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Posted: 11 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: saibanu

Very nicely written Aazeen , and very well portrayed👏👏

Loved it dear❤️

Thanx a lot Sai... I'm really so glad that u've liked it... Thanx a lot...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

Thank u sooo much Tupu si... 🤗
arrey kya baat kar rahi h di... Bas emotions ko portray karne ki koshish karti hu, and infact seekh rahi hu apne badon se yahan...
Thank u anyways...
PS: This OS is for u actually Tupu di... I still remember, u wanted to read Ashni out of the medical profession, and here it is... I just forgot to mention it to u...

Thank you dear... So sweet of you to remember it and writing OS specially for me!! Love you soul-sis!! 🤗🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

Nahi Bhaiya, aap bilkul fikar mat kijiye... Maine aapke review ka reply isliye nahi kiya, kyuki, main jaldi-jaldi chote-chote wale reviews ko reply kar rahi thi, taaki aaraam se aapke review ka reply karoon... I can feel it how much of enthu u must have had when u wrote it to me... And trust me, ek bhi aisa review, mera likhna safal kar deta hai... And u made my day, when I saw ur comment right after getting up in the morning... I screamed a big Good morning to all my family members, still lying in the bed... Now u can just imagine how happy I'm to read ur review... And that too u came to comment in my fic for the first time... I really thank u from the bottom of my heart...
And, another reason m delayed in replying back is, coz kal Eid hai, and I have plenty of work to do simultaneously... Toh jo bhi waqt mujhe khali milta h, usmein aakar main yahan ek reply kar jaati hu...
Plz aap upset mat hoiyega, main aapke revie ka reply jald hi karungi... Ok?

Wow ! First of all... Happy Eid to you Aazeen ! 😃 🥳

Thanks for your kind words n i will be waiting for your reply ... ⭐️ You got screaming on my review... me at the top now... Thanks Aazu.. take your time.. n will be waiting to read more from you now !!! 😊
Have a nice time ahead celebrating the festival ! 😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: bawaswift

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Lovely OS Aazeen !⭐️

-- First of all, my hearty welcome to you on my fic thread... I know, this is the first time, you've come to comment here... Welcome hai Ji aapka...
Thank u so-so-so Much Bhaiya that you've liked it so much! I'm really glad... 😃

Very emotional though... but your way of expressing the life of Ashni in the background of Army life and with two kids,, Ashi n Aadi... i just loved it ! Wonderful story n great efforts you have put in👏

-- Thank u again... That is how exactly how their lives are... Lavish, reputed, prosperous, yet, the pinning pain of the absence of a vital member of the family...
I had this idea of writing Ashni at the backdrop of an armyman and his family, since a long time... But itni ulajh jaa rahi thi, that couldn't complete it, till yesterday...
Although, this Ashutosh is quite soft at heart, the actual Army man are very rigid I tell u... Real Heartstones...🤣 🤣 They wont that easily spill their hearts out...🤣

I read the second last part twice.. to know the real feelings of Nidhi once again.. ! We all have seen them with the hospital background.. but this emotional reality is much par excellence !⭐️

-- So exactly how did u feel about this Nidhi? But yeah! She is quite different from the Nidhi in the show... Here Nidhi is quite very-very mature, holding up the responsibility of the house Single Handedly, and parenting her children alone... That itselves make her quite far away from childishness... Although she enjoys everything with her kids, yet, she is not a kid...
Now u let me know, how you feel about this Nidhi...

I am very happy to read it n have enjoyed it fully ! Thank you so much Aazeen for this story !
-- My pleasure Bhai... I too have enjoyed every bit while writing this story... This is somewhere very close to my heart... I'm an Army man's Grand daughter... And hearing their experiences, made me give way to this story, although, the reality is a little more painful...

Got to know abt an Army person's family life... living on the verge every second of every minute ! They are on the border... but back home, they leave a family full of waits n waits and news of their well being ! Simply loved it !👍🏼

-- My pleasure Bhai... But, other than this, the Army officers can take their family along with them(Except in wars) and so, when ever the postings are changed, leaving their homes and friends and all, is again one painful thing for them... Its one of those agonies, that my father and his siblings too faced... Anyways, in totality... Have kept before u what I knew... Aapko pasand aaya, is more than enough for me...

Thanx a lot Bhai for the review... U've really made my day...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks Aazuu will read it asap 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: ttrocks

Thank you dear... So sweet of you to remember it and writing OS specially for me!! Love you soul-sis!! 🤗

Yeah! I remember your words on our e-mail chat... It was 17th November 2012, when I had been writing the first update of JHUBJ, then is when u had told me... Tab se ye baat mere dimaag mein chal rahi thi, n finally Got to write it now, after almost a Year... So sorry for the delay though!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: bawaswift


Wow ! First of all... Happy Eid to you Aazeen !😃🥳



-- Thank u Bhaiya... Aapko bhi Eid Mubaarak...! 😃

Thanks for your kind words n i will be waiting for your reply ...⭐️You got screaming on my review... me at the top now...Thanks Aazu.. take your time.. n will be waiting to read more from you now !!!😊

--Yup! I was very happy...
And Bhaiya, this is my 6th work... Isse pehle bhi I've written 2 more OS and 3 FFs... If ever you get time, please read them for once... I'll be very glad... The links to all my works are in the Media Gallery thread, the last post is made by me...
Nahi toh otherwise, Its always ok!
Have a nice time ahead celebrating the festival !😊😊

-- Thank u so very much... My entire family is not together right now, My elder sis stays away for her studies... So dunn feel like enjoying much without her... But yeah! Will enjoy... 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: suku_07

Thanks Aazuu will read it asap😛

Yup sure read at ur convinience...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aazeen02

Thanx a lot Bhai for the review... U've really made my day...

So good to know abt you Aazu ! And thanks so much for this warm welcome ! 😃
I know the hardstones are made at border.. but our Ashu was unique... hard at the hospital... n soft as an the Army Officer.. ! 😛 Glad to knw that you are from an Army background. I really admire military personals from every field... Army is at its best though ! 😊😊
Nidhi... Well i loved the portrayal of this Nidhi as well... Here, she is not the chirpy n bubbly girl.. but a devoting mother n a loving wife, who is all alone, single handedly bringing up her home n children. She is a bit high in her heights.. as she has no one to listen to her pouted nose and no one to look in her eyes to say that you are tired... she is all alone on karwa chauth.. all alone during the Kargil news.. all alone again, when her father n family comes to meet her.. she is thoughful as always, she knows any scene can divert her kids' minds n heart to a sad n bad phase... i cherished this Nidhi in the same way i have cherished the doc Nidhi.. ! Here, she is more mature, more thoughtful, n her chlid like talks are far behind.. cos she has faced a reality ... a reality that she is with Ashu,.. but any time can be a part of her not being with him.. Such a like of Army wives. Anything happens, they are thru.. thru to a world to face n move on .. How fantastically you have put in this aspect of Ashni ! I am overwhelmed ! Ashni are n were together... and Nidhi has proved once again that she can fight with all the odds.. n she is doing it ! 👏⭐️
Yes Aazu, i loved this OS.. had this been in the show.. i mean the emotional trauma at this par.. the show wud have broken all the paramounts... ! Take my word ! 👍🏼
Papa jaldi a jaanaa... ! Esteemed OS !
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