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Originally posted by: deepali.rock

U dnt sleep??

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

Awesome-Awesome-Awesome Manni di...!!! This was something that is known as stupendofabulously fanstastic...! For me, for the first time ever, the story n script has overshadowed any kind of intimacy... I love reading romance, but I didn't care a damn, if there wasn't any intimacy... But, yeah, that was the most important ingredient to pull the story forward... This is exactly the pace I love the story to move... Neither any fast, nor any slow... Absolutely perfect!

--wow! such a long reply😃😃.. i m humbled.. **secretly dancing😆***yes.. me too love romance.. intimacy doesnt really matter to me.. bt still i believe romance and intimacy go hand in hand.. in fact attraction has its own charm of romance.. and it doesnt necessarily always mean only a physical thng..😳 and yes.. i luv this pace.. keeping it a short story has made me pick up the pace of the story to rite degree.. 😛.. tho i have to constantly remind myself.. this is a short story.. some fixed chapter story.. 😳

Their bitter banter had itself a tinge of sweetness... A sweetness, that wasn't visible or tangible to each other, but was really felt in the story... The eagerness in Ashu in the morning, to see where Nidhi is, was so like a person, who has enough space for the other person to stay in his heart... This entire update, I felt was dedicated to Ashu's initiatives... How he sat with her in the garden near those bushes, dropping her to her workplace, right at the gate, inspite of her curt denies, was awesome...

--yes **sigh**..the sweet little things tht thy do for each other unknowingly.. its pretty sweet!😳.. Ashu's eagerness or even Nidhi's looking at silent Ashu from corner of her eyes in the garden... or even feeling a bit bad for the first time at hurting him.. inspite of everything she did cook him some healthy food and he did pick her up from the busstop..😆 its subtle yet very potent.. and v can feel the vibe thts building betn thm..😳.. Regarding Ashu, v havent really seen wats going on in his mind and heart.. yet.. v can see him falling for Nidhi with all those small initiatives tht he took.. Haaiyyyeee! he is adorable

Although, Nidhi is a hard nut to crack, yet I felt her a 'lil, innocent girl' who would give in to the strong urges of Ashutosh... Ashutosh leaving the steering wheel for her was so cute... And oh! Special mention to- ''Trying to hide me?'' on her putting her Mangalsutra under her kurti, was super cute n I loved it to the core...

--yes.. thrs a small innocent girl tht surfaces from beneath the mask of tht smart girl.. and Ashu has caught her tht real self unawares for more thn once now.. everything betn thm is going on in subconscious mind.. neithr of thm is aware of it fully rite now.. and yes.. oh tht dialogue.. was sooo sooo adorable.. my fav one! Always reminds us of how charming Ashu is.. and his smile.. again. .haaayeee! and Nidhi's gesture to put it under her kurti was cute.. she wants it to b secretive!😉 Has she realized the significance of it!😛

Hehe! Sugar! Ashu I guess, found it cute... But, sooner he realised, what the actual truth is all about... She isn't all that, what he had thot n said her of... That was a turning point...
--yeah.. Sugar took a completely different meaning..😆 i luved the way he was stumped and cudnt stop himself smiling at tht!😆..

Ashu's father- Ashu's n then Nidhi's convo was a revealing part... That seemed to be so clear that, something is wrong with this man... Either he doesn't likes Ashu or keeps quite high standards for bothe these newly weds to reach there... Whatever it was, didn't seem like a real father...

--a lot is wrong with this man.. had this chapter been complete.. more wud've been revealed abt Ashu and hsi father's relation.. bt koi nahi.. nxt chapter will explore Ashu's past.. again it is a short story hence no dwelling on any plot longer thn its required..😳..

Nidhi defending herself upstairs, while packing was again a mystery that would be revealed later... She bit him... Gosh dammit! Ashu must have been so furious..!

--I like this Nidhi a lot.. she is a colorful character.. it will b revealed y she is acting docile infront of h er mom and thn she laughs abt it!😆 This girl is something!😆 and the most funniest part in this whole update was tht she bit Ashu.. OMG! I mean.. who can dare tht.. or rather have heart to bit our darling yummilicious Ashu! Gosh!☺️ Ashu's reaction was million dollars!😆😆😆

Ritu's mother kept her busy all the while, was getting on Ashu's nerves to watch, n then his retort, taking Nidhi away, was awesome... Musy have watched her Aunt's face... :D

--😆😆 see Ashu is already getting into tht hubby mode..😉.. Aunt-Nidhi's chemistry is something to look forward to!😆

Ashu frankly asking her about wassup, n then turning everything into an intmate moment, where Nidhi unknowing gave in to the desires, shows, she needs it, but her past n present doesn't lets her... The way, she finally came out of his hold n cried in the restroom, shows, she needs a let out... Something... Some grief is there, that needs to be pull out by somebody... But who...? Her struggles to damn everthing that let her give in to him was written n portrayed very well... There, ashu being expremely worried hearing her sniffles, made him think seriously that something has made her like this n how she hates these things... He actually felt sorry for his deeds... I must say, he really irresistable... Who would not love such a lovely man... Let the looks be aside... The man he is insides, itself makes him so ogleworthy... I can fall for such a man hundreds of times in my life... ;)

--oh! a part of Ashu thts so hidden from everyone around him.. its only Nidhi thts able to bring out tht Ashu.. and makes us drool on him.. i really was touched wen he asked if she was abused.. i mean he really cared a lot abt Nidhi.. even unknowingly.. abt he cared.. it is definitely going to affect Nidhi... i mean who can resist such charming man..😆.. and yes.. she realizes she has this need.. this desire.. and he is awakening thm!😳

the breakdown of Nidhi infront of Ashu, pushing n Hitting him hard with all her mights, was the last amoung the straws of her defence to now show herself out to him, what she is...

Nidhi is gaurded.. and its hard to open up wen one is so very much gaurded .. i think her reaction was natural.. and Ashu's concern bowled her down.. and made her open up!

But this Ashu is yaar! What to tell... He so lovingly took her to the pool, immercing her feet in the cool water, trying to relax her down... Her finally getting over her breakdown, swimming to her her last might, n then clinging on to his chest to relax was very-very sweet... But then, she realised the serenity of the place... N there she saw one layer of this multi-layed man peeling off... He wasn't here for the women in swimsuits, but for the peacefulness.. That was incredibly b'ful...

Asu was sweeting pestering her.. caring urging in his gentle voice.. and tender actions.. and Nidhi too is seeing a dffrnt Ashu behind tht mask.. for wat he is inside.. and not for wat he shows outside.. he is a deep man!😳

N aah! The last part, has taken the entire cake... So both are orphans... Nidhi indeed is playing a dangerous game... But, yeah! Thats right on her part... The way she had to go through, her freedom n independence was the utmost priority... But her defences are strong, yet, Ashu's words are true, u never know men's ego, which can go the levels of violence... So true... But yeah! In the meanwhile, she admitted the truth, he was an exception, who could get her off-gaurd... All in total, she had finally bare her heart to him... Ab now, Ashu ki baari...

--right its a red flag.. Nidhi was rite in her place.. bt its a dangerous world.. and anything can happen.. i was touched by his concern.. bt now Nidhi knows he is thr.. bt wud she rely on him?

So finally Ashu will have a meal with his father after 20 years... Waiting-waiting-waiting...

--hmmm.. something pretty intriguining na...😛 .. i luv to keep readers pondering abt soemting at the end..😃

I wish, I could be there, n would have done the chores 4 u, so that u could write as fast as u cud, so that we could get the update as fast as u cud... Anyways, m desperately waiting 4 the update... Plz-plz-plz do update quickly... It seems, I can't wait...

😆.. sweets.. chores and studying.. its lot actually.. bt i was sick so cudnt write this week.. bt from nxt week.. one update per week.. lengthy and substantial enuf.. i will try!😳

PS:- the character space in my moby is almost over, n have realised, have written so much in review... I hope, havn't bore u a lot... I think itne saare reviews nahi dene ka quota poora kar diya...

Originally posted by: saibanu

What a beautiful writing , I am simply in love with this SS ...this ASHNI touched me to the core , there is something in them which is making me love them so much ...Godd !! I am in love with his SS , totally !!

Just too good 👏

--thnk u buddy.. thnk u soo very much.. this AshNi r dffrnt and yet thy r soo very romantic.. and yes.. i m luving this AshNi too! currently in confusion who i luv more Nidhi or Ashu!😆

This mixture of emotions , He hate her but still he want to love her , his hatred and also somewhere he is falling for her is beautifully written ...And nidhi's reaction to this sudden intimacy is very well written , yes she sensed that he is different from all , from everyone she knew till now ..he perfectly know how to dwell deep into her heart and touch most delicate string of her heart ...😳

--Ashu's plight is cute..😆..and Nidhi's reaction to his kisses was cute too.. i mean.. how can a man suddenly make a hole thru ur defences and suddenly take a very important place.. i mean how! and yet it happened!.. and thts very romantic.. thr encounters.. thr banters... .. thr is sweetness in thr hatred too.. and knowing thr real selves.. its getting more sweeter!😃 aaah..**beating heart❤️❤️***

The way she got up and covered him with duvet ,shows her care for him.even her hatred dissolving bit by bit 😊

she has sensed something different in him already.. and she is reacting accordingly tho she mite like to believe he is not tht important to her still....

I like these small little fights you write , you are master in writing this Nok jhoks in such cute way ..Nidhi is really a junglee billy , ready to pounce on Ashu whenever she get a chance 😆😆

--i soo like this junglee billy esp wen he comes near she is ready to pounce.. not tht.. Ashu doesnt get wat he wants..😉.. he stakes his claim in his own way!☺️

Ashu is surely turning into protective hubby , he is already thinking to comfort who badmouthed Nidhi ...Realy liked when Ashu dragged Nidhi along with him when her mom asked her to help Ritu . loved ashu all over gain 😳

he is not aware wat he is getting into!😆😆.. he is following his heart.. and not mind.. .. I wish Nidhi had not interrupted him in confronting her colleagues.. i wanted to see how rowdy he can go!😆

" I am an orphan" this single line spoke lot of things , its not just that she lost her parents but also means she did not had anyone to call her own ...everyone abandoned her in one way or the other . i could clearly feel her pain 😔

aww.. tht was really.. very touching.. and the way she stopped and waited for his response.. tells us how innocent and child-like she is at heart.. she jst wants to play hard and strong so she doesnt get hurt.. in thr somewhere she is still tht innocent child who wants her world to b happy and blissful.. has she ever dreamt of her prince charming.. she mite not have allowed herself ever.. will she realize who she has got?

Now eager to read about what will happen next

Loved Loved Loved loved ...N times ...This is truly a beautiful story 😃 Waiting for next part ...so eagerly 😃

thnk u again sooo very.. much...🤗🤗🤗

Read that you are not well , take care dear ...get well soon !

🤗i m doing well now..bt my hubby thinks i shud rest.. hence he refrains me from coming here.. bt i sneaked in today to reply.. 😆

Originally posted by: shreyalvashni

Great ff dear just loved this story hope u will give us next chapter soon

Originally posted by: alkaparmart

achiever,i just loved this chap.In whole chap i heard the story of abuse girl.But loved her strenth and strongness of mind.What one girl want in her life?happy and peaceful life.But here the girl [Nidhi] is orphan and that too working like slave and dher sare sapane apni zindagi ke liye apni khushiyo ke liye.I just remembered the story of Syndrella here.

--yes.. her story is a sad story..bt she didnt let tht b her destiny.. she is writing her own future.. and fighting for it.. she is a strong girl! A brave girl!👏 Cant blame her for the way she has become..😳

But one word i loved lot is Sugar.One word and diff of meanings.By this chapter i even don't agree that nidhi had an affair with any of the.

--😆 tht stumped Ashu na.. i luved the way he pondered abt Sugar.. a lot of left unsaid betn thm.. and yet thy understand each other sooo well.. 😳 thy did have misconception abt thr boyfriends..😆 and thy caught the other one pretty easily on tht!😆

Ashu and his kii.Oh god he just loved to kiss her and as much as hating her.But i think he started to take care and to look after her.I think he loved to watch her and to go back with her.

yes.. he simply luvs to kiss her.. i think he is getting addicted..😉.. bt yes.. thr is something more to his care and concern for her..

But unlike their family.Watching further for ashu's story

From wer Ashu's real feelings root will b revealed in further chatpers.. i luv this mystery called Ashu..

.. I like the chap bec of woman power and nidhi's courage to face the society.looking forward to the story line.

yes.. Nidhi stands for today's woman.. who knows how to take care of thmslvs and yet she is a tender woman somewthere.. who is as vulnerable to tht care and tenderness as any female species on this earth wud b..😳 i think thts y we relate and sympathize with this Nidhi soo much..😳

Originally posted by: Anjani9

Will give my review tomorrow...Thank you for the update..