This Time Forever: Chap10 parts 1&2 updtd 11/14 pg144 - Page 70

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: turags

finally!!! Good to see Ashu put out of his misery!!! and in Goa..waah ji waah...


and looks like Khushi is on a roll...first dad and now baby brother or sis...cool kid...

nice chapter Anu...👏 and looks like you are getting a good hang of writing "the" scenes...😉


Hey Sujatha. Thanx.
Yep, Goa. I have never been, But was recently reading up on its history
and liked what I read. Maybe will go and visit when I go to India in june.
And as far as getting the "hang"of the scenes.
I don't know I have that down pat as yet, but I am trying.
and The intensity and passion was the needed in this for this reunion.
After 5 years of separation, and all the pain they went through
I had to try and portray the intensity also.😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Libra

HI EVERYONE

I HAVE GOTTEN A LOT OF PM'S REGARDING THIS CHAP.
JUST WANTED YOU ALL TO KNOW
THIS IS NOT THE LAST CHAPTER OF THIS FF
THE STORY HAS SOME MORE WAYS TO GO.
YES THEY HAVE RE UNITED, BUT THAT DOES OT MEAN THAT
EVERYTHING IS FINE. ABHI TOH THEY ARE ON HOLIDAY.
REAL TEST OF THEIR FAITH AND LOVE, AND ALSO REAL LIFE
WILL START WHEN THEY GET BACK HOME.
SO. YOU GUYS WILLBE HAVING MORE TO READ HERE BEFORE I AM DONE.
HOPE YOU WILL BEAR WITH ME.
AND IF YOU ALL WANT ME TO END THIS HERE PLEASE LET ME KNOW.
I AM OK WITH THAT TOO.😃

nooo.. obviously not! he he he..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: achiever

lolz.. she puts it brilliantly.. differently yet brilliantly.. i like her style..its simple bt goes deep into psyche of characters.. and protrays things around thm and within thm so brilliantly...

u put it so differently... gives me feeling tht u feel a bit shy wen u write those scenes.. bt still.. i luv the way u protray those passionate moments..
and thn wen i read my scenes..
it gets me wondering..how many diffrnt ways dffrnt styles to put the same thing..😳


Manisha
I really appreciate the awesome compliment
that you have given to my writing.
I meant a lot coming from you.😳

And yes you are right about me feeling shy. I do.
but This reunion required more on an OOmph factor.
I mean after all the pain and suffering and 5 year separation
the intensity of the passion was the need of the day in this chap.
But There is only so much I can write. So if you notice that while
my FFs do have intimate scenes, there is only One very hot scene per FF.😃

And I owe you a review. Will be writing it shortly, as soon as I finish here.
Edited by Libra - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
After so many posts of "I am waiting" - i was floored by the length of the update. Will give detailed review in a bit.😃
Edited by deepa17 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh atlast u posted it! Great one as always! How cute that khushi nd nishi is! Nd their continuous chattering is fun to read! I thought d seperation will b placed after their marrige also! Bt i was wrong nd i'm happy that i'm wrong! Khushi was able to make her parents close at last,haan! Great! Liked d rain part nd ashu's possisiveness...nd then d thunder make my day! Wah!wah!wah! What a chapter! Enjoyed fully! Pls nw start to write hhgak!pls..pls..pls! This time don't make us wait!! Love u...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vidyasabde

omg ...that was a hot sizzling union ...awesome Ashni love ...concurring every obstacle...Khushi the angel here...is really very much lovable.

Anji ..Rangu...Nishi...Khushi...all with the help of destiny played their part very well. Circumstances , misdeeds , misunderstanding..nothing could stop the Ashni union
loved the chapter Anu. 👏


Thanx Vidya
I am glad that you liked the chap.
And I am glad that you liked rang anji and the kids role here.
You see a story is not all just the main characters
I feel that family and friends should have an important
role to play also. That is why I am stressing the role of the side characters.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: karajekar


absolutely outstanding chap


Thanks Sonali.
I am glad to your comments after so long.
Have missed you sweey.

love the way anji handled every thing between ashni

Thanks. I love Anji and I wanted to show the depth of the friendship between her and Nidhi.
Abhi tak you have read about her support of Nidhi. In the coming chapters you will see
Nidhi's support also, when some issue arises in Anji and Ranga's life.😉

love the way anji convense nidhi for wearing that dress,i was quite happy that nidhi agreed

to were that dress

Nidhi is a pushover for family. You see they are all she had during her separation with Ashutosh.😃


i m so happy that without second taught ,nidhi & ashu wedding tooked place,mujhe toh aisa

lag reha tha ke mallu will make entry & she will spoil every thing,but thank god you dint do that

I didnt feel like prolonging that part. My story is not based on the wedding. Its the story
of how they cope and overcome everything, as a couple and as parents.😃

i was laughing very badly when nishi was telling every thing to khushi ,that papa & mamma

should sleep 2gether 😆

. Kids have a way of putting parents on the spot. specially little ones. They are hard to resist.😆


anji very cleverly manage to take nidhi for the Goa trip ,& there she also manage to keep them in 1 room ,

That was the purpose of the whole trip na? To get them together. And they succeeded.😉


& finally the romance para,you have beautifully very beautifully mange to give us very very very

romantic night ,between ashni

Yes, That was needed here. I don't normally write such intense scenes.😳
I am glad that you liked it. I hope I did not go too overboard.😳


m happy that nidhi finally manage to forgive ashu (i think it was not about forgiving it just about trust the very same person who left her 5 years ago)
now she can lead her life ,without any past baggage ,i hope this time ashu will fullfil all his promise

Yes, you have it. It was never about love. Love, real love(and its my firm belief) never dies. But Love is not always enough either. There is a lot to life that is important also. Trust being one of the most major things. But then again 5 years worth of baggage and mistrust does not go away overnight des it? It takes time and patience along with effort to build up trust after it had been lost. Lets see if Ashutosh will come through, and whether Nidhi will love him enough to believe in him again.😃

just wanted to ask will mallu return back ,to harass trio ,i dont want khushi to be away from ashu
mein nahi chahate ke khushi ke dil mein ashu ke khilaf kuch bhi ho (i thing you will understand what i want to tell you anu kyunki mere paas proper word nahi hai aap ko exp karne ka
over all full chap was mind blowing ,i enjoyed every word

Yes Mallu will be back. But don't worry, no matter what, Khushi will not be affected
Ashutosh and Nidhi will not let her be. Khushi will always adore her Papa.😃


will wait for next chap ,what is next 😊

😃 next HHGA


Thankyoou Sonali for such an awesome review.
I really appreciate it.
I makes my hard work all seem worth it when I get
reviews like this. Makes me want to keep on
writing.
So thankyou once again.


Edited by Libra - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Libra


Thanx for your comment.😃
Although I am a bit disappointed.
i thought that you would have more to say than
just your usual One liners.

Anyway, I am glad you liked the Update.


hey actually have my exams on so just come 2 see updates will comment long as soon as they r done they r till march 18 as then will be a free bird😉

and pll continue the ff
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rajanigandha26

Wow. Intezar ka phal mitha hota hai. 😊Indeed! You compensated for this long wait. Thanks Anu. You made my day. It was such a boring day. now I am cheered up again Fab chapter Anu. You have expressed AshNi's feelings and emotions so well. Loved it.🤗


Thank you Rajani.
I am glad you liked the update
Also happy that I managed to make up for making you wait so long.
That was the purpose of this long chap.😃
Thanx for the compliments. You made my day too.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: bc123456

thanx for the long overdue chapter and what a chapter it was absolutely beautiful👏👏👏 it was really good and like turags said you do write certain scenes with elan my dear enjoyed their finally giving into each other .Loved Khushi and her dramas she has got ashni dancing on her lil finger , hope you will update regularly really , really missed you on the forum hope all your problems are settled and we read more of your work , selfish aren't we but you are one hell of a writer


DOC
I am so glad that You liked the update.
You know even though you only say a few words, but
you manage to make me feel so nice. Thank you for that
and for your awesome compliments. They give me a lot of encouragement to not only
keep writing, but to keep making the effort to write well.
I really appreciate it.😃

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