Originally posted by: hilarious44
Hey Sweets...😛
hey sweetie (In my ff, nids calls ashu Sweets while he calls her sweetie, but i m not overdoing it. so, no one commented on it i guess - oh i know, its not that good, but sweetheart and chweetu have already been used in other ffs so had to come up with this - darling has been overdone and i dont fancy it much)
To begin with please accept my sincere apologies for the delay but the things were not in my control...SORRY...
oh dont say sorry, I completely understand - well, now that u have said that, i hope u will return the favor (If u still donno wat i mean, look at my responses to the comments before this)
Another rocking update...written to perfection...Hats off...
Thank you dear, bas aisi tareef milti rahe toh aur chahiye hi kya
First scene...the continuation of cliffhanger...it was indeed full of suspense...👏
Nidhi trying to escape but Ashu sensing it was great..👏.
Ashu's self thought...loved it...👏
Oh i am glad i could maintain the suspense for a while 😉
well, i just wanted to show how tuned in AshNi are to each other. they sense things abt each other
"Mujhe jaanne ka haq hai ke meri biwi mujhe bina bataye gynaec ke paas kyun gayi thi ya nahi?" ...He must have been hurt..😭
but obviously
Cant tell u how much i loved the convo in cabin scene...Ashni were just wonderful...
Nidhi sensing ashu's yearning for the child even without his confession...😳
Her confidence that both child n career can be managed easily when Ashu is with her was so so adorable...😳
On the other hand ashu willing to wait for baby realizing nidhi is young n has a fresh career...👏
Yes they are crazily in love and each only thinks of the other and they take it for granted that it's the most natural and expected thing to do.
frankly i feel the show's nids is insensitive to ashu sometimes - i mean, its not that she doesn't know that ashu is 43 and moreover an orphan. During the early days of their affair, when anjie pointed out the impropriety of such a relationship, that time she was not only ready, but eager to accept him as he was, then y did she not realize the consequences?
All seemed so logical...could see their pure n sincere love...selfless Ashni...i wish the show had something like this...
i m glad it seemed logical.
@bold - sigh
So the fertility checkup...lets c what u have in store for us...Very very eager to know😲..
sure, dekhte jaaiye
Car convo was a wonderful part too...😃
even i found it cute
Ashu planning the whole thing was hilarious...😆
Yes he is new at all this
Nidhi ka kafi asar ho gaya hai janab pe...Good going handsome..
ab sangat ka asar toh hona hi hai
Ashu n his naughty touch..OMG.😳..just cant explain what my heart goes through reading that...
@bold tell me, what ur heart goes thru dear, i m v. v. eager to know that u know, i need to give it in the right doses in future, so unless i know the symptoms how can i? so, pl. tell me asap.
Nidhi-Tamana convo was sweet😛...Glad nidhi was able to convince her without telling a lie...👏
yes, u c, i am an idealist😉😉😉
Tamana wanting to ask about arman but hesitating was so cute..😳
Just wanted to show some feelings from her side, thats it
The whole scnene at Ashni's place was AWESOME...
Ashni planning the whole Arman-Tamana meeting thing...WOW...👏
Glad Arman-Tamana talked to eachother...The whole love story sounded quite nice n logical...Really happy for Arman...😃
I am so happy it did not look childish or banawati, as i feared.
Arman-Ashu convo...OMG...i loved it so much...Very very well written...Their emotions were so understandable...👏
I m gld i could bring out these emotions properly.
Ashu getting a slap but yar that was worth it...Kya dosti hai...Wah...
yes dosti ke liye kuch bhi - waise armu ne bhi apna badla le liye, u remember how badly ashu often behaved with armu during early ashni relationship?
Lets see when Arman-Tamana lovestory gets a happy ending...😳
oh not every love story has a happy ending, sigh, phir bhi dekhte hain main kya kar saakti hoon.
Hmmm...
Now the Medical fraternity party...😃
Nidhi must be looking really pretty n graceful...😳
she is looking like the perfect wife of a renowned neurosurgeon...Ashu ji to clean bold ho gaya hon gay...😆😆
@pink - well i m very bad at describing clothes and looks, so i took shelter of that line.
Ashu entering with Nidhi n Mallika on his either side was quite filmy😉..But i liked it alot..
haan yaar kya karoon, grew up liking BR & Yash Chopra kinda films, so, couldnt help it
Ufff i could feel my blood boiling listening to the statements made by LOG about Ashu😡😡😡😡😡...very very well written lines...Hated n loved them at the same time..😃😡
Ashni handling the situation was so so good...👏👏
@bold - that was my intention, since this may be the only time u can see the 'log' factor, i wanted to show the worst kinda things the log can say, Isnt this the type of comments passed by people who are slightly inebricated under influence of alcohol (that's y i mentioned the drinks in their hands)? Andd as dr. shergill himself said later, "I guess hum aaj kal itni gandagi dekhte hain ki hamari aankhon me kachra bhar jaata hai" also, as i mentioned during the self-thought of mallika in the previous chapter, the medical fraternity has been agape with AshMal rumours for a long time, so i hope it looked realistic enough.
@green &bold - oh thank u - its the best compliment i could receive for those lines.
@green - frankly was struck on that scene so the lines from "You really think u trapped me Nidhi?" to "chale Nidhi" was penned by sujata so credit goes to her.
Ashu knew that he needs to keep quiet...Nidhi THE TIGRESS was mindblowing..
Raja-titili touch was AWESOME...👏😳
Well, ashu thought that the situation couldn't be remedied. But nids could not let the matter rest after hearing those nasty comments, so the reaction,
@bold - well i just wanted to show how their love story is taken so positively tby KGH staff, who were actually witness to their story.
LOG finally giving their applause was a great VICTORY for Ashni's love...
Of course, u see, i m very filmy
But yeh last scene mai kya hua...😲
Ashni ko kya pata chala hai jo hamain abhi tak nai pata...😲😲😲
Plzzz disclose THE SECRET....
Sochte rahiye... secret 1-2 din ke baad khul hi jaayega.
All in all...OUTSTANDING chapter...
Very very well written lines...👏
All emotions came out really beautifully..
I loved every bit of it...😳
Thanku so much for giving us such great moments...
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