OS: Iss raat ki...Chap 7 and epilogue pg 60

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Suvika.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#181

what is your Sunday plan? no outing with papa??

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Posted: 11 years ago

#182

Originally posted by: Suvika.
what is your Sunday plan? no outing with papa??

He is in shower. Abhi mujhe jaana hai. Today I am trying my hand at baking a cake.

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Suvika.

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: s_danger

He is in shower. Abhi mujhe jaana hai. Today I am trying my hand at baking a cake.

mujhe bhi khaana hain..

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Sagi97

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Suvika.

mujhe bhi khaana hain..

Pehle OTG theek hona hai. We are waiting for the electrician.

Wo aayega, oven theek karega. Phir cake banega.

Aapko bhej doongi. Tab tak chill.

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Suvika.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#185

Originally posted by: s_danger

you might need to do some changes in that cover page you sent me...will email you the details later. nothing major.

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Sagi97

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Suvika.

mujhe bhi khaana hain..

Banaane to do...pata nahi.

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Originally posted by: Suvika.

you might need to do some changes in that cover page you sent me...will email you the details later. nothing major.

Matlab? those publishers ko pasand aaya?

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Aardhan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#188

Chapter 2

Continuing and adding on to the mystery at the very end...👍🏼. both chapters ended with the spooky house and that caretaker, of course in this chapter it is a recollection of what happened before...

But Mansuhani and Mallika coochi-cooing! That's very tough to imagine even though it is not hard to magine Mallika as a rebellious teen! 😆 But really, putting head on his shoulders and all... too much! 😉

Good continuation with the creep Dadlani... from what I can gather Dadlani is the real slimy guy here, Mansukhani is being dragged into it due to his association. Mansukhani seems more like a frustrated, more like 'at the wits end' kind of person, and someone who wants to make fast money, so is willing to even do some underhand things.

And that scene with the balloon girl was little confusing... how can Dadlani know before hand they would stop at the signal, something with the sentence construction is not right here...

Now what... and where are Ashu and Nidhi??

Sagi, why do I get the feeling that all this is sort of a history? Are you going to have a time leap and show present day Mallika and Mansukhani 🤔 along with Ashu and Nidhi in KGH. Manukhani has now learnt the ways of the world in Dadlani's company and now is a clever hand at swindling now (someone who has graduated to a hanky rather than his sleeve?) 😆

Keep it up, story is gaining momentum nicely now 😛

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Sagi97

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Posted: 11 years ago

#189

Originally posted by: aardhan
Chapter 2
Continuing and adding on to the mystery at the very end...👍🏼. both chapters ended with the spooky house and that caretaker, of course in this chapter it is a recollection of what happened before...

But Mansuhani and Mallika coochi-cooing! That's very tough to imagine even though it is not hard to magine Mallika as a rebellious teen! 😆 But really, putting head on his shoulders and all... too much! 😉 I got a severe headache trying to visualize the scene.

Good continuation with the creep Dadlani... from what I can gather Dadlani is the real slimy guy here, Mansukhani is being dragged into it due to his association. Mansukhani seems more like a frustrated, more like 'at the wits end' kind of person, and someone who wants to make fast money, so is willing to even do some underhand things.

Right on track. Dadlani is the creep, Mansukhani some sort of bechara who has got caught in the circumstances. If you remember this is something like hera-pheri track
And that scene with the balloon girl was little confusing... how can Dadlani know before hand they would stop at the signal, something with the sentence construction is not right here...
Yeh scene achha nahi aaya. An aftermath of the headache...

Now what... and where are Ashu and Nidhi??
Wait a little.
Sagi, why do I get the feeling that all this is sort of a history? Are you going to have a time leap and show present day Mallika and Mansukhani 🤔 along with Ashu and Nidhi in KGH. Manukhani has now learnt the ways of the world in Dadlani's company and now is a clever hand at swindling now (someone who has graduated to a hanky rather than his sleeve?) 😆
Now that's too much of a KTLK addiction. You mean I should get in Sue-Aditya company?
Keep it up, story is gaining momentum nicely now 😛