OS - Dost Dost Na Raha.. Part 2 Pg 43 - Page 36

Originally posted by: swati62

Totally agree with u if the Cvs hadn't messed up the show, actor, and concept was amazing all they needed was a better storyline. U should have written it for them.

Originally posted by: bc123456

Wow Suvi that was some story loved it , loved their normal nok jok , beautifully written , and true the serial could have had so many interesting facets , but alas the dumb CVs gave us Khushi, Daksh and Diya ,

Originally posted by: bawaswift

Wow.. loved to see the happily married life of Ashni !!!👏

Thank you Bhavit. Your wife beat you to the review this time. 😆

The most gorgeous n the most dashing.. It was a treat to read their eyes catching each other... and later one of them up the podium and the other one down, it was so heart touching watching Nidhi adjusting Ashu's tie. ⭐️

Your narration is mind blowing. The scene changes from the hall to the hospital building... Loved to see Ashu so caring for Nidhi.. ! It was so nice of them recalling the days their kids were born..

that was one of the khwaish of my readers. yet to hear from the person who actually made that wish 😡

It was loving to know that Aryan looked like Ashu.. tall built but had naughty eyes like Nidhi n her impish smile.. On the other hand.. Anisha resembled Nidhi.. but had her baba' eyes.. I just loved this.. loved to see the twins carrying their parents' looks .. This is the bliss ! 🤗

true. Its like they make the parents look alike..

I loved the giggles of kids... both are shouting n only they both know what they are talking.. very cute n sweet !😛

The towel scene following.. haha.. bach gaya Ashu warna wo do the... 😉😆they were two against him.. 😛

😆 I know...

The morning fight was even more good. I hope this don't happen much with the working women, or is it the insight of yours that has lead to the convo?

Bang On!! 😆

Loved the kids doing actions with their parents' actions. 😆 And Baba leaving the scene.. good idea Sirji !😳

Nidhi realising that today she has said sumthing more to Ashu.. n now the dinner is the time to take care of the things ! Liked her singing to the number..

Kya kare...Induji not fulfilling my khwaish..and i got impatient.😆

n later all turning into smooth n lovely atmosphere.. depictng a beautiful n happily ever after life of our Ashni !

Mallika's fate is the same.. she is not at all noticed n is left to herself !

Yes. she has seized to matter to everyone. Most of all to AshNi. Ashu completely forgot to mention meeting her to Nidhi. THats how little Mallika means to him now. Next to nothing.

Lovely part Suvi di... your narrative part has always been awesome... Hope to see more of it if comes from this or sum another peice of work !

Thank you so much Bhavit.

Who says She devil dont like to please Ashni n her readers... She always does !😃

She Devil does love AshNi...no two ways about it. But she loves to give them some bumpy rides more. I don't like smooth roads. No excitement there. 😆 The thrill of writing pain is indescribable to me. 😉

Originally posted by: Suvika.

Originally posted by: bawaswift

Originally posted by: Suvika.

you know...this reminds me of Doc and her FF. In that Ashu slaps Nidhi in one scene. We all asked her that we wanted to see a scene where he gets slapped. The list started and went on. One wanted him to tie the mangalsutra again and one wanted him to do Nidhi's hair. She fulfilled all those wishes in her FF. Then later, in my FF Kashmakash, she had one wish..to see AShu combing his daughter's hair and doing pigtails. I wrote that in the epilogue. I remember her words so well.. "KPji's Ashu combed Mallu's hair..YUCK! My Ashu combed Nidhi's hair..but YOU did the best of all. He combed his daughter hair. Fantastic! Mazaa aagaya."

This whole wish fulfillment reminded me of that.

Originally posted by: bawaswift

yes it was. she hated loose ends. "Show ka satya nash yaar! karte kya hain yeh log! Tcha!" She used to vent it out during our calls. 😆