new shayari @ pg 76- by me - Page 9

@ sujatha . Awesome one 👏

Sujata: good one.. U hv kept right amount of emotions in ur shayari..

Originally posted by: rabzonedge

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Awesome yaar...👏..I will write Ashu's POV...But in 3 stages..as i have thought..B'ful description...

Thank you so much, Divya...looking forward to your take on Ashutosh...am sure it is going to be beautiful...if I may suggest three stages..

1. When Ashu the orphan is adopted by BB
2. Ashu after BB leaves him and before Nidhi comes into his life
3. Ashu's love for Nidhi

Of course, would love to have something on Ashu's pain on losing love just after finding it ( the Kerala epis) and also Ashu's pain at having caused Nidhi pain ( post the Mallika track)

Hope you don't mind my making so many requests...

Originally posted by: busybee..

@ sujatha . Awesome one 👏

Thank you so much, Bhavitha!

Originally posted by: ithasme

Sujata: good one.. U hv kept right amount of emotions in ur shayari..

Thank you Harshal!

Originally posted by: Sujatha.rao

Thank you so much, Divya...looking forward to your take on Ashutosh...am sure it is going to be beautiful...if I may suggest three stages..

1. When Ashu the orphan is adopted by BB
2. Ashu after BB leaves him and before Nidhi comes into his life
3. Ashu's love for Nidhi

Of course, would love to have something on Ashu's pain on losing love just after finding it ( the Kerala epis) and also Ashu's pain at having caused Nidhi pain ( post the Mallika track)

Hope you don't mind my making so many requests...

Not at all sujhatha..Rather it helps me too write thinking these things in mind..surely i will write on all your requests..Thanks for encouragement...😊

Originally posted by: rabzonedge

Not at all sujhatha..Rather it helps me too write thinking these things in mind..surely i will write on all your requests..Thanks for encouragement...😊

Thank u...look forward 😊

Originally posted by: Sujatha.rao

Thank u...look forward 😊

so sweet of you..🤗

Originally posted by: rabzonedge

so sweet of you..🤗

🤗

Verywell written BB... fantastic...

@rabz... I hope you dont mind calling you with this IF name...

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Jo dil ko choota hai...
purani yaadon mein khoyi hoon main
ab baahar aane ki mann hi nahi...