This Time Forever: Chap10 parts 1&2 updtd 11/14 pg144 - Page 6

Originally posted by: turags

Anu..this really is fantabulous!!! loved every word of the chap...don't know how you manage so many FFs in one go but Hats Off!!

Originally posted by: pooja.philip3

Anu Di!! You manage to surprise me again!! How much ever I love Ashu, I can never see him with Malika! The first few para's had me frowning.. lekin when Khushi entered and Ashu realised Malika's intentions, I understood, we are here for a treat again! As you wrote, fate has different idea's for everybody. Lets c whats in store for Ashu and Nidhi and the lil one! Loved it again!

Originally posted by: Libra

Thanx Turags.😃

but yeh Kya just a one line comment.

Originally posted by: turags

😆 ok...here goes the longer comment:

1. loved Khushi in this one...her interaction with Ranga...dil jeet liya...

2. loved Nidhi for moving on with her life...although in a different way...

3. Ashu so far 😡 for trusting Mallika more and letting go of his love so easily...😡

4. i want him to tadpofy thinking that Khushi is Nidhi's biological child...at least for some time...

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THANX FOR THE EXPANDED VERSION😆

Agar Ashutosh ko aur tadpaya, to mujhe joote padenge.

but irada to yahi hai. at least for one to two chaps.😆

Edited by Libra - 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Libra

arre yaar i will protect you from all the jootas 😆...you go ahead and tadpofy him as much as you want...i am all for it...infact, i have started dreaming on it...din mein sapna dekhna shuru...😆

Originally posted by: turags

Oye ji, aapki toh MIL aayi hui hai, how can u afford to daydream.😆

kahin aisa na ho ki aapki museebat aa jaye.😆

Originally posted by: turags

arre yaar i will protect you from all the jootas 😆...you go ahead and tadpofy him as much as you want...i am all for it...infact, i have started dreaming on it...din mein sapna dekhna shuru...😆