OS: Shadows from the Past (Chap 12, Pg. 117, Note, Pg. 130, VM Pg 131)

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Veenaper

@Veenaper

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Arti, good continuation. Ashu in a serious dilemma to reinstate Nidhi at KGH without showing any bias and this affecting his driving skills ! Nidhi thinking of how she has made no headway in getting any information from him as regards her joining back.

And at this crucial juncture the credit card fiasco only adds fuel to the fire and Ashu walks away not willing to hear her point of view and dismissing it as a frivolous whim. Of course his words that she would have understood the value of money if she had earned it was very hurtful. You have given a good dimension to the story here on Nidhi's thoughts.

Edited by Veenaper - 12 years ago

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Anjani9

@Anjani9

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Thank you Aarti for the update on sunday afternoon...you have made Forum colorful...

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Bhavit Kapoor

@bawaswift

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#73

Aarti, you are definitely going to fill the void now... ! 😊 The scenes you have narrated are with a great flow towards the ongoing as well as upcoming moves ahead ! ⭐️

The guilt of Ashu is continued n his nervousness plus Nidhi's Credit card expenses made him fumed once again.. ! Got to reach many durable paths Ashu !

I wonder how the answers Nidhi will get as she is frustrated and understanding the situation at the same time.. ! An awesome character she has n hurt as well ... after all she is been shown the doors of Kgh, n then being rebuked of no " value of money " at all n "walked off without given a glance "

Now, waiting eagerly to watch out how he is gonna make the things go easy !

Nice one Aarti ⭐️👏 Good decision to fill the lost scenes into the show... ! 😊

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sshirley

@sshirley

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

Hey Aarti,

Hats off.. u actually have an amazing depth n write beautifully..

The dismissal of nidz stood out like a sore thumb in the show.. I m so glad that you are going to give justice to this. also, I just love the way u r giving more depth or another meaning to the scenes from the show... awesome, just awesome..

I am so sorry Aarti that I can not give a detailed to this superb OS.. I will only say that I am v. v. eagerly waiting for the next part.

One request - can't the parts be longer please? M too greedy u c.

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kritika4ever

@kritika4ever

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Thanks Aarti for considering this subject. So thoughtful of you.
Very mature thinking and great writing! 👏👏👏
Brilliant is the only word..

Ashutosh and Nidhi both are waiting for perfect moment to initiate the discussion, hope in next part, at least one of them will do that.
Looking forward to next update.

Hearty Congratulations on your very first OS!

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deepaligupta197

@deepaligupta197

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Aarti that was a beauitful interpretation something i wud have loved to c in the show!!!

We all make mistakes, have struggles, and even regret things in our past. But you are not your mistakes, you are not your struggles, and Ashu is here now with the power to shape his future.Yet, if you look at the way humans are designed to learn, we learn by making mistakes.

Nidhi knew that if Ashu is rude and inconsiderate, she was certain that he had some unresolved issues inside. That he had some major problems, anger, resentment, or the heartache he is trying to cope with or overcome. The last thing he needed was for her to make matters worse by responding angrily. Portrays Nidhi's character more mature nd understanding.

Well written!!!👏

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PMithalee

@PMithalee

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#77

chotu sha update tha 😆

But beautiful Aarti ji👏 To the point writing 👍🏼 ,excellent description of thoughts of Ashni👍🏼 And what always matters to me is character consistency👏 can imagine all the scenes and Ashu's expressions😳Will wait for the next update😳

And Thank u so much for the PM🤗 muaah!!