Ashni FF: Mann ki Lagan(Th 1); NOTE, Pg 151 - Page 7

Originally posted by: Veenaper

Arti, Hearty Congratulations on your new venture. I have always been a big fan of your writing - enjoyed the Signature Romantic Gesture Series and your beautiful OS too wherein you explored the story exactly the way we wanted it to be in the show.

Thank you so much Veena. Its wonderful to see you in this thread. 🤗 Your comments are always apt and very valuable.

And Signature Series.. wow! Seems like a faraway dream now! Yes, that OS was definitely how I thought the show should have gone but did not!

Read the prologue - must say that the story holds a lot of promise.

Thank you. Hope I can keep it up...

Dr. Ashutosh, a Paediatrician joining KGH Chennai - a new beginning with the baggage of a divorce left behind. Dr. Nidhi, a Gynaecologist exiting from KGH Chennai after completing her internship - looks like they will meet elsewhere.

First chapter will explain that! And location is different, a chance to explore something new too! 😃

Loved the brother sister combo of Dr, Ashutosh - Anjali and Dr. Nidhi - Armaan. Would love to read more.

Thank you. Yes, two complete loving families. I am hoping to be able to use them all in a nice way...

Originally posted by: deepa17

Thank you .. No words to explain

Originally posted by: deepa17

Aarti excellent back drop .. All the characters and their respective roles excellent

Will fill my res soon

Originally posted by: aardhan

I am yet to hear about those hobbies. out with them fast😆😉

Trying to write... Progress is slow

Don't worry about the speed. take your time...some things are worth waiting. 😃

Originally posted by: bawaswift

Beautiful siggy 👏 Thank you 😛

Aarti, you have chosen good professions for everyone in your FF !

Well, wanted them to be different. Bored of the same ones, except for the doctor part.

And the families goes very very well... Ashu has parents, and Anji as his sis.,. Even Nidhi has both the parents and above all my all time favorite, Armaan as her bro. ! Wow ! This is gonna be very interesting !

Yes, wanted full families here. As it is Ashu's background is difficult. But there will be problems and opportunities with this too...

The list of songs you have given is melodious.. will be looking forward to listen to any of them in every chapter 😃

Every chapter! 😲 Well, once I write them, let's see, maybe it will end up being every chapter 😃

Prologue has given a good setting.. with Ashu got his long awaited divorce, with a bitter taste towards love. And now he is leaving his city including his parents, sis, n with a regret in his eyes.

Yes, he is a dejected man who now lives for his work. But he still loves his family. He is not running away from them. He is running away from all that gossip and other people that make living in the same place more painful.

Priya Shastri, who wud never mean to him anymore.. he knows will be haunting him everywhere, forever..! Oh.. what a bad marriage he had.

Oh yes! He can never forget this experience... not for a long time! It will haunt him. And what he feels for Priya, I don't know!

So landed in the city of strangers to him, Chennai.. Lets see what fate he has here.

Nidhi is out of KGH - Chennai after completing her internship and Ashu has entered there.

Yes... did not want them to meet so soon after his divorce. He definitely needs some time. So Nidhi is out of there 😃

Aarti here you have cleared that Ashu is " her future " ! Thanks for this lovely FF and wonderful Prologue. Eagerly waiting for the first chapter now.

Thanks ! 😃

Of course! Its an Ashni story! 😆 Chapter one in few days. I cannot do it very fast, very limited time

Thanks for the detailed review Bawa. Hope you will like the story 😛

Originally posted by: deepa17

Hello again

Originally posted by: deepa17

Aarti take your time with the updates

Originally posted by: Suvika.