Originally posted by: deepali.rock
Here is chapter 6 review
Wow Deepali - m super happy
Hi
Hey dear
Finally I am here as promised. Here you go
First things first, first looked at the length of the chap, a long nice chapter is what I want and you gave it. (Actually, didn't bother about the length earlier, but noticed it this time since I was really forward to this update.)
Well, all chapters are almost the same length
You have done a really commendable job here. Whatever we missed on the show, you not only did cover everything up, but did an excellent job at that too. You kept the dignity of each character intact and very much in sync with the characterization.
Thanks a lot dear,
@ this is one of the most valuable compliments i received.
Well starting with mallika's side of the story, felt sad for her. She was a person hopelessly in love, or more of an obsession branded by the 12 year old friendship she had. Felt sad for her, but cannot like her still.
On the show, Mallika always overshadowed AshNi (wheneber she was there), and yet her character was never brought out fully - her pain wasnt shown properly, it came out very funnily sometimes.
@bold, thats exactly my aim - yippee i succeeded
Ashu was commendable over here. The loopholes in his characterization in the show, were covered fully over here. His balancing act of a hubby and friend was just so so nice. I actually had a big grin on my face while reading that part. The feeling at that time was like this is my ashu,felt so much pride at that time, because this was the ashu we all loved and will continue to love.
I m glad you loved Ashu here. The balancing act is very difficult.
@bold Oh really. i m so pleased to know that
@italics - absolutely
The entry was really sweet, with his hand slid around nidhi's waist,just like a newlywed couple. This one action showed his tenderness, love, happiness and the protectiveness he felt for nidhi(as he was actually wary of taking nidhi to mallika's house). The action didn't went unnoticed neither by us nor by mallika. Then settling himself in the two seater sofa along with nidhi actually showed that actions speak louder than words.
@bold - THat is exactly what i wanted to show - so, yippee again.
Just when I was about to think that maybe you have redeemed mallika fully, here came the next shocker, actually not a shocker but her dislike for nidhi came out really bluntly and I really liked that part, reason being firstly that human emotions don't die out that easily and secondly I got a reason to dislike mallika. I actually gave a silent whoop of joy, because no atter how hard I try i cannot like her. Lets see if u can change my perception in the coming updates.
@bold - exactly, she hates nidhi like poison.
Yes people dont change and don't worry you can continue to hate her. I will give u more reasons to hate before (sorry iske aage nahi bolungi)
Nidhi as a wife and companion to ashu was perfect. She didn't want to put ashu on the spot and tried to overlook mallika's behaviour was nice. But why to fear, when ashu is there.
Nidhi is large-hearted and of course, loves Ashu like crazy and its the same for ashu.
A piece of comment for suhasini also. In the show as well as your ff she is shown as trying to get rid of mallika by getting her married to anyone. She doesn't care for her happiness. This was what i felt on the show and in this chapter also. I am glad you kept it intact.
Oh i m so glad u noticed - Why - that u will know in future chapters.
Mallika sort of came back to her character by trying to cling to ashu at the very opportunity she got. Trying to act all innocent after gifting that broken watch,was annoying the hell out of me. But your ashu, actually not your but our ashu, spoke up at the right time. The way he stopped nidhi from putting it on point blank was too too good. He is actually justifying every role of a husband without being under the influence of his friendship. His sense of right and wrong, and acting on it was really an important aspect of this aspect. This was something we missed on the show. And you covered it up beautifully. Loved it.
@ bold - yes, that's Mallika for u, ek mauka nshi gawati gale padne ka.
Yes, he could not let her wear the broken watch right on the day after their marriage.
@red - hello, he is my ashu, i m writing the ff not u. so, mere ashu pe line mat maro warna...😉😉😉
Mallika wanted to bind ashu to the friendship by coercing him to accept the gift. But she wouldn't have expected ashu do that. But what ashu did was bang on. Mallika's expressions must have been worth a watch. Haye, what a seen it was. Ashu taking care that nidhi gets what she deserves as his wife was awesomely explained. Ashu is very clear in his mind about this two women and that is the best part. Was nidhi has that snap. Hip hip hurray.
@bold - u noticed that? great, no one else notice. kept waiting for someone to point it out! u have really made me happy.
Yes mallu never expected ashu to do what he did
Yes, the show's ashu was always confused between NiMal
Ashu stole the show for me or should i say the chapter. Finally, mallika part was over for this chap.
@bold - That was my intention
Then came the early morning chai seen. That was another sweet one. The way naidhi explained why she couldn't get up. So, our nidhi is really naughty haan. Good. Hope to see some naughtiness from ashu also but i guess thoda time lagega.
So happy u liked the variation of chai scene.
Yes, she is very naughty and also smart - knows exactly how to handle angry ashi
naughty ashu? aur ffs me nahi dekha kya
Jitna likha utna post kar diya before my mum comes back. Sorry if i didn't dissect a particular portion.
