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hey manisha di... read both the chapters and they wer superb !!!

Awesome-Awesome-Awesome Manni di...!!! This was something that is known as stupendofabulously fanstastic...! For me, for the first time ever, the story n script has overshadowed any kind of intimacy... I love reading romance, but I didn't care a damn, if there wasn't any intimacy... But, yeah, that was the most important ingredient to pull the story forward... This is exactly the pace I love the story to move... Neither any fast, nor any slow... Absolutely perfect!

Their bitter banter had itself a tinge of sweetness... A sweetness, that wasn't visible or tangible to each other, but was really felt in the story... The eagerness in Ashu in the morning, to see where Nidhi is, was so like a person, who has enough space for the other person to stay in his heart... This entire update, I felt was dedicated to Ashu's initiatives... How he sat with her in the garden near those bushes, dropping her to her workplace, right at the gate, inspite of her curt denies, was awesome...

Although, Nidhi is a hard nut to crack, yet I felt her a 'lil, innocent girl' who would give in to the strong urges of Ashutosh... Ashutosh leaving the steering wheel for her was so cute... And oh! Special mention to- ''Trying to hide me?'' on her putting her Mangalsutra under her kurti, was super cute n I loved it to the core...

Hehe! Sugar! Ashu I guess, found it cute... But, sooner he realised, what the actual truth is all about... She isn't all that, what he had thot n said her of... That was a turning point...

Ashu's father- Ashu's n then Nidhi's convo was a revealing part... That seemed to be so clear that, something is wrong with this man... Either he doesn't likes Ashu or keeps quite high standards for bothe these newly weds to reach there... Whatever it was, didn't seem like a real father...

Nidhi defending herself upstairs, while packing was again a mystery that would be revealed later... She bit him... Gosh dammit! Ashu must have been so furious..!

Ritu's mother kept her busy all the while, was getting on Ashu's nerves to watch, n then his retort, taking Nidhi away, was awesome... Musy have watched her Aunt's face... :D

Ashu frankly asking her about wassup, n then turning everything into an intmate moment, where Nidhi unknowing gave in to the desires, shows, she needs it, but her past n present doesn't lets her... The way, she finally came out of his hold n cried in the restroom, shows, she needs a let out... Something... Some grief is there, that needs to be pull out by somebody... But who...? Her struggles to damn everthing that let her give in to him was written n portrayed very well... There, ashu being expremely worried hearing her sniffles, made him think seriously that something has made her like this n how she hates these things... He actually felt sorry for his deeds... I must say, he really irresistable... Who would not love such a lovely man... Let the looks be aside... The man he is insides, itself makes him so ogleworthy... I can fall for such a man hundreds of times in my life... ;)

the breakdown of Nidhi infront of Ashu, pushing n Hitting him hard with all her mights, was the last amoung the straws of her defence to now show herself out to him, what she is...

But this Ashu is yaar! What to tell... He so lovingly took her to the pool, immercing her feet in the cool water, trying to relax her down... Her finally getting over her breakdown, swimming to her her last might, n then clinging on to his chest to relax was very-very sweet... But then, she realised the serenity of the place... N there she saw one layer of this multi-layed man peeling off... He wasn't here for the women in swimsuits, but for the peacefulness.. That was incredibly b'ful...

N aah! The last part, has taken the entire cake... So both are orphans... Nidhi indeed is playing a dangerous game... But, yeah! Thats right on her part... The way she had to go through, her freedom n independence was the utmost priority... But her defences are strong, yet, Ashu's words are true, u never know men's ego, which can go the levels of violence... So true... But yeah! In the meanwhile, she admitted the truth, he was an exception, who could get her off-gaurd... All in total, she had finally bare her heart to him... Ab now, Ashu ki baari...

So finally Ashu will have a meal with his father after 20 years... Waiting-waiting-waiting...

I wish, I could be there, n would have done the chores 4 u, so that u could write as fast as u cud, so that we could get the update as fast as u cud... Anyways, m desperately waiting 4 the update... Plz-plz-plz do update quickly... It seems, I can't wait...

PS:- the character space in my moby is almost over, n have realised, have written so much in review... I hope, havn't bore u a lot... I think itne saare reviews nahi dene ka quota poora kar diya...

Originally posted by: deepali.rock

Hi di...great to knw that u r feeling better..incredibly awesome chap...will not delve into details now, have exams nxt week...so review after dat...

aalll the best gal!😳 Do well.. Best wishes always with u!😳

Originally posted by: swati62

Loving ur storyline.

--thnk u...😳 i was apprehensive abt it initially.. bt whooosh..it was appreciated!😆

Just don't keep ASHNI as the underdogs for to long.

--thy r protogonists thy cant b underdogs!😳.. wait for the rite moment!😳.. lot of things yet to b unfolded!😳

They seem to have had a bad start in life so happy times would be good. Waiting for ur next chapter.

--yup.. ab saat mein hai to happy times kahin se bhi aa hi jayenge na...😳..

Originally posted by: ZedZee92

hey manisha di... read both the chapters and they wer superb !!!

love the way the SS is progressing and love the way their bond is developing... eager to read further... pleasee continue soon...👏

thnk u soo much... thr bond is unique.. (jo ki har AshNi story mein hota hai.. AshNi hai to it has to b unique!😆).. bt yahaan pe sahi mein thoda alag hoga!😳

thnk u sooo much for all ur lovely replies.. read thm all.. will read thm again to reply...

jst lost Aazeen's reply to due to my stupid keystroking on lappy! grrr.. me! it happens wen u jumble betn two different types of keyboards of lappy and cmoputer.. huh! nways.. will b back with my replies... tc..

Great ff dear just loved this story hope u will give us next chapter soon