SS- Hasratein final chapter page 55 24th sept - Page 17

🤣 Ashu aur Mallika...Oops..Radhika ki shaadi hogayi aur bachcha bhi?? Do din mein forum nahi aayi toh kya kya hogaya!! Vidisha.. you are faster than KTLK serial.

Originally posted by: Suvika.

🤣 Ashu aur Mallika...Oops..Radhika ki shaadi hogayi aur bachcha bhi?? Do din mein forum nahi aayi toh kya kya hogaya!! Vidisha.. you are faster than KTLK serial.

Read and caught up with the ones I missed too. You sure do have a way with words. Enjoyed and had a good laugh after a long time.

But what is this?? No SR details?? Not fair. I was expecting a disclaimer update.

Thoroughly enjoyed Ashu - Mallika... I mean Radhika romance. Kind of cute.

Sorry for going MIA. Health took a bad turn and there has been a sudden death in my family. Everything in chaos. Typing this through phone.

Like Deepa... me too waiting to see how Nidhi fits into the equation.

Take care Suvika.

Now don't use the word Mallika...I don't want Radhika to carry her 'other woman' stigma..😆

I was on the forefront pestering you for romantic scenes...but now I realise tht writing romantic scenes are tough...and writing intimate scenes even tougher...I suck at writing them..tried writing but broke into cold sweat...and hence left it to the reader's imagination.

Nidhi equation bigaad degi...😉

Things are moving at a fast pace as I know of no other way of writing a story. Though I love reading stories that move at a liesurely pace, writing them is a diff ballgame...tough.

4-5 update mein story khallas...😆

Very nice update Vidishaji...loved little Kanishk...now Ashu likes his Radhu...Abhishek death was a natural accident or a preplanned political murder.??? What is Lallan's reaction??Poor Radhika lost her younger brother...very sad.

Originally posted by: shobha21

Very nice update Vidishaji...loved little Kanishk...now Ashu likes his Radhu...Abhishek death was a natural accident or a preplanned political murder.??? What is Lallan's reaction??Poor Radhika lost her younger brother...very sad.

Thanks for reading Shobha..

.Ashu likes Radhu...but for how long??? Nidhi will rock the boat for sure right?

The answer for the rest of your ques will be given in Wednesday's update...😃

Originally posted by: Vidishaa

Take care Suvika.

Now don't use the word Mallika...I don't want Radhika to carry her 'other woman' stigma..😆

I was on the forefront pestering you for romantic scenes...but now I realise tht writing romantic scenes are tough...and writing intimate scenes even tougher...I suck at writing them..tried writing but broke into cold sweat...and hence left it to the reader's imagination.

Nidhi equation bigaad degi...😉

Things are moving at a fast pace as I know of no other way of writing a story. Though I love reading stories that move at a liesurely pace, writing them is a diff ballgame...tough.

4-5 update mein story khallas...😆

Originally posted by: Vidishaa

Thanks for reading Shobha..

.Ashu likes Radhu...but for how long??? Nidhi will rock the boat for sure right?

The answer for the rest of your ques will be given in Wednesday's update...😃

Yes...iam sure Nidhi will definitely rock the boat...will wait for wednesday.😃

Vidisha Aunty tussi great ho.

Ashu in a FF mood ( fast forward) straight going for the jugular? Aur kya time leap dikhayi, 3 yrs later they have a son...

More later, this Nikki is troubling a lot

Originally posted by: Suvika.

Nidhi equation bigaad degi woh toh mujhe lag hi raha tha. Thanks for the confirmation. LOL.

Forgot to mention. Ashu's thoughts on his SR cracked me up. So he usually went for the neck, huh!! 😆

trust me...I tried really hard to write a decent SR scene...even visualised Emraan Hashmi as Ashu...but nothing worked...in the end wrote Ashu's feelings and left the rest for folks like you to iagine...

even the description of Ashu's feelings was clumsy..I cringed before posting it😆

Originally posted by: shobha21

Yes...iam sure Nidhi will definitely rock the boat...will wait for wednesday.😃

Thanks😃

Originally posted by: s_danger

Vidisha Aunty tussi great ho.

Ashu in a FF mood ( fast forward) straight going for the jugular? Aur kya time leap dikhayi, 3 yrs later they have a son...

More later, this Nikki is troubling a lot

🤣 bolo to Nikki ko bhi ek role doon..next ss mein?

I can't write at a slow pace..major major drawback...the moment I start a story, I am eager to finish it...if I slow down then I lose interest and leave the story incomplete