main, to compensate for the absence of her husband? ultimately her husband ne bhi to yahi kiya tha na? Kajri ke saath...

Kajri aage aayegi kya? something like a blackmail angle. And where is Nidhi?
Abhishek ka accident hogaya. ab aage?

jaldi update dijiye.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ttrocks

Your FF is progressing at supersonic speed Vidishaaji!! Three years leap!! Last chapter mentioned about special "Dahej" that earned Ashu 51% stake in KGH & here Ashu is enjoying that dahej. Good to see him happily married & settled with Radhika and little one. Hope he has put the kibosh on Baharwali flings.

End is so tragic... Lallan's son is no more & his crony Pandeyji too. Was it a planned game by Lallan's rivals? Ashutosh has to take care of his grieving wife & in-laws and LT may make him his political heir. Let's see how Nidhi joins Ashu among all this.



3 saat tak patnivrata raha hai ashu...dekhthe hai ki how and when Nidhi puts a break to it😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: s_danger



so finally managed to fend Nikki.

Ashutosh ka ek to romantic scene likh dete na. Humko bhi thoda gyaan mil jaata.

You know what? My sister tried to make me write these scenes (she sent me videos and blue films) and I just couldn't manage it. My best effort looked like the hero wearing surgical gloves and touching the heroine with a sterilized bargepole. Above all, a mask and ensuring that he had used a mouthwash and further asking her whether she had any oral infection before kissing her. Chhheee...abhi bhi goosebumps aate hain. I don't know log aise scenes kaise likhte hain.

ANyways, AShutosh and Radhika ka romance bahut cute laga. She is Katrina Kaif (singing teri ore) and what about himself? she is going to have nauker ghar main, to compensate for the absence of her husband? ultimately her husband ne bhi to yahi kiya tha na? Kajri ke saath...

Kajri aage aayegi kya? something like a blackmail angle. And where is Nidhi?
Abhishek ka accident hogaya. ab aage?

jaldi update dijiye.



Tried to write a romantic scene..par nahi hua...I tried really hard but failed

Sujatha Rao used to write all sorts of scenes with elan..missing her sorely.

Update is on wednesday...Kajri is gone for good
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Vidishaa



Tried to write a romantic scene..par nahi hua...I tried really hard but failed

Sujatha Rao used to write all sorts of scenes with elan..missing her sorely.

Update is on wednesday...Kajri is gone for good



Ahh good good. Waiting now. WIll that be the last episode?
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Posted: 11 years ago
nope...2-3 more updts more..and then i'll go underground...coz people will bay for my blood
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Vidishaa

nope...2-3 more updts more..and then i'll go underground...coz people will bay for my blood



Ha, wahi soch rahi thi. abhi Nidhi ki entry huyi nahi aur aapke SS ka the end? Kissi bhi picture main jaise police sabse last main aati hain, waise Nidhi bhi last main aayegi kya?

You better go underground. Ek bodyguard bhi rakh lijiye. Best, come over to Singapore, I have a bunker ready for people, this can withstand a nuclear attack.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: s_danger



Ha, wahi soch rahi thi. abhi Nidhi ki entry huyi nahi aur aapke SS ka the end? Kissi bhi picture main jaise police sabse last main aati hain, waise Nidhi bhi last main aayegi kya?

You better go underground. Ek bodyguard bhi rakh lijiye. Best, come over to Singapore, I have a bunker ready for people, this can withstand a nuclear attack.



Nidhi is ashu's soulmate isn't she...story ka satyanash bhi wahi karegi...she will make an entry towards the end of next updt...waise uske aane ki aahat maine aaj ke update mein de di hai...find out if you can😆

I will not seek shelter in your bunker..kahin nikki aa gayi toh? she is as dangerous as others right?
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Vidishaa



Nidhi is ashu's soulmate isn't she...story ka satyanash bhi wahi karegi...she will make an entry towards the end of next updt...waise uske aane ki aahat maine aaj ke update mein de di hai...find out if you can😆

I will not seek shelter in your bunker..kahin nikki aa gayi toh? she is as dangerous as others right?



The woman whose image flashed to him on his SR: is that Nidhi? teen saal ke baad bhi yaad hain? hume to yahan do din baad kissi ki shakal yaad nahi rehti. HAt's off to your Ashutosh. Kya memory payi hain. Kitne GB ka RAM?
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: s_danger



The woman whose image flashed to him on his SR: is that Nidhi? teen saal ke baad bhi yaad hain? hume to yahan do din baad kissi ki shakal yaad nahi rehti. HAt's off to your Ashutosh. Kya memory payi hain. Kitne GB ka RAM?



Yep...😆

Ye GB wala Ram nahi hai...yeh ghar mei ram gali mein shyam wala Ram hai

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