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Posted: 12 years ago
I wish this update is of 2 parts...and we need epilogue...
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Posted: 12 years ago
achiever very beautiful part.You describe their house was beautiful.And truely they are made for each other.Their shaan ki sawari scooty !and loved their journey of love too.Fab ss with fab ending.Just enjoyed each and every bit of it
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Posted: 12 years ago
You have come up with different AshNi...different way of falling in love...Enjoyed reading your update...
AshNi have done so much for each other...
Why Ashu has gone to his father leaving Nidhi? It was not very clear...
Please give epilogue...
When are you planning your next one...
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Posted: 12 years ago
thnk u soo much for ur love and support.. without it this AshNi wernt possible!
Yes.. i too felt i rushed on with the last chapter.. tht shud've been actually two chapters.. I m thinking on giving an epilogue.. bt jst back from my mini-vacation.. bt will try and post it before this forum gets closed.. and if u all r still intrstid in an epilogue..
for now.. will b back with individual replies for this chapter and the second last chapter...
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tc..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hello Ji ,

I could not read your chapter , As i was vacationing ...Will read it now and give proper review by evening and I want epilogue ... Please Please and New FF too 😛😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: saibanu

Hello Ji ,


I could not read your chapter , As i was vacationing ...Will read it now and give proper review by evening and I want epilogue ... Please Please and New FF too 😛😉

mee too!😆 will b waiting...😳
epilogue soch rahin hoon... new FF pata nahi!😆
bt thnk u soo much.. plz send me links of ur FF..😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: alkaparmart

very beautiful part.You describe their house was beautiful.And truely they are made for each other.Their shaan ki sawari scooty !and loved their journey of love too.Fab ss with fab ending.Just enjoyed each and every bit of it
--thnk u soo much😳 i really liked thr house.. wished thy cud stay thr.. bt it was a small 1 room kitchen.. and ashu cant let his wife live in tht..😳!
Oh my my,me and my curiosity.Just get sometime and read the chap.I am just watching a film with my own eyes.Nidhi is totally brave and daring baaz girl.And mr Mathur what a powerful but hsmeless man.Trying to dealing with this girl.Oh man,he didn't know Nidhi?She can break his reputation like a cards down.I just love their convo and specially Nidhi's answer.
--Nidhi is a silent warrior.. an intelligent girl.. bt i like her sensitivity too!😳 The way she dealth with Ashu and his past and pain is really praiseworthy!
Ashutosh again in dilemma whom to support?
We knew he was going to choose Nidhi.. bt still his inner fight was wat v needed to see.. tho i cudnt put it as i had wished.. bt still.. his character is fascinating because he is a good man!😳
and again their kiss.Lovely past of the chap.Tere kurti da main button sonhiye.Nidhi and ashu's love before seperation.I just love it.they spend as much time tiogether.And again Nidhi got justice.
--I luv thr slow and silent romance.. ashu is more vocal and approaching here.. Nidhi doesnt open up easily.. it was Ashu's charm tht she started trusting him and it went to the extent tht she supports him!😳
Ashu's dad's true face come out behind the curtain and ashu come to knew his father very well.
--I wanted to put a bit more abt his dad.. esp abt Ashu Vs Dad.. hopefully if i come up with an epilogue i mite b able to incorporate it!😳
Smart guy gave his regignation and arranged all the economical status in his own hand.
--I luved tht! He knew wat he had to do.. and he did the rite thing!😳
And Here nidhi again yes and no chakkar.
Nidhi ki naa main bhi haan hai!😳
Saree always being good part of your ss/ff/os.[just i couldn't decide it] and ashu's statement,"you are beautiful,very beautiful." i just fallen in love with this character.I want to give long feed back but for some more days you will have to manage with short comment.sorry thanks for the beautiful chap.
I can understand..Thnk u soo much again.. so how was ur daughter's exams?

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Cherishh

Hiii! so hows the baby doing?😛.. will answer u PM and plz upload the pics!😳
Alrite...me going crazy for sure with the turn of events...my Ashu is back..awww love his care and he even being stuck b/w his father and Nidhi, he went with the right thing at that time and he wanting to approach his father with the same was so nice...but what he faced for that was so unexpected, but glad that he finally had understood things around...gosh his father is really egoistic or say oppurtunistic and self-centered for sure. Loved the way Ashu handled things around his father by putting him in a fix to let him go without an issue for the time being I guess..as he is not going to leave AshNi so easily I feel. Happy to have AshNi together again trying to start a new life, though they would have to face many hurdles but they would overcome all of them with their togetherness but how is what I am waiting to read.
--v knew Ashu wud do the right thing.. and i luv the way Nidhi made him realize tht he needs to act.. he canno forever lay in his father's shadow.. and Ashu's father has different shades to his personality and i wanted to bring soem more shades in.. bt unfortunately ran out of time! Bt nevertheless.. v did c a diffrnt side of him in last chapter.. bt he remains a self-centered man.. he remains a villain.. and its not his wicked ways tht makes Ashu a hero.. its Ashu's goodness tht makes him a hero! Luved Nidhi's unconditional support! tho she still cudnt admit openly tht she luvs Ashu bt v all know she luvs him!😳
yes u wer rite.. he didnt let AshNi live easily.. so heres he again in last chapter.. i m planning to bring him in epilogue too!😳

The encounter between Nidhi and Mr. Mathur was cool..the way Nidhi wasn't giving in and not being weak though she knows the power of Mathur was what was awesome...I guess he isn't used to counterbacks...
wat stumped Mr. Mathur was her silent rebellion! she is not hot headed.. she is an intelligent opponent.. and i guess Mr. Mathur heavily underestimated her power!😳 Her strength is Ashu!👍🏼

All the AshNi moments were to be cherished..their arguments, fights, teasings and lovely calm and serene time spend together and their romance were beautifully written..loved them a lot..hoping that they understand their feelings soon..and pretty excited to read more about their this new journey together

thr romance is cool... wish i cud've written more abt thr journey!

anyways thnk u sooo much... i m still waiting for ur review on last chapter.. eagerly!!😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: harsha6

awesume is d only wrd to define dis update...
u r a grrrt writer..
luvd it to d core :)

thnk u sooo much harsha!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: saibanu

OMG Manisha ,this one such beautiful chapter , you write so nicely, I am loving this ASHNi ,they are so adorable...GOSH , I never get tired reading about them...so nicely written 👏

---thnk u sooo much...

Nidhi's frustration and ashu's helplessness is very well written ..Nidhi is one brave woman ,between the two of them i feel Ashu the weaker one ,he is soft ,warm and one can easily love him but Nidhi is truly shreni ...😳

---Yes... Ashu is emotionally weak.. Nidhi is sensitive.. bt she can handle her emotions well.. and knows wen to take right step.. she is a silent and strong supporter of Ashu! and I luv Ashu.. for his inherent good qualities.. he mite seem weak at first look bt he is not.. its jst tht he is weakens wen it comes to luv!Embarrassed
And romance ☺️...Ashu is so bold and very innovative 😉😆😆...kissie for each and every bruise .i tuned out like red tomato when i was reading that part ...😆
--😆I luv thr romance.. thr attraction is pretty apparent.. and thy r so bold in accepting tht!Blushing
Mr Mathur is very shameless and manipulative , good that Ashu saw true colors of his father ...really liked the way Ashu came back to his dear wife its sounded like "DO hell with your money ,I am off to my wifey " ...hayeee hayeee,this is so romantic ...
Ashu - Mr. Mathur ka r'ship ..i wanted to explore more.. Mr. Mathur's character really fascinates me.. he is disgusting no dbt abt tht.. bt still he wants Ashu its like Mathur-Nidhi's war for Ashu!😆
Now , I am waiting to see more and more romance and the way there bond grow deeper with each passing day
Truly magical, ⭐️
waiting for next part , come back soon ...😃

thnk u sooo much.. hope u will like the last chapter..Embarrassed

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