Madamji,
I thought that if i delay my comments you will come to my place with a danda in hand. At least that way we can meet. This morning my husband called to say that he will be going to Bangalore for three days and will get my tickets too booked so that "you can meet your Su"'. But what is the use!! You will be away at your maika.
Re. part two...I do not know as to how many times I read and reread it. I just loved every bit of it. Blue saree and grey suit have become the official dress code for them.Loved Nidhi adjusting Ashu's tie and receiving a glare from him His concern for her is felt in his taking care of her lunch.
Ashni's conversation regarding the birth of their miracles is so very natural and Ashu's suffering hearing Nidhi's screams is palpable.But his question as to why Nidhi was screaming creating the miracle made me laugh.
The twins are really cute and are two bundles of mischief. The towel scene is so very real.
I just loved the massaging scene. You are really innovative and as I have correctly said we are your students.
The breakfast scene is so very natural and is experienced in every household someday or other. The only question is whether they have a friend like Aditi who with her innovative ways like writing massages on balloons or making her sing a song and dance along.
Finally it is well said that true love has no ending.
Very well written Sujata.I always feel as if I am watching scene after scene but never felt as if I am reading the update.You are a natural screen play writer.
Waiting for the next FF.
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Bindi
