Tu Hi Tu..Th 4 Chap 12 pg 101 May 9 - Page 10

Originally posted by: shreyalvashni

great work done as always 😊

Originally posted by: deepaligupta197

Screaming like Tarzan Mithalee!😆

Originally posted by: swati62

This plot is super complicated. If Aarman is trying to kill NIdhi he can easily do it in the hospital. Y would he take the risk of going to the reception?

Originally posted by: Anjani9

😆 Kya kare ji...hamari Suvika Amma ko weekends ke din aisi bulaana padta😆 😳

Originally posted by: arpitajaan

SUjata, got time to go through the comments in the forum'really enthused by your involvement'.so nice of you to take time and reply to each & everyone's comment👏''..

Arpita..i try my best..

this FF and the bechainee se uska endhazaar'has taken me to my teenage days when me and my sis were addicted to a novel in an regional weekly which use to come on every Friday mornings & there used to be a fight over who will read it first and in that process we use to miss our college bus at 7 AM'finally mom gave an ultimatum and said if you don't stop this I will stop buying d weekly and started hiding it from us'.after many yrs I am feeling the same bechaini and enthusiasm'' Your FF is worth it''sooo desperately waiting for Monday for the next update, countdown begin'''.2 days to go'''''''''''..

😆 yeah..i really hope i can get the next chapter out by Monday. Unexpected guests are going to be at home from today evening to tomorrow night...so..😳

Originally posted by: Mithalee

Wokay review time...

Hmmm...toh Aditi ka case vaapas khulne vaala hain gud gud...aur vo bhi Rohan is going to handle it...gud gud...gud going Suvika...hehehe :-D pata hain in sab main achi baat kya honewali hain Ashu roz Nidhi ko Kgh tak drop karega...Haaye!! mera shona he is cho cho chweet...
😆
The convo between Ashu and Nidhi was lovely...yaar ye pyaare pyaare chote chote pal na mera dil jeet lete hain...especially that line u know, jab Ashu Nidhi se puchta hain agar main aata hee nahi toh tum kya karti and she replies intezaar karti...Excellent yaar...too good...

hmmm..i liked that scene too..

Then again that breakfast table par juice scene was Awesome...Haayee!!! Frankly speaking i found it really romantic... Par ye kya? ye Mallu kaha se tapak padi??? Kya vo wantedly raaste par khadi thi??I know main kuch zyaada sochri par kya karu aapki ye mystery ke chakkar main mujhe har kisi par doubt hota hain hehaha;-)

i keep telling you guys to forget about the serial ka Mallika and think of Mallika in Teri Ore..😆

And yipee Nidhi went for shopping vo bhi Ashu ke liye kuch lekar aayee hey dhinka chika...par vo gift dene ke liye jo uske mann main jijhak thi na vo mere dil ko chu gayi yaar...koi chaahe beetee baaton ko bhulaane ki laakh koshish karle par vo iss tarah dil ke kisi kone main ghar kar leti hain ki usse mitane main thoda samay lagta hain but the best thing about this Ashni is they talk...i mean baatein karte hain aur ek dusre ko samjhne ki koshish karte hain..
Aapke har FF ka plus point understanding between Ashni... Iske baad jo hua...Ahem Ahem...Naku siggu ostundi..

🤣 siggostondi ante kudaradu...i want a review for that also...😉😆
Aur phir cliffhanger gandi bachi...but Rohan aur Abhi ka convo mujhe bohot pasand aaya...especially Rohan wow!! Kya banda hain boss!!! It is like beta Ashu tu relax kar dusra hero aachuka hain...He is so...so...so...bas He is so...hehehe...

the word is HOT Mithalee..Rohan is HOT..😆

par ek baat bolu Armaan ki car zarur vaha hall ke bahar thi par mujhe lagta hain ki...mujhe lagta hain ki...mujie lagta hain ki vo car Armaan vaha lekar nahi gaya,kisi aur ka kaam tha vo;-) par chalo dekhte hain kya hota hain...chalo jaldi next chap post karo...

next update..Monday or Tuesday..not sure..dekhte hain

Originally posted by: Anjani9

I think we will be breaking our heads it is Armaan/ Abhi or Mallika and you will come up with someone like Anji/ Rohan/ HK or HK's daughter (character hidden)...

The update is too short...need more...

Originally posted by: Anjani9

😆 Kya kare ji...hamari Suvika Amma ko weekends ke din aisi bulaana padta😆 😳

Originally posted by: creativebird

👏👏

Another commendable chapter. I may need more time to sink in and give thorough review but may not get chance for few days so putting up thoughts from first impression.

waise why did you get down from the dias last night?

Very smart character, perfectly fits in shoes of SP. For Nidhi's sack is he doubting even Ashu's action? Or may be SP in him trying to get idea of connection of the person deliberately trying to pull away Ashu to give easy way to hurt Nidhi?

yes..at this point is not ready to leave anyone out for any reason. but your second reason was what he was thinking at that point.

Nidhi wets her lips and decides to take the leap: toh shaayad zindagi bhar mein aap ka intezaar karti.

He snatches her into his arms at that and hugs her tight. His breath shudders out as the complete depth of her feelings hit him: Nidhi!! aur jab mein waapas aaya toh..I was like a..and yet you still! (he closes his eyes and just experiences the feeling of her in his arms) thank you Nidhi. thank you so very much. I mean it. (he once again cups her cheeks and places a tender kiss on her forehead as a tribute) thank you. (her tremulous smile turns into a soft hiccupping laugh just before she dives into his arms and hugs him tight. He is not angry with me..he is not disgusted.. he said thank you..that means he is ok with the fact that I love him! thank you God! thank you for this! Ashu tilts her head up and places a soft kiss on her lips) much as I want to stay like this, I think we better get ready. (Nidhi smiles and both part reluctantly to begin their day) I will drop you at KGH on my way.

Again you managed to swing away the show in your emotional scenes here. Ashu -Nidhi face to face and heart to heart convo. Ashu openly acknowledging and accepting Nidhi's point of view and her feelings for him and above all being grateful to her for loving him selflessly. I don't think he is realizing that he is deeply falling for her with her this gesture.

This area is your masterstroke as a writer. You have portrayed Ashu-Nidhi relationship excellently in different modes over the progression of chapters. Friendship to betrayal, separation, revenge, guilt, understanding and now progressing to love - pure and selfless love. 👏👏

Mallika's character feels very off suit in this whole FF to me, unless her OBG speciality have any significance in the story. Or you deliberately kept it that way?😒 Her connection to VM is very specific during very silent years and looks like you used it just as a general convo but can surely confuse readers to mislead on mystery track.

no. this scene was just a way of getting Mallika and Ashutosh introduced to each other. and for Ashutosh to remember Mallika..

Anji-Nidhi convo is reader's delight always.

Nidhi lifts her mangalsutra and swings it as her eyes stare at the movement: yeah. unhone..i mean..usne raaste mein mujhe KGH mein drop kiya.

Nidhi's feeling of proud and sense of acceptance by her husband in true sense after knowing her feeling for him is showing evidently in her action.

How beautifully you come back to relate the past events to present! Nidhi's apprehension to gift Ashu something with the fear of being dejected shakes up Ashu's guilt for all his past deed. Once again I will say in all your stories small gestures speaks tons.(I call it Sujatha signature... ) You don't need any dialogues for realization of feelings.

☺️ thank you

As far as Armaan being present at scene of incidents, I have some gut feeling like Rohan, just gut feeling and no still need to fill empty dots but don't want to put up and spoil all other readers mystery. So for now

So far Rohan's character was flawless as SP but small doubt is he really there with intension of talking to Armaan only or trying to read expression of Abhi too? If not so why would he open up his questions before Abhi knowing he is a criminal lawyer and can make things more complicated for him if Armaan is involved by any means?

a little of both i guess..as i said at this pt he is looking at everything n everyone..

Hope I covered everything and if not then will do it on Monday morning, our time PST.

yup.. thank you..🤗