OS - Dost Dost Na Raha.. Part 2 Pg 43 - Page 33

Originally posted by: Vidishaa

Coz I love MAllu

Originally posted by: Suvika.

who knows that better than me. but is that all you have to say after reading this part?? 😲😆

Originally posted by: Vidishaa

oh yeah...i loved writing that one. and also the mutual foot massage 😆

Originally posted by: indu6789

Liked it suvika...the lay out is good...ashu nidhi with twins...naughty ones who eat only smileys... 😛 .

thank you Induji. they do eat other things too but smileys are their all time fav 😉

Loved just loved the scene when nidhi adjusts ashu's tie in the hall..n he kind of pulls away,..so very ashu like..n then the pressing each others legs..leading to ... 😉 awesome..

yeah..it was fun writing both the scenes. thanks to your FF i was able to connect with the serial wala Ashu...😃

Mallu crying in the end..gave solace to my soul..how we love to see her cry...

true that. Nidhi ke ek ek aasu ka badla 😆

I hope you go on...the plot has tremendous potential...

Writerji!! 😲 this OS actually had only one part. Courtesy of Anjani I extended it to part two. But thats it. Any more and the title wouldn't hold any significance. 😊

And thank you so very much for reading and commenting. Means a lot to me Induji. 🤗

Originally posted by: Suvika.

Originally posted by: ruchshah

wow...Sujaji!!👏👏👏

I loved the scenes played...the kids wow!!😆 Ashu has all three loves of his life...after him😆

😲Ruchira?? YOU?? dhanya bhaag humaare!! 😆Seeing you after a real long time!!! How are you?? 🤗

thank you so much. 😃

Too goood...u made my day!!

now, i hope you write about Ashu-Nidhi as parents of these teens.😕 hopefully soon

I don't know when or how that will happen. I had initially wanted to start my story KMTM like that. kind of AshNi with teens in the present and the rest of the story as a flashback. But that didn't work out. Lets see. will think of something.

Thanks for PM...

Most welcome.

Originally posted by: arpitajaan

Excellent suja, this part has so many signature scenes and dialogues of suvika. Loved it. I could visualise the twin talk and their laughter. Nicely depicted, straight consigned to heart. The way you describe the outfits of the leads is simply awesome. Thanks for the pm, otherwise I would have missed this part.

on another note I have ordered 3 books of urs, will have to get it from India as no international service is available.

Great work.