OS: I shouldn't have left her alone!!! - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: aardhan

Good variation Aazeen. Liked this OS.

Ashu's concern for Nidhi, his lashing out and warning Mallika and also putting DD in his place...was fun reading this.
Finally the happy twist in the end, keep it up!😃

Thank U so Much Aarti di for a wonderful review... It means a lot to me...

Glad u, had fun reading it... I had so wanted to see, Ashu concerned for Nidhi's safety, n in the mean while, setting straight, all those, who thought n said anything bad against his Nidhi...

I had tried to fulfill all our wishes, thats all...

As for the last twist, well, as I n Manisha di were dicussing, Nidhi has been way a more, internally strong girl... She has always been prepared to hear the ''Kuch toh log kahenge'' parts... N had always beautifully handled it too...
And because, I wanted to create a scene, where Nidhi is left missing, I had to put up the mood swing thing to justify her act, otherwise, I don't think, she can be insecured by words by any Tom,Dick n Harry... So, that was it...
Thanx a lot Aarti di for the review... Love it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
great chapter azeen di loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: shreyalvashni

great chapter azeen di loved it

Thank u Shreya for the review... Glad u lved it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
Very nice OS Aazeen. Loved the fiercely protective Ashu, though it was short. Do write more such OS, in the absence of ktlk, need such reads. Thanks for the PM😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: ssktlk

Very nice OS Aazeen.

-- Thank u Sanya di...

Loved the fiercely protective Ashu,

-- I so wanted to see, such an Ashu...

though it was short. Do write more such OS, in the absence of ktlk, need such reads.

-- Di, this was a small thing out of my refreshing time... I had only that much time... So, only this much...

Thanks for the PM😊
-- My pleasure... But, where are u these days... Dun see u often...

PS: Why dont u write some... After all, we all know, u r a wonderful writer...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
Ah! That was so sweet. Loved it👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: pansy123

Ah! That was so sweet. Loved it👏

Thank u Pansy (Is that ur real name?)... Glad, U loved it... I too loved writing it... Some sweet nothings make some sweet things... That is wat it is to me... Ashu concerned... Lashing at the ones, who did wrong to his nidhi... Confessing, that no matter wat he loves his wife... That was all I wanted... Hope i cud convey it that wa...

Thanx for ur review dear.. I have commented on ur ff also... Plz check it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
Very well written. Loved it. when is next one?



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Posted: 12 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: rajanigandha26

Very well written. Loved it. when is next one?



Thank u Rajani Di...

What next? Next part or next os?

If next part, then no next part...
If next os, then, not before Mid May...

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