SFL {Th:2}Chap 12 parts 1 & 2 pg42 updtd 9/1/13 - Page 23

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Libra


Nahin Sweetheart, Pakka. I will not be doing any more disappearing.
And I will stay in touch, and try to be regular on forum.

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Posted: 12 years ago
welcome Anuji.

both the parts of this chapter were nicely elaborate...loving the mini suspense on 2nd day of Ashni union.

humor ka tadka was equally well placed...loved the chapter.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Anuji, You have starved the kids for 2 months and served Biryani???😲
Do you know how many PMs have sent????
Am happy you are back...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
🤗🤗Anudidi is back... with double dhamaka!! 🥳



Thank you for this chapter. Read both parts in one go and loved them so much... Awesome, superb chapter!! Superlike!! ❤️ Smooth flow of events, lots of romance with hilarity sprinkled throughout... 😃 and the last line... "Isn't AMY a girl's name..." 😆😆😆😆😆 Ohhh my... Would love to see Ashu's reaction to his cute, innocent child-woman bride in next chapter...😛😆😆😆😆 And, hope ur health is better and u r feeling ok now. 🤗🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow, loved ur Shakespeare streak..U r really fond of him na??
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Libra


I promise. No more disappearing. Sacchi.

🤗 awww...thank you!!! Will come with review soon!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vidyasabde

welcome Anuji.


both the parts of this chapter were nicely elaborate...loving the mini suspense on 2nd day of Ashni union.

humor ka tadka was equally well placed...loved the chapter.

Thank you so much Vidyaji
For the lovely comments, and for the welcome back.😃
I am glad you liked the funny parts. I am always so nervous when writing those. My children say
that I have no idea what humor is.😆
Libra thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Anjani9

Anuji, You have starved the kids for 2 months and served Biryani???😲

Do you know how many PMs have sent????
Am happy you are back...😊


Hellp Anjaniji
Thank you so much for the welcome.😳
I am happy to be back also.😃

Par yeh kya, biryani, starving kids?????😕
I don't understand. And I am still waiting for your review.😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ttrocks

🤗🤗Anudidi is back... with double dhamaka!! 🥳



Thank you for this chapter. Read both parts in one go and loved them so much... Awesome, superb chapter!! Superlike!! ❤️ Smooth flow of events, lots of romance with hilarity sprinkled throughout... 😃 and the last line... "Isn't AMY a girl's name..." 😆 Ohhh my... Would love to see Ashu's reaction to his cute, innocent child-woman bride in next chapter...😆 And, hope ur health is better and u r feeling ok now. 🤗🤗


Oh My


Thank you so much Tupu


What a welcome back. Thank you so much.
I am glad you liked the chap.

I am doing fine now, and even my migraines, are coming as frequently. Or are as painful.😃
Thank you so much for your concern.😳
Next update will be romantic and funny, no drama.
ASHNI Honeymoon.😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
Main bohot beemaar hoon... I'm not able to write any review now... But pakka will do as my exams end...

Bahaaron phool barsaao meri Aunty aayi hain... Meri Aunty aayi hain...

Welcome back Aunty... I hope, u can stay this way...

Before I go, just wanna say, U've put hands on Humour in a very nice Fashion... We've seen u writing, emotions, romance,ect-ect... But this time u did a marvellous job wid Romance... Ashni's stand on 'Komal' How she seems to be Shoorpnakha's twin, n How she must have sprouted later on when she was born, was Hilarious... I was literally rofling on it...

Even Manny's character seems a jolly one... Had really seasoned ur update...

Purab, one of a creep of its own kind... He needs to be rebuked by Ashu now...

Nidhi behind the bars was the only dil todu thing in the update... But again u've put everything straight...

Loved Ashu's concern for Nidhi as soon as she got her bail... Tightly hugging her n all...

Was very surprised with Ranga's behaviour... I mean, he believed the evidences... Not even discussing it for once with Ashu or Nidhi...

Ufff!!! Anji ne do panchiyon ke jode ko alag kar diya... I mean for the time being... Bechaare ka temper badhme laga...

N finally jaake utra Nidhi par... Awww.. My sweetipie Nidhi... Khaamakha gusse ka shikaar ho gayi... But, yeah, she retorted back rightly... Putting Ashu straight wid the facts...

Awww... Ashu manaaoing his wifey, by singing a song...( This is a surprise element from u, coz all I knew was, u weren't much into newer generation songs n movies... N coming up wid Soniyo was indeed refreshing)

now wats up wid Rohan talking abt the evidences? For sure Purab has manipulated them to show Nidhi a culprit... M curious...

N finally the ever so lovely Romance... I tell u, mastery haasil kar rahi ho aap ismein... Actually wonderful...

N the last part... God! That was Hilarious... Nidhi waking him up twice for her queries... N the last one... God ji bachaao... Amy par sawaal? Ashu has been so disgusted wid this name, n now, Nidhi wid it.. I feel, this is going to be one teasing name for Ashu from Nidhi...

Ok ji... Maine socha ni tha, that I'll b typing a review... Par bed par pade hue kar diya... I hope, my review was satisfying..

So next is TTF na? Kya pooch sakti hu kab milega...

Ok, before I forget, Aunty, u've broken u'r own records this time...
This was a mighty long chap... But I loves it anyways... Superb... Thank u Aunty... It means so much, thau took out time to write this much for us... Love u...

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