SFL {Th:2}Chap 12 parts 1 & 2 pg42 updtd 9/1/13 - Page 24

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: deepali.rock

Wow, loved ur Shakespeare streak..U r really fond of him na??


Thanks Deepali
Yes I Really do love Shakespeare.
In fact what Nidhi said about her love of the subject,
Well that's me. 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Ena292

🤗 awww...thank you!!! Will come with review soon!!!


Thanks Ena
I will wait for the review.😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Libraji,i am very disappointed that you even didn't see my review for your ff.But it's ok.I read both the chap.It was superb.Ashutosh and his calmness.And then shakspere ka postmortom.And love inspector.KOMAL and liked her brother too.Manny.I just love ashu and many's chemistry.And now ashu became more free towards nidhi too.Armaan was very cute in this chap.So overall it was good and refreshing chap.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Libra


Hellp Anjaniji
Thank you so much for the welcome.😳
I am happy to be back also.😃

Par yeh kya, biryani, starving kids?????😕
I don't understand. And I am still waiting for your review.😃

No updates for 2 months is starving...
Such a long chapter is equal to serving to Biryani...😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

Main bohot beemaar hoon... I'm not able to write any review now... But pakka will do as my exams end...

Hi Aazeen😃

What's the matter sweetheart,
Kya hu tumhe.?😲



Bahaaron phool barsaao meri Aunty aayi hain... Meri Aunty aayi hain...

Welcome back Aunty... I hope, u can stay this way...


LOL. Still a dramebaaz. Hunh? 😆
Thank you. I will stay this time. Actually I never went away,
just took a hiatus.😉


Before I go, just wanna say, U've put hands on Humour in a very nice Fashion... We've seen u writing, emotions, romance,ect-ect... But this time u did a marvellous job wid Romance... Ashni's stand on 'Komal' How she seems to be Shoorpnakha's twin, n How she must have sprouted later on when she was born, was Hilarious... I was literally rofling on it...
Even Manny's character seems a jolly one... Had really seasoned ur update...


Thank you Mam. So glad you liked the humor. I tried my level best. And there is more to come with Komal and Nidhi.
Also Manny.😉


Purab, one of a creep of its own kind... He needs to be rebuked by Ashu now...

Yep next chap. Ashu is going to kick his butt.😆


Nidhi behind the bars was the only dil todu thing in the update... But again u've put everything straight...

Loved Ashu's concern for Nidhi as soon as she got her bail... Tightly hugging her n all...

I can't our heroine behind baars for long. Usse toh nikaalna hi tha.😃




Was very surprised with Ranga's behaviour... I mean, he believed the evidences... Not even discussing it for once with Ashu or Nidhi...

Yes he did but really evidence is such he had no choice. You will see in the next update. he will also redeem himself.😃


Ufff!!! Anji ne do panchiyon ke jode ko alag kar diya... I mean for the time being... Bechaare ka temper badhme laga...

N finally jaake utra Nidhi par... Awww.. My sweetipie Nidhi... Khaamakha gusse ka shikaar ho gayi... But, yeah, she retorted back rightly... Putting Ashu straight wid the facts...


Saaliyan toh tang karti hi hain. Its their job. 😆
Yes Nidhi set him straight. She is loving gentle, and even intimidated y him at times, but she is no doormat.😃



Awww... Ashu manaaoing his wifey, by singing a song...( This is a surprise element from u, coz all I knew was, u weren't much into newer generation songs n movies... N coming up wid Soniyo was indeed refreshing)

I love old songs, but I like new ones too. Main abhi itni old nahin hui hoon, Honey.😆
Although I am getting there.




now wats up wid Rohan talking abt the evidences? For sure Purab has manipulated them to show Nidhi a culprit... M curious...

You will find out in the next update. Can't give away the suspense.😉


N finally the ever so lovely Romance... I tell u, mastery haasil kar rahi ho aap ismein... Actually wonderful...


Thanks.😳


N the last part... God! That was Hilarious... Nidhi waking him up twice for her queries... N the last one... God ji bachaao... Amy par sawaal? Ashu has been so disgusted wid this name, n now, Nidhi wid it.. I feel, this is going to be one teasing name for Ashu from Nidhi...

Yes. But wait till next update. In this chap I have given one reason, but, I have yet to reveal the other one. That you will find out in new update why Manny calls Ashutosh Amy.😉


Ok ji... Maine socha ni tha, that I'll b typing a review... Par bed par pade hue kar diya... I hope, my review was satisfying..

Yes you certainly have given the whole review. And it was a wonderful one. Thank tyou so much Honey. I really appreciate the effort it must have cost., with your being sick and all.
Please Take care of yourself, and get better soon.

So next is TTF na? Kya pooch sakti hu kab milega...

Yes next update is TTF.
I cant tell you kab. Everytime I do, I jinx it. So let it be a surprise. Hmmm?

Ok, before I forget, Aunty, u've broken u'r own records this time...
This was a mighty long chap... But I loves it anyways... Superb... Thank u Aunty... It means so much, thau took out time to write this much for us... Love u...


I know yaar bahut lamba chap tha. I will try and cut the size down. But kya karoon, once I start writing, I cant seem to stop.
I am so glad you enjoyed reading it.
. Get well soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
I will read the update again and give the review...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: alkaparmart

Libraji,i am very disappointed that you even didn't see my review for your ff.But it's ok.I read both the chap.It was superb.Ashutosh and his calmness.And then shakspere ka postmortom.And love inspector.KOMAL and liked her brother too.Manny.I just love ashu and many's chemistry.And now ashu became more free towards nidhi too.Armaan was very cute in this chap.So overall it was good and refreshing chap.


Hi Alkaji

I am so sorry I missed your comments. But were they on another FF?
These are the first I have seen for this update.
But I apologize. It was not intentional. Most likely an oversight.

Thank you for the comments on this update. i am so glad you liked the chap.

Next update is TTF. 😃

Sorry once again.

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Posted: 12 years ago
my comment on this thread on page no 24 or around.No opolise libraji.Hota hai.but you read it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Kya baat hai Anu ji, mein kuch din ke liye gayab kya hui aapne dhamakedar entry maar li 😉 ... Anyways read you chapter in one go, will post my detailed review asap for now I can say that, it was AWESOME and I just loved it !! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Alkaji,
Just read your review of my FF
Thank you so much, for all the wonderful comments.
I am glad you like the story. It is close to my heart also.
And abhi toh kaafi kuch bacha hai ismein.
I have a lot of ideas running around in my head for it.
So hopefully it will be around for a while.
Thank you once again. I really appreciate it.😃

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