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Originally posted by: swati62

Loved everything about the FF but would like more romance and lighter storyline.

Originally posted by: Cherishh

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mujhe comment karne ke baad mein aisa hi laga😳...still I feel that I am not able to put it in a much proper way😛

Of all, she deserves more than that..haina😳

Originally posted by: Cherishh

Gonna miss ur updates, ur AshNi, their love...do come back soon with another wonderful piece...

Originally posted by: Anjani9

Manisha, will respond in the evening.

Originally posted by: achiever

aaah.. jaldi jaldi dena.. i know it looks like a question paper!😆😆😆😆

Originally posted by: Anjani9

I know am late, will give today..🤔

Originally posted by: Anjani9

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Originally posted by: achiever

okay friends.. as u all know i m still trying my hands as a writer.. and m still pretty much novice at it and still learning things!

The ease with which you wrote JKBH and SKYIK, do not feel you are novice...may be you have to sharpen your skills a bit...

hence, i have decided to take a break and brush up my skills before i come back with another story..

You are allowed to take a break but not too long...just few days...

Before tht, I need some feedback on "Sadka Kiya".. story..

Firstly, due to lack of time and other things this story didnt unfold exactly as i had intended with my original story plot idea.. (reasons wer many and varied) so i had to cut short on the plot and make it rather simple..

JKBH is too long and this is too short...taking into consid...the scope that is possible in this story...

So the first and foremost question:

1. Did u find the story too simple and straightforward. Was it too high on emotional drama rather thn a substantial story?

To start with I did not find the story simple...you have opened the plot with too many questions...but liked the way it started and slowly unfolded...still have many questions like what is the reason behind selection of Nidhi by Ashu's father..and why Ashu agreed for marriage...etc. But no complaints...like the story..it is not simple, it has substantial story but could have been longer...

and i have certain questions tht if u answer wud help me immensely with my nxt story..

please.. b frank and honest in ur opinion.. criticisms always welcome.. thy will make sure i will improve..

I am frank because want better story next time...

2. Wat was more impressive story or characters?

I found story and characters both impressive...love between Ashu and Nidhi...relation between different characters...though they do not like each other to start with, how Ashu and Nidhi have stared doing small things and caring for each other...thinking about other person more...

3. Was the story plot okay for u or u felt it a bit dry and unintersting?

The story plot is very interesting...feel you did not unfold the whole story...but rather kept some parts of it hidden...from the begining to end...it is like a suspense story...enjoyed this style..

4. Did u find the romance quotient too high and story substance too low?

Romance and story are in equal quantity...

5. Do u like the way i bring on scenes betn Ashu Nidhi?

Yes...very cute and sweet...more than the romance...their care for each other...

6. did u find the end justified?

Expected some story when Nidhi was carrying and Ashu taking care of her and the baby...

7. Wat do u like or dislike most abt my style of writing?

Have already commented that you have managed to keep it like suspense...but enjoyed reading it...

I hope u will help me out with these questions and i appreciate all the effort and time tht u wud put in from ur busy lives...😳

thnk u sooo much for everything friends..🤗