OS - Dost Dost Na Raha.. Part 2 Pg 43 - Page 35

Originally posted by: Anjani9

What an update!!!!!!! Thank you so much...👏

Originally posted by: Swatishubh

Thank you so much for this second part Suvi di.

oh oh..today wifey is giving the review first...kya baat hain...😉😆 thank you Swati

The lovely description of Ashni pair is so ravishing. Loved the way they crossed each other at the steps and Nidhi adjusted his tie. O how sweet.

The searching scene of Ashu has worked upon me 😉 It was a cute discussion of their twins' birth.

yes...that was one of the khwaish of the readers. glad you liked it.

They eat smileys, got to take care a lot in the future😆

😆 who knows!! May be Shubham will be more like Induji's Nishu

I just laughed at the towel scene along with Nidhi 😛

Good night scene was very cute☺️

thank you...😃 i enjoyed writing both those scenes. actually this whole part 2 was fun to visualize and verbalize

Your narrative part is awesome - breakfast convo lead to kids' actions😆 and later Nidhi manaoing Ashu with the most happening song 😉 But i loved the piano version the most. Main agar kahoon.

I couldn't find that instrumental first...had to search a lot to find the one that i liked.

For once i felt for Mallika in the end, and on the second thought, it's good for her to cross the gates and leave for ever, cos you have rightly put in - True Love has no ending!

Thanks di 🤗 ❤️

you are very welcome!! And thank you for the review Swati.

Originally posted by: swati62

Wow just wow what a chapter. Loved this Ashutosh and Nidhi how I wish we were watching all this in the serial today. Missing KTLK can't believe it's been a year.

Originally posted by: aardhan

Nice continuation. Feels like the closure is complete, the past has been tightly closed and sealed. The little tie incident was true to form, could so imagine their reactions, impulsive Nidhi and diffident Ashu though he liked it too. 😉

humaare ghar mein bhi yahi hota hain...but role reversal. hubby is more into PDA..😉😆

And then that funny towel scene, only you can write! 😆 Poor Ashu, caught between a rock and hard place, oops I mean kids! 😉

yup yup...as Sagi has said..its quite common in houses with more than one kid. and in my house its 3 boys..you can imagine. i feel outed most of the time. 😛😆

And the late night scene, once again it is believable that after a few years and marriage and two kids the age-gap ceases to matter and one tends to take liberties with their husbands. SO Nidhi easy going, free talking attitude with Ashuji showed that. An love the change to AShuji... so hoped they would dot hat in the show but KPji was more intent of making a mockery of things he knew the viewers would appreciate.

i know...after a point the Dr Ashutosh felt a little weird to me..i mean its ok if its for fun but after that i was like...😕

But at the same time seeing that Ashu has really forgotten that Mallika had visited finally puts her doubts to rest. She now knows that Ashu meant what he said all those years ago when he claimed that after the poisoning he had helped her only out of humanity. She does not even feature in their talks, and he does not even remember her even if he saw her that morning. Nice way to show it... and earlier too after meeting Mallika he comes i search of Nidhi making sure she has eaten. Very cute and caring, so of course Nidhi is now completely confident in his love. The part emotional, part fun talk about the delivery was something I could relate to as well. I use the same tone when talking about mine.

so do I.. 😆 hubby was not in the country for my first delivery and he stayed away from the OT for my second C section😡😆

The fight in the morning and BB's reaction was superb. I can so see myself saying those things in the morning! 😆 But of course Ndhi goes too far. And ends up feeling bad when he walks out half way into breakfast... no, dishoom-dishoom! The twins' talks was funny and perfect for kids that age! I should know! 😆

yeah...you should know.😆 Kids that age are a constant delight. And their talk always sends us into fits of laughter.

Once again Nidhi and her friends were all in keeping with the show, Ahana's cuteness with the kids, Aditi's ever-active brain churning out ideas... all lovely woven into the grand finale... perfect songs. Again I could imagine AShu's expression the way you described it! Awesome!

as for the song...all thanks to you...🤗

Overall very enjoyable. This is the type of closure I wanted to see in the show for the Mallika track. 👏👍🏼 But they way they did it, they turned Mallika to a saint but the question always lingered if she had not left what would he have done? 😕

Jeez...Aarti...i don't want to think about it...😲🤢😕

Originally posted by: Tinku14

👏THE BEST OF ASHU AND NIDHI... AFTER WEDDING...⭐️ LOVED IT😛

Originally posted by: Suvika.

will be travelling this weekend Arpita...from 5th to 17th. Can you PM me before that?? You have really piqued my curiosity now. 😆

Originally posted by: arpitajaan

will be travelling this weekend Arpita...from 5th to 17th. Can you PM me before that?? You have really piqued my curiosity now. 😆

will be waiting. and forgot to add yesterday...a big big for buying my books.

Originally posted by: Suvika.

thank you Swati. There are a lot of if only that we keep thinking about. The CVs made a mess of what was a wonderful concept. 😡