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PMithalee

@PMithalee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: Anjani9

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Only Mithalee or others also?
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Only Mithalee 😛 Coz I am a Good Girl... 😳

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Anjani9

@Anjani9

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Only Mithalee or others also?
</font> Only Mithalee 😛 Coz I am a Good Girl... 😳

OK...Tell about me..

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Anjani9

@Anjani9

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

I think we will be breaking our heads it is Armaan/ Abhi or Mallika and you will come up with someone like Anji/ Rohan/ HK or HK's daughter (character hidden)...

The update is too short...need more...

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PMithalee

@PMithalee

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: Anjani9
I think we will be breaking our heads it is Armaan/ Abhi or Mallika and you will come up with someone like Anji/ Rohan/ HK or HK's daughter (character hidden)...
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Exactly i was thinking the same...Aisa kuch hua na toh SUVIKA U r khatam 😡 i'll come to ur home and will take of ur lappy...and yup the update was short...need more

Edited by Mithalee - 12 years ago

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creativebird

@creativebird

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

👏👏

Another commendable chapter. I may need more time to sink in and give thorough review but may not get chance for few days so putting up thoughts from first impression.

waise why did you get down from the dias last night?

Very smart character, perfectly fits in shoes of SP. For Nidhi's sack is he doubting even Ashu's action? Or may be SP in him trying to get idea of connection of the person deliberately trying to pull away Ashu to give easy way to hurt Nidhi?

Nidhi wets her lips and decides to take the leap: toh shaayad zindagi bhar mein aap ka intezaar karti.

He snatches her into his arms at that and hugs her tight. His breath shudders out as the complete depth of her feelings hit him: Nidhi!! aur jab mein waapas aaya toh..I was like a..and yet you still! (he closes his eyes and just experiences the feeling of her in his arms) thank you Nidhi. thank you so very much. I mean it. (he once again cups her cheeks and places a tender kiss on her forehead as a tribute) thank you. (her tremulous smile turns into a soft hiccupping laugh just before she dives into his arms and hugs him tight. He is not angry with me..he is not disgusted.. he said thank you..that means he is ok with the fact that I love him! thank you God! thank you for this! Ashu tilts her head up and places a soft kiss on her lips) much as I want to stay like this, I think we better get ready. (Nidhi smiles and both part reluctantly to begin their day) I will drop you at KGH on my way.

Again you managed to swing away the show in your emotional scenes here. Ashu -Nidhi face to face and heart to heart convo. Ashu openly acknowledging and accepting Nidhi's point of view and her feelings for him and above all being grateful to her for loving him selflessly. I don't think he is realizing that he is deeply falling for her with her this gesture.

This area is your masterstroke as a writer. You have portrayed Ashu-Nidhi relationship excellently in different modes over the progression of chapters. Friendship to betrayal, separation, revenge, guilt, understanding and now progressing to love - pure and selfless love. 👏👏

Mallika's character feels very off suit in this whole FF to me, unless her OBG speciality have any significance in the story. Or you deliberately kept it that way?😒 Her connection to VM is very specific during very silent years and looks like you used it just as a general convo but can surely confuse readers to mislead on mystery track.

Anji-Nidhi convo is reader's delight always.

Nidhi lifts her mangalsutra and swings it as her eyes stare at the movement: yeah. unhone..i mean..usne raaste mein mujhe KGH mein drop kiya.

Nidhi's feeling of proud and sense of acceptance by her husband in true sense after knowing her feeling for him is showing evidently in her action.

Ashu-Anji convo is very touchy too. Anji's welcome gesture conveys her message that now she can trust Ashu for taking care of all well being and happiness of Nidhi compare to their first convo in office where Anji very suspicious to open up to Ashu to discuss Nidhi's past. And Ashu's response assuring her that he is worth her trust.

How beautifully you come back to relate the past events to present! Nidhi's apprehension to gift Ashu something with the fear of being dejected shakes up Ashu's guilt for all his past deed. Once again I will say in all your stories small gestures speaks tons.(I call it Sujatha signature... ) You don't need any dialogues for realization of feelings.

As far as Armaan being present at scene of incidents, I have some gut feeling like Rohan, just gut feeling and no still need to fill empty dots but don't want to put up and spoil all other readers mystery. So for now

So far Rohan's character was flawless as SP but small doubt is he really there with intension of talking to Armaan only or trying to read expression of Abhi too? If not so why would he open up his questions before Abhi knowing he is a criminal lawyer and can make things more complicated for him if Armaan is involved by any means?

Hope I covered everything and if not then will do it on Monday morning, our time PST.

Edited by creativebird - 12 years ago

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Aardhan

@aardhan

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Another lovely chapter, good to see Ashu and Nidhi making progress in the right direction. Also good to see the murder/ attempted murder case is heading somewhere in the the neighborhood of being solved soon...But my legs are headed towards the bed, so rest of the review later... need to read again it to write one. 😃

BTW good morning to you. 😊

Edited by aardhan - 12 years ago

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PMithalee

@PMithalee

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: aardhan
Another lovely chapter, good to see Ashu and Nidhi making progress in the right direction. Also good to see the murder/ attempted murder case is heading somewhere in the the neighborhood of being solved soon...But my legs are headed towards the bed, so rest of the review later... need to read again it to write one. 😃

BTW good morning to you.😊

Good Night Aarti ji 😛

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Aardhan

@aardhan

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: Mithalee
Good Night Aarti ji 😛

Good morning Mithalee. 😊

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pansy123

@pansy123

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#79

Nice chap...i'll write review later right now i'm working...not like something 'tit for tat'. Thank you.

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Anjani9

@Anjani9

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: Mithalee
Exactly i was thinking the same...Aisa kuch hua na toh SUVIKA U r khatam 😡 i'll come to ur home and will take of ur lappy...and yup the update was short...need more

She said He/ She is lunatic also...

On the face, noone appears lunatic here...

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