OS: Shadows from the Past (Chap 12, Pg. 117, Note, Pg. 130, VM Pg 131) - Page 9

Originally posted by: deepa17

Aarti .. You write well.. I used to actually wait for you to post reviews on Suvis FFs.. So there was no doubt that you could write..

Thanks Deepali. How was your weekend? 😊

Please don't remind Sujatha, but 4 reviews are still pending. 😉

Will read your next part tomorrow as it is late here..

Have you read it as yet?

Hope your kids are better now..

Are you back in the US?

Yes to both your questions. Landed on Wed at mid-night! Delays, missed connections, re-routed 😒and finally got home...

Also PM when you update please .. Not regular here now.

Ok. 😊

Originally posted by: sonyjknum

Wonderful,was scrolling down for more,the chap seemed too short,

Thank you Sony.

Yeah, the chapter was a tad small. Actually the chapter turned out too long and I divided it into two, so no. 3 is more a continuation of this one. 😃

loved the way you included that credit card wala fight,and you are right,the cvs failed in showing the next level of Ashni's relation,waiting eagerly for next update

Thanks again. I always thought there should have been more than simply saying Nidhi was immature. 😔 And after Mallika, which Nidhi handled with a lot of maturity, I think CVs were wrong in continuing with that claim. And I have always felt that the serious baby discussion at the point was not the way to go. Hence this version. Hope it makes sense. 😃

Originally posted by: suku_07

It was awesome Aarti ji... The chapter was small though but had full impact...You are making up for everything that CVs missed out...AWESOME 👏

Originally posted by: Diksha_1991

Fantastic Chapter...👏 👏

Loved the way you have put across the thoughts which Cvs were not able to...

Looking forward for next update...

Originally posted by: Veenaper

Arti, good continuation. Ashu in a serious dilemma to reinstate Nidhi at KGH without showing any bias and this affecting his driving skills ! Nidhi thinking of how she has made no headway in getting any information from him as regards her joining back.

Yes, the next chapter is more on this as well, sort of the to and fro we saw in the show itself just before the Ranji sangeet but this version will be more suited to this context. The Cvs were inconsistent with Nidhi. During Mallika, she was shown so mature and someone who thought deeply and then poof! The moment she goes Nidhi becomes a child again! How? And when someone has gone through CV's illness, Kerala separation, then wedding adjustments, hubby's accident, Mallika, would that person not think more about her life? They suddenly show Nidhi is serious in her career without giving some explanation like this or showing it was a result of all she has faced.

And at this crucial juncture the credit card fiasco only adds fuel to the fire and Ashu walks away not willing to hear her point of view and dismissing it as a frivolous whim. Of course his words that she would have understood the value of money if she had earned it was very hurtful. You have given a good dimension to the story here on Nidhi's thoughts.

Yes, that point in the show was a good place to have a heart to heart, go back to the past and solve some of the issues. It was a thing that Ashu should have shown some guilt but the CVs did not do that. Instead it became all about his desire, need for baby, preggy Mallika... nothing about Nidhi and then suddenly it became all about Nidhi;s career... so hopefully this OS will bridge that gap. 😊

Originally posted by: Anjani9

Thank you Aarti for the update on sunday afternoon...you have made Forum colorful...

Originally posted by: bawaswift

Aarti, you are definitely going to fill the void now... ! 😊 The scenes you have narrated are with a great flow towards the ongoing as well as upcoming moves ahead ! ⭐️

The guilt of Ashu is continued n his nervousness plus Nidhi's Credit card expenses made him fumed once again.. ! Got to reach many durable paths Ashu !

I wonder how the answers Nidhi will get as she is frustrated and understanding the situation at the same time.. ! An awesome character she has n hurt as well ... after all she is been shown the doors of Kgh, n then being rebuked of no " value of money " at all n "walked off without given a glance "

Now, waiting eagerly to watch out how he is gonna make the things go easy !

Nice one Aarti ⭐️👏 Good decision to fill the lost scenes into the show... ! 😊

Originally posted by: sshirley

Hey Aarti,

Hats off.. u actually have an amazing depth n write beautifully..

The dismissal of nidz stood out like a sore thumb in the show.. I m so glad that you are going to give justice to this. also, I just love the way u r giving more depth or another meaning to the scenes from the show... awesome, just awesome..

I am so sorry Aarti that I can not give a detailed to this superb OS.. I will only say that I am v. v. eagerly waiting for the next part.

One request - can't the parts be longer please? M too greedy u c.

Originally posted by: kritika4ever

Thanks Aarti for considering this subject. So thoughtful of you.
Very mature thinking and great writing! 👏👏👏
Brilliant is the only word..

Ashutosh and Nidhi both are waiting for perfect moment to initiate the discussion, hope in next part, at least one of them will do that.
Looking forward to next update.
Not yet, next will be a continuation of this one... but soon. There's something Nidhi will soon figure out too. In this OS everything is a journey of self-realization and nothing will be thrust on the two characters. 😊

Hearty Congratulations on your very first OS!

Originally posted by: aardhan

You are welcome Anjani. 😊

But what's this? No comments, no questions even! 😉 😲 Why?