OS: Pappa Jaldi Aa Jaana

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menaka

@ariyadasa

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Hey Aazeen this time i didn't miss ur OS.

It's awsome my dear 👏

I had experience this story in real life too.

I met so many Nidhi's , the stories of them are same like this. You had not miss any part of their lives.

These are the real stories of military families.

How the children miss their father , How the wife control her emotions for the sake of their children . You had written it in a perfect way

The end is the best how they rejoice their unity.

Thumbs up for your creativity Aazeen.👍🏼

Hey Aazeen just imagine Dr Ashutosh with military uniform 😳

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Aazeen02

@Aazeen02

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: bc123456
Lovely

Thank u doc... 😃

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Anjani9

@Anjani9

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Aazeen, Are you coming up with Part-2?

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Anjani9

@Anjani9

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: Aazeen02
Why are you crying Anju di? 😆
i agree it was senti, but at the end of the day, they all are happy and together na... Isn't that the point after all?
Anyways, thanx a lot Di, that you liked it... Thanx a lot for ur comment... Now smile... 😃

Somehow I cried reading it...

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Aazeen02

@Aazeen02

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: Anjani9
Aazeen, Are you coming up with Part-2?

U tell me, what u want to read in the next update... Coz frankly I do not know what else to write...
Writing any separations and high Voltage things will make me cry this time... So now u tell me, if u think 2nd part is writable...

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Aazeen02

@Aazeen02

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Anjani9

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Somehow I cried reading it...

Yup! Certain things are unexplainable at times...

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gargpoo

@gargpoo

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

awesome OS Aazeen..so touching👏

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Aazeen02

@Aazeen02

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Bawa Bhaiya and Ariya Di, plz don't get angry... I'll reply to both of u at leisure... I'm really busy at this moment... Tomorrow is Eid na... Have loads to do...