OS-HazaaroN KHwahishaiN Aisee CHapter 5-Page14 - Page 10

Originally posted by: saibanu

Originally posted by: Ena292

bahot pehle padha...yaar!! but u know na my grand maa is very sick...forum me jyada aati nehin...aur uper se meri xm...😭

Originally posted by: Anjani9

Thanks for the update..it is very sweet but left with many doubts...👏

Thank you so much Anjani 😃

Reading about Ashu's childhood brought tears...his helplessness an Nidhi's help...are they class mates?

How come she is his junior? am I confused?😕

She is not his junior , I mentioned that they are class mates in 2nd chapters itself

So Nidhi is in love with Ashu right from her childhood but never expressed it and same with Ashu...and Rohan seized the opportunity and expressed it but how Nidhi accepted it knowing that she is in love with Ashu?

Nidhi did not even gave thought about it when Rohan asked her out ...she was unware of ecerything even her emotions towards Ashu .....😛

Now she is silent because she has come to know that Ashu is in love with a girl and not sure who that girl is? or she has realised she is in love but do not know how to express it?

Exactly ...she is in dilemma but soon she will understand what she really need and move on ...😃

slipped back into his warm embrace , to a place where I feel safe and lot better 😳

Please post next update in weekend and we need more updates and FFs after the show end...

Sure <...I will give next chapter by sunday ...already started writing but today and tomorow is bit busy day for me ...lets see when i can finish it up

Thank you once again 🤗

Originally posted by: achiever

i luved the way u have brot past and present together.. tho i missed chapter 3.. bt still Rohan's role got more clear..

Thank you , chapter 3 tell you more about Ashu and Nidhi relationship ..wait I will PM you the link 😃

Ashu's character always manages to garner sympathy and luv of readers.. he is a silent lover.. and a very good human being.. Luved reading childhood Nidhi-Ashu shared..

how the story of Rohan-Nidhi unfolded.. and wat major role Ashu had in it!

so Nidhi had some feelings for Ashu.. bt as it wud happen with any teenager girl.. she got impressed by the dashing boy of the class! *sigh* a mistake bt der aaye durasht aaye..

yes exactly , she was unaware of her feelings but now slowly realizing it ... 😳

luved the last scene a looot! Ashu really understands her well..

looking forward to see how this story progresses!

Thank you so much , I always wanted to write Ashu and nidhi as friends and gradually falling in love .....😳

plz tell me wer is chptr 3!!!

I will Pm you ...😃

Thank you so much dear for liking my SS 😃

Originally posted by: achiever

I luved chptr 3 the most...

Thank you so much dear 😃

it brot out so many different shades of both Ashu and Nidhi..

i read the chptr 4 first bt now tht i read chptr 3 i cud see the warm f'shp thy shared.. and the deep man Ashu is..

Yes , Thats why I said Chapter 3 is more about AShu and Nidhi 😉

his past with his baba was heartwrenching.. and his pain at not being able to tell Nidhi tht he loves her.. a lot.. makes my heart cry!

me tooo 😔

really beautifully written chapter...nice choice of words.. simple and yet potently describing the state of thr mind..brilliant!👏

Thank you so much dear 😃

Nidhi's slow realization tht may b thr f'ship had a deeper meaning thn she had believed.. may b wat was with Rohan was not at all love! I liked it...

so now thy r stepping onto something beautifull.. good! Want to see thm together soon...

this story is more abt thm coming closer emotionally rather thn physically!

Nice blend of past and present.. and i really really luved the castle and thief story!⭐️

Yes , gradually Nidhi realizing that Ashu is not only friend but he is someone more than that ...I am working on next chapter , not getting much time to spend ...I will try to give as soon as possible 😃

But Thank you so much for liking and giving such nice review , means a lot 😳