OS: The Rain & My Man (Part 4 / Page 19) - Page 16

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: pansy123


Nice update... perfect flow of emotions


The way you took it to the conclusion was simply awesome...the right
blend of panic-when Nidhi saw cheerful atmosphere in the house,


My heart dipped. Is baba
again trying to get me engaged to someone?</b>


revulsion-when she confronted Col. Verma asserting her stand,


My lips trembled with
fear but I bit them in order to keep my strength. I couldn't fell weak. And he
need to know, that it's my life that he is deciding upon.



I stood straight with a rage away from Dadi Bua's hands. Every pore of my being
was burning in anger.



"Nahi baba...Koi roka nahi hoga aj yahan" I said with a determination
and he looked at me with killing eyes.


Romantic triumph- when they celebrated the success of their love,


He smiled and cupping my
face, placed a soft lingering kiss on my forehead. The softness of his lips
against my skin, send goose bumps down my body.



"Abh yaqeen aya..." He parted away and asked and in reply, I hugged
him tightly the next moment.



My heart was jumping in joy. I could literally feel butterflies dancing in my
stomach.



His warmth, his closeness seemed to have made me forget all about the pain,
anger and frustration, I went through last last few weeks. Even my
surroundings.



A few moments later, when I felt his arms around myself, I realized that I have
took him by surprise with my hug.



I tried to back out, not wanting him to feel awkward but he held me tightly in
place. An involuntary smile got placed on my lips sensing that he has let loose
of all his reservation.



He didn't utter a word but his silence said it all.


gratitude-to have friends in high places,


"Thank you souch
Anji...Tu janti nahi tu ne mere liye kia kia hai?" I was truly feeling
blessed to have a friend like her in my life.



"Dosti ke liye kuch bhi" She said as she hugged me tightly for a bit
and left.


<b>Contentment- to heart's content for a new beginning


That was the rain, which made me realize my love for
this amazing man...and now it witness our official togetherness too.



Rains will always stay special to me cause of this man who was standing beside
me with his killing smile and who have my heart for eternity.


Simply Awesome...👏




thanku so much dear...
am glad u liked the parts
thanku for mentioning the scenes u liked...it meant that those emotions reached to u...
thanku for ur support throughout this os...
take care
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Amu_05

Perfect end of beautiful lovestory...though it is begining of AshNi journey..! Loved all parts very much. Take care and give us the pleasure of reading ur stories.



thanku amu..
defo its a beginning of ashni's love story...
thanku for taking out time n giving this os ur support...
take care dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful os aba waiting for the next one
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Posted: 12 years ago
No need to say thanks I really enjoy and love your writing dear, hope we get to read more and more...How are you feeling now?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

beautiful os aba waiting for the next one



thanku so much dear... :D
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: pansy123

No need to say thanks I really enjoy and love your writing dear, hope we get to read more and more...How are you feeling now?



am honour yaar.
yup...i m fine now...
i have written another os...will post that tonight or tomorrow...
its actually a continuation of an old ashni os of mine...will post it
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Posted: 12 years ago
I will give my review tomorrw...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Anjani9

I will give my review tomorrw...



no prob dear...
take ur time :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely OS, both sad and happy emotios have come out very welll...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Anjani9

Lovely OS, both sad and happy emotios have come out very welll...



thanku dear...
happy to see you liking it...
take care😊

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