SFL {Th:2}Chap 12 parts 1 & 2 pg42 updtd 9/1/13 - Page 21

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rajanigandha26

Big Thank you Madam ji for coming back. I thought you have forgotten about your FFs and you crazy fans.
One more bigger thank u for this two in one double dhamaka. Giving two parts together.πŸ€—
Lovely chapters. Loved AshNi fight and then patch up and then moonlight romance. Chandani Raat me tu mere saath hai!☺️
I am still laughing at Nidhi's midnight queestions .OMG! all the best Ashuji. 🀣
Mere sawalon ka jawab do--- from maine pyar kiya.😳

Next update from Hum ho gaye Aapke.
😊


Hi Rajani
Thank you for welcoming me back. It feels good that I was not totally forgotten.
I am so happy that youliked the chapters.
Next is either DC or TTF. I am not sure which yet. I will have to look it up.

Will let you know.πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank you so much Mam
I really appreciate this.😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wonderful update Anu. Thank God you are back, you had us speculating in this thread! πŸ˜›

And you made up for your absence with the two updates, great! πŸ˜ƒ Well, poor Ashni, what an adventurous start to their marriage. And after getting over the initial shock, liked their 2 minute convo, gaining confidence from each other. Ashu has gotten into the protective hubby mode... so Purab beware! 😑

Well, this turned out to be an opportunity for long lost friends to meet... all that was serious, yet funny.And somehow with the friendship angle you have lightened the situation. But still there is tension, there is work to be done to clear Nidhi. And liking Rohan's role and Ashu's dependence on him. πŸ‘πŸΌ Seems like he is going to be doing most of the ground work in getting the proof needed against Purab.

And Ashu can sometimes become blind to a lot of things. Guess its also that he is much older and used to his ways that he does not think of others around him sometimes. So that argument highlighted this and once again loved how Nidhi gave him back. She is a good wife as she knows how to stand up to him and tell him if something is wrong, rather than do a 'yes sir' all the time. And wow, Ashu sang to manofy his bride, so cute and then the little session at night. OMG! what a question Nidhi! haha! Ashu, beware, your wife is full of surprises...

Overall, lovely Anu, the way you mixed the serious with the light moments. And in spite of all the turmoil, life does go on... hope Nidhi is cleared soon. 😳

And so very very glad to have you back...πŸ€—
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shreyalvashni

part 1 was good di welcome back part 2 abhi thodi dar may padungi abhi thak gyi πŸ˜† πŸ˜›


Thanks Sweetie.
But kis baat pe thak gayi?
The chap was not that long.πŸ˜²πŸ˜•
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Anjani9

I will come back with review.

OK. Waiting.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: bc123456

Really enjoyed the read am a big pankha of yours , missed you a lot , however hope that's over and you are back enjoyed the chapter even I was worried initially about poor Nidhi thank god it was ok , in the second part found ashu cute in parts specially his singing , but is being rude to Nidhi was not too pleasant but she gave as good back , loved her in the end with her ashujis ,as usual language perfect ,emotions great really enjoyed it


Hey Doc.
Thanks for the super comments. And please yaar, no phanka business. We are all friends.
I just happen to be lucky enough to have picked the most wonderful forum to become a part of, where the I have met the nicest people possible, who have now become some of my closest friends.
I am so glad that you enjoyed the update.πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aardhan

Wonderful update Anu. Thank God you are back, you had us speculating in this thread! πŸ˜›


Hey Aarti.
It is good to be back.
Sorry yaar i know that everyone was worried, and upset. Some of my friends were also angry and irritated with me. But kya karoon, I really could not come on forum. I had too much going on.
Then to top it all of I lost the chap twice, and had to rewrite three times. Which is the reason why it is so long. I just kept thinking of more stuff and it just kept getting longer. Anyway, I was sick of it by the time I was done. Can you imagine 3 TIMES. I swear, I have a love hate relationship with my PC. It hates me, and I love it.πŸ˜†
And you made up for your absence with the two updates, great! πŸ˜ƒ Well, poor Ashni, what an adventurous start to their marriage. And after getting over the initial shock, liked their 2 minute convo, gaining confidence from each other. Ashu has gotten into the protective hubby mode... so Purab beware! 😑

Thank you. Yes, abhi toh thode bahut adventures aur bhi hai, plus some downs to go with the ups.
Life is not perfect, but we make the best of it, and go on. Which is what this FF is all about.
It is a simple story, not twists, no mystery. Just life.πŸ˜ƒ

Well, this turned out to be an opportunity for long lost friends to meet... all that was serious, yet funny.And somehow with the friendship angle you have lightened the situation. But still there is tension, there is work to be done to clear Nidhi. And liking Rohan's role and Ashu's dependence on him. πŸ‘πŸΌ Seems like he is going to be doing most of the ground work in getting the proof needed against Purab.

See, the one thing I always wanted in KTLk was more characters. We never got that. But you know a person meets so many people in ones life, and duniya itni chhoti hai, you never know who will pop up when.
I really like the IG character. And he will get funnier. I plan to have have him pop up from time to time during the length of this FF. And inspector Komal too. Hers and Nidhi's friendship is just starting. abhi toh I will be writing about their craziness. Nidhi is going to drive Ashutosh crazy.πŸ˜‰

Rohan's character was really underplayed. Here he has a prominent role. I also want to show that like love, friendship too, had age boundaries.
And yes, Rohan is doing the leg work, but the ideas, and suggestions are all from Ashutosh. he is the one who is directing him step by step. You will see how in the next update.πŸ˜ƒ


And Ashu can sometimes become blind to a lot of things. Guess its also that he is much older and used to his ways that he does not think of others around him sometimes. So that argument highlighted this and once again loved how Nidhi gave him back. She is a good wife as she knows how to stand up to him and tell him if something is wrong, rather than do a 'yes sir' all the time. And wow, Ashu sang to manofy his bride, so cute and then the little session at night. OMG! what a question Nidhi! haha! Ashu, beware, your wife is full of surprises...

I am so glad that you saw that. That is exactly what I was trying to portray. Ashutosh is indeed blind when it comes to a lot of things, and sometimes very insensitive. But at the end he adores his young wife, and goes to lengths to try and make her happy.
Glad you liked Nidhi's questions. Par abhi toh shuruaat hai. Next chap is HoneyMoon Chap. Lets see what she does then. I have a few things in mind for that.πŸ˜‰


Overall, lovely Anu, the way you mixed the serious with the light moments. And in spite of all the turmoil, life does go on... hope Nidhi is cleared soon. 😳

Thanks Aarti. I am glad you liked it. Life does go on. That's the biggest reality there is.
And Nidhi gets cleared in next chap. I really don't like to drag things like this for too long.
But Purab, will be back.πŸ˜‰ Although it will be a but later, not just yet.πŸ˜†

And so very very glad to have you back...πŸ€—


Thank you so much Aarti. It feels nice to be back. Like coming home. I really missed you all very much.
Par abhi I have a nice long break. My kids are coming home next week, and will be with me all summer. Than my 25th Wedding anniversary is in June.
So lots is happening. Its going to be fun.πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 12 years ago
Good to see you back. Welcome! and I have a request-please stay here.don't take such long breaks.

coming to the chapter as usual it was lovely. I loved the second part most not for passionate...but for the upheavals little separation brought in their lives. Thank you for this lovely update. waiting for the updates of other FF's.
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Posted: 12 years ago
first of all want a promise that you won't disapear again widout informing!!! itne din...😑😑
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Posted: 12 years ago
GR8 and a super long update it took me almost an hour to complete it.πŸ‘πŸ‘
πŸ˜ƒIt seems like ages to have read your chapter. Ahhh!!! seriously every day I would log in to see if SFL had been posted but i think I had luck today. Thanks for the PM.😊
Wow you write in full detail. I feel as if I am reading some novel. Thanks for compensating by posting two parts today itself.
And as always will be waiting for your next chapter. πŸ˜‰
Which venture are you gonna update next???????


LOL loved this dialogue
"I heard IG Sir, call you 'AMY'. Why? Isn't that a girl's name?"


Oh Lord, he groaned. Why me? What have I ever done to you?

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