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PMithalee

@PMithalee

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#81

maana ki pyaar ki hadd hoti hain!!!!! par intezaar ki bhi hadd hoti hain...der se aana teri aadat hee sahi...der se hee magar aaja..!!!!

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PMithalee

@PMithalee

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#82

maine ye OS abhi tak nahi pada...babes tum hee shortcut main bata do na phone par...What say?

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PMithalee

@PMithalee

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#83

Acha ji main haari chalo maan jaao na...ye meriSaasu maa jo ho sakti thi unka song hain 😛

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suku_07

@suku_07

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: Aazeen02
Thanx a lot Suku di... I': so glad u liked this story... Though emotionally powerpacked, yet, have tried to bring in all I could to entertain u all... Hope I lived to u people's expectations...
Will try writing more di... 😃

You did... Will look forward to your writings 😊

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PMithalee

@PMithalee

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#85

Mohnish ji kya thode din ruk nahi sake!!!!! itni jaldi thi shaadi karna ki!!! 😭. 😭. 😭

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PMithalee

@PMithalee

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#86

chalo Aazz will wait for ur reply to all my comments 😆

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Maheerah

@maheerah_khan

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#87

Sooo beautiful...loved the pain, the wait,the happiness...

In short, loved everything..😃

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Bhavit Kapoor

@bawaswift

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: Aazeen02
Thank u so much Bhaiya... Do read them n let me know, wat u feel... Although U'll feel a lot of immaturity in my writings... Yet... Have a look...

And again, yup! Family and its values mean a lot to me... Finding happiness in little things are always better than waiting for an opportunity to be happy over llarge things... So, my motto of life is-Hanste-hanste kat jaayein raste,
zindagi yuhi chalti rahe,
Khushi mile ya gham,
Badlenge na hum.,
Duniya chaahe badalti rahe...

I really admire your feelings Aazu for your family n towards the life.. Keep going sis 😊

No Aazu, your writes are not immature.. i have read two of them.. Pyaar toh hona hi tha.. and meri toh maa.. You have given meaning to the titles.. Need an applaud..👏 n if i say thanks to anytihng.. it means that i have felt that with heart.. 😃

Aazu, i will write more abt your previous writes more.. Tell me where can i leave the comments ?

Nice song for living happy n a peaceful life ⭐️

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sshirley

@sshirley

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#89

Aazeen - This is your best writing till date... I aam not calling it ur masterpiece becoz I feel aapka masterpiece is yet to come...

Wow - this is mature writing indeed.. all emotions perfectly balanced... and the situations v. well depicted.. kya kahoon - liked every scene so cant sigle out a few of them.. absolutely fabulous Aazeen..

And you have nailed the characterizations so well that I don't know which character to feel most for - nidhi (torn between being a wife and mother), the kids (who love their mom but terribly miss their dad) or CV-DB (who are totally helpless) or Ashu (who misses and wants to spend every minute with his family, but is bound by his duty n patriotism)

Wow Aazeen, you beautifully portrayed their love, their individual vulnerabilities)

bas ab bahut bol diya, so cant say anything else except