OS: I shouldn't have left her alone!!! - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very well written OS,how we all wished that atleast once Ashu tells Mallika in as much words what Nidhi means to him.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: ariyadasa

You
made my day Azeen what a gift yarr so happy🤗😛

-- So-so Glad to know, I cud do so for u... Love it...

i love to see such abrilliantashu who cares his wife in such a loving way.

-- Ariya di, I had so wanted to see Ashu doing something like this for Nidhi... He did some of the times, But, these kind of reactions were never seen...

love this part mostas
I love to see this in Real KTLK ( You are better than KP sir dear you know the
fans taste and you had treat them superbly🤗😛

-- Awww... This is more than a compliment... I love this... Thanx a ton...

A: How dare u
Mallika...!!!! How dare u... Pehli, how dare u speak to Nidhi, the way way u
did... Secondly, How dare u spoke all u said to her, that I regret marrying
her... How dare u break her heart... And How dare u lied to me... What u said,
Nidhi is in the hospital??? When the whole hospital knows that she left long
back... God Dammit Mallika... Where is Nidhi???[/P]

Mallika was trying to
avoid the situation, Ashutosh in his anger didn't even look at the person in
the cabin...


M: Ashutosh!! Woh... tum
pareshan mat ho... Nidhi ghar aa jaayegi... Bachhi thodi hai.. tum khamakha
pareshan ho rahe ho...


Ashutosh disbelievingly
looked at Mallika...


A: Khamakha??? Mallika,
are u crazy or what??? Nidhi has left the place hours back... she hadn't
returned yet, she isn't picking up my call... Look at the whether outside...
Dammit Mallika... WHERE IS MY WIFE...??? KAHAN HAI MERI BIWI??? lOOK MALLIKA,
AGAR USEY KUCH B HUA NA, TOH BETTER BEWARE OF ME...!!!! Ashutosh had lost it
completely...





Please Azeen up date
the next soon as I feel it will be really interesting . please make us happy
like this till season 2😳

-- I too would have loved it, But, I'm really not getting, wat u want me to write next... This os is complete in my sense... Writing any further wud mean dragging the story, that wud b of no use...

If u still think, thetre shud have been more, let me know...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: achiever

mallu ko barabar jawaab diya.. i iluved tht part..😆 DD ko bhi nahi baksha!!


-- Aur nahi toh kya??? Ashu had never heard abt Mallika stooping low, to clear things like this... N wen he came to know, it was a feeling mixed up wid rage against DD n Mallu, lots of tension for Nidhi, n restlessness... So, who cares to think, ke kaun kya hai, when he knows, they are the culprits of his wife...


luved Ashu's concern for Nidhi!😳


-- Ooh! He is so-so nice there... As Natural as a Hubby wud, to his wife, who is lost somewhere... N frankly telling u, they are the cutest moments...😆

u know, few months back, there was a very popular murder there in my city... My Mausi used to go from dat route to her workplace... N coz of the Murder, it had become a high tension area... My Mausa ji, that most of the time, who remains neutral... Doesn't shows his feelings oftenly, had been practically on his toes the entire day, only to make sure, his wife was ok...😆 😆 I guess, thats love...


aaah.. dargah revisited!

-- Yeah! I found Dargah to be the appropriate place... As it has always bound their Love...

and u brot the littlu in thr life very nicely..

-- Thanku... So much...

sabko dara diya.. wahi main sochu Nidhi itni kamzor kaise nikli ke mallu aur DD ke words se behosh ho gayi!!!!😆


-- Actually baat sirf littlu ki ni thi... It had been, Mood swings on a lil thing, then drenched in winter Rainfalls for hours (I tell u, they are the worst rainfalls... U with no chance fall ill wid it, n to be drenched for hours is too much... Thankfully usko pneumonia nahi hua...😆 😆 )... So, she had really got hurt with that accusations on her... Otherwise, she's a brave gal... Ab kya hai na, mujhe aisa scene create karna tha... Nidhi ki bahaduri ke chalte toh ye possible tha nahi... So to justify the act, I brought, The little Budle of Joy in their lives...😆


thnk u Azi.. for this beauuutiful OS!🤗


-- Oh! Thats my pleasure Manni di... Frankly, I learn a lot from u guys... U people inspire me to write... Otherwise, ye sab mere bas ki cheezein hi nahin... Love u di...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

Thanx a lot Swati... I really wanted Ashu to say something in favour of his wife n defend her... But, most of the time I was disappointed, Ashu very seldomly did this...

Aren't most Husbands like that. Mine is 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: swati62

Aren't most Husbands like that. Mine is 😃

mine is overprotective.. !😆😆😆.. sometimes i feel like pulling my hair out ! Guess these r luv ke sideeffects!😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: sonyjknum

Very well written OS,how we all wished that atleast once Ashu tells Mallika in as much words what Nidhi means to him.

Thanks a lot Sony di... Ur comments value a lot to me...

Yup! This was the heartfelt wish we all had.. I guess, I have tried fulfilling it to an extent... Thank u di...
Aazeen02 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: swati62

Aren't most Husbands like that. Mine is😃

I dunno...😆 I nevr had one... Oops! Sorry, I still haven't got one...😆 😆 😆

But Yeah! My father is a protective one... Dare anybody say anything unfair abt his wife, n He wud be ready to cut them into pieces...😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
Wow beautiful os aazeen...Luved it... A big Thanks for such a beautiful os...U write so well aap toh cha gaye...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
Aazeen , this is beautifully written .👏👏..loved this Ashu , he is so caring and How i wished to see this Ashu who once tell mallika what nidhi is to him ..."sigh" we never got to see this ...

but thank you for this wonderful OS ...Loved the ending , So Nidhi is preggy ...Awww 😳, why dont you continue a bit buddy , Please 😳

think about it 😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
When are giving another OS?

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