This Time Forever: Chap10 parts 1&2 updtd 11/14 pg144

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Suvika.

@Suvika.

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Oye ji, aapki toh MIL aayi hui hai, how can u afford to daydream.😆

kahin aisa na ho ki aapki museebat aa jaye.😆

😆 jo aana hain aajaye...i am still going to day dream about this...

All I can say is, you are very brave.👏😆

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BayofSarcasm

@BayofSarcasm

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: Libra

Thank you Sumi.
I am glad that u liked it.
Although ur input made it much better.
Thanks for the suggestions. I hope that
It came out alright.😃
I will update as soon as I can.😳
I really appreciate you encouragement Sumi.
It means a lot to me.
Thankyou.

Anu, it was perfect!

I got to do the easy part, offer suggestions and encouragement.

You are the one who is creating this amazing story and keeping us enthralled. Hats off to you dear.😃

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Anu

@Libra

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: waves

Anu, it was perfect!👏
I got to do the easy part, offer suggestions and encouragement.
You are the one who is creating this amazing story and keeping us enthralled. Hats off to you dear.😃

thanx Sumi

u just say that cause u luv me.😳

but I know how much ur encouragement means to me.😃

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achiever

@achiever

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#64

hiya! so u r on with another FF.. grttt!

I think khushi is really cute.. and i luved tht Nidhi adopted her and tried to move on.. the first half was heartbreaking.. and second...was interesting.. bt frankly it pains my heart to read such heartbreaking stories.. Ashu married Mallu... my heart had shattered into pieces...😆 i m so prejudiced abt Mallu!😆

Ashu deserves a shock of his lifetime... he shattered a poor girl's life.. i wud put it "in a very cruel way!!" Not tht he wasnt punished.. bt on whose cost..?

i wish Nidhi never reveals tht khushi is her adopted child!😈 Let him play hard to get wat he threw away so heartlessly!!😆 Not tht he wasnt true in wat he did.. i jst didnt like the way he did!!!😡

i dont know how else he wud've done it.. bt i didnt like it this way.. leaving his GF in lurch.. and not even thinking once wat happened of her after tht.. as if she jst vanished from his life!! For Nidhi it was justified.. for him it wasnt!

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Anu

@Libra

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: achiever
hiya! so u r on with another FF.. grttt!

I think khushi is really cute.. and i luved tht Nidhi adopted her and tried to move on.. the first half was heartbreaking.. and second...was interesting.. bt frankly it pains my heart to read such heartbreaking stories.. Ashu married Mallu... my heart had shattered into pieces...😆 i m so prejudiced abt Mallu!😆

Ashu deserves a shock of his lifetime... he shattered a poor girl's life.. i wud put it "in a very cruel way!!" Not tht he wasnt punished.. bt on whose cost..?

i wish Nidhi never reveals tht khushi is her adopted child!😈 Let him play hard to get wat he threw away so heartlessly!!😆 Not tht he wasnt true in wat he did.. i jst didnt like the way he did!!!😡

i dont know how else he wud've done it.. bt i didnt like it this way.. leaving his GF in lurch.. and not even thinking once wat happened of her after tht.. as if she jst vanished from his life!! For Nidhi it was justified.. for him it wasnt!

Glad u liked it manisha😳

Yes Ashu made a mistake, and he is dearly paying for it.

But we need to feel sorry for him also. See Nidhi has Khushi. He is all alone.

Not that that excuses the fact the he chose to trust Mallika over Nidhi.

He did ruin her life, but he ruined his more.

and dont worry abhi itni jaldi nahin pata lagega, that khushi is adopted.

But even jab he will find out. Nidhi itni jaldi nahin manne waali.😆

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SSA777

@SSA777

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#66

Anu, when are you posting the next chapter? I just can't wait any more. Soon please...😊

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Anu

@Libra

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: SSA777
Anu, when are you posting the next chapter? I just can't wait any more. Soon please...😊

hi Sha

I promise over the weekend.😃

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saibanu

@saibanu

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#68

I hope khushi wil bring lots of khushi in ASHNi life ..please continue 😃

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rajanigandha26

@rajanigandha26

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#69

👎🏼
There had been no one home other than Mallika, and when she took him to his room, one thing had led to another, and😲 they had ended up sleeping together.

NOooo