OS: Pappa Jaldi Aa Jaana - Page 11

Originally posted by: Pardeshi.Mithu

chalo Aazz will wait for ur reply to all my comments 😆

Originally posted by: Maheerah

Sooo beautiful...loved the pain, the wait,the happiness...

In short, loved everything..😃

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

Hello Maheerah...! I guess u are new to this forum... Welcome dear,,,,
Thanx a lot... So-so very much dear for ur likings and comment on my OS... Thanx dear...

Originally posted by: bawaswift

I really admire your feelings Aazu for your family n towards the life.. Keep going sis😊

No Aazu, your writes are not immature.. i have read two of them.. Pyaar toh hona hi tha.. and meri toh maa.. You have given meaning to the titles.. Need an applaud..👏 n if i say thanks to anytihng.. it means that i have felt that with heart..😃

Aazu, i will write more abt your previous writes more.. Tell me where can i leave the comments ?

Nice song for living happy n a peaceful life⭐️

Originally posted by: Maheerah

Ummm

Well, yes i am very new but i have never missed any episode of KTLK..i love it soo very much and especially the AshNi factor...

Originally posted by: sshirley

Aazeen - This is your best writing till date... I aam not calling it ur masterpiece becoz I feel aapka masterpiece is yet to come...

-- Thanx a lot Shirley di... Yes! I too do feel, this has been the best till now... N m really happy wid dis OS... As far as a Master piece is concerned, well, time would tell, if that is in my fortune or not... But thanx anyways...

Wow - this is mature writing indeed.. all emotions perfectly balanced... and the situations v. well depicted.. kya kahoon - liked every scene so cant sigle out a few of them.. absolutely fabulous Aazeen..

-- Thanx a lot Di... Again... I just kept writing what my heart felt and understood... And m glad u've liked it, n thought it to be mature enough of my age... I just kept putting emotions that were to be there... N d rest is infront of u...

And you havenailed the characterizations so well that I don't know which character to feel most for - nidhi (torn between being a wife and mother), the kids(who love their mom but terribly miss their dad) or CV-DB (who are totally helpless)or Ashu (who misses and wants to spend every minute with his family, but is bound by his duty n patriotism)

-- Actually, I've tried putting each and every person's POV subtly, as much as I could do... That tells, although, this is somewhere from Children's pov, but gives a clear way to the elder's situation too... But to pick out, I really feel Nidhi's Character/role to be the strongest... She is the women, that I really adore...

Wow Aazeen,youbeautifully portrayed their love, their individual vulnerabilities)

bas ab bahut bol diya, so cant say anything else except

-- Thanx... Really, Thanx a lot Shirley di... Aap na bhi kaho, yet I can understand what u tried saying... N really very-very glad that u liked this so much... Thank u for the review di... 😃

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

Oh! Thats great... Infact awesome...
Yup! The Ashni factor is something in itself, that has turned us all Gaga over them n the show, n thus, this forum to...

Anyways, my heartiest welcome, on behalf of the entire forum...😃

So you've been to other Ff and os, or this was the first fic u read?

Originally posted by: Maheerah

This was the first one actually because its title was damn appealing..😃

I hope to make GR8 friends in this forum aswell😃

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

Thank u Maheerah! Yup! The title is gud!

And Inshallah! U'll have gud frnds here... Why not start from me... Friends...???

Originally posted by: Maheerah

Would love to be..i have already sent you buddy request..😃